The Heavens Seize the Road of Luck

Entering different worlds, experiencing different lives, and seizing powerful luck, Lin Li knows that strength is the most important no matter where he is, so he just wants to practice, practice, and practice again. Come on, young man, I am optimistic about you.

This is directly reflected by traveling through the first world. The protagonist is a bit of an idiot. Really, this IQ is suitable for a peaceful age like the earth, but not for a world where Gu Wu kills people.

Chapter 75 to Chapter 77, what the hell are you writing about? They were all seriously injured by the protagonist using a bomb, and you are in the same realm as him, and your opponent is only a 25-year-old young man. He does not have the same plug-ins as you, and the protagonist has 80 years of experience in traveling around the world. So you still can't kill him, but you are almost killed by him. In the end, you still rely on the system. Kill the opponent. Don't you think it's poisonous to write like this? Also, your various settings are just patchwork, giving the reader the impression that you have no settings at all and just write whatever comes to mind without an outline. It's a mess. The reason why people still read your books is because you used the name of martial arts to attract a group of people who love martial arts novels. Author, let's not talk about your poor writing skills. The key is to get the settings right. The writing is just average, the plot is watery, and the realm's combat power is a complete mess.

First of all, the author of the main world's practice system has not written clearly and clearly, and will be added bit by bit later. The protagonist himself doesn't feel like a time traveler at all. In the first world, didn't Zhang Sanfeng think of the idea of ​​​​harmony between man and nature and using the outside world? In ancient times, Taoists would have had this kind of thinking, and the protagonist was actually stupid, I don't know, it was too poisonous. Next, because the third world said that I was too floating, I made myself very embarrassed. The protagonist obviously knows the realm of cultivation, and martial arts is still in the first realm. Why is he so arrogant? I feel like a human being wouldn't be so promiscuous, but the author still writes like that. Isn't it just that he writes wherever he thinks of it? After that, in the fourth world, I am so bad, and the world does not allow me to practice martial arts, I can only practice other things. Later, I directly say that I am not sincere to martial arts. What are you talking about? If your realm is not high, you have not been exposed to the laws of the world, you are not pioneering and innovative, you have no brains, you are not like a time traveler at all. If you have not reached that level, don't write like that. If you were able to master the rules in Marvel, you could still reach the same goal through different paths from a high position, but you don't. As a time traveler, you can travel through various worlds. Isn't it necessary to use the cultivation methods of each world to broaden your own cultivation path? Finally, I upgraded too fast in the early stage. I don't even know the cultivation system of the main world. I'm still trying to commit suicide. My writing is getting worse and worse. I can't even get a bronze with more than a million words. Why bother writing? Just start a new book. It's too uncomfortable to watch.

It's a corner-killing plot, and the plot requires an emotional line. It can't be like this. It's too blunt and not good. I mentioned Zhang Wuji's Madonna before, but the protagonist still favors his character, otherwise it would be five stars.

It's too poisonous, let's go, go away, rubbish novel

At the beginning, the protagonist determines that the main world is the martial arts world of the Great Zhou Dynasty, the martial arts realm is set to levels one to nine, and the dungeon world is the film and television world. As a result, the hang-up was too high and the car could not stop. Only one-tenth of the entire novel was written, and the protagonist was already at the eighth level. At that time, I predicted that the author would have to change the main world, ascend, or travel to the world of immortals and redefine the main world. Otherwise, nine-tenths of the next content would only be about eight levels and nine levels? Sure enough, almost two hundred chapters later, the author began to hint that there are realms above the ninth level. However, the previous setting was too difficult to edit, so he could only forcefully arrange for the protagonist to become a vegetative state, and the soul to travel back through time and change the main world. But change it, what the hell is the second main world? A hodgepodge of laws and the Republic of China at the end of the world? It was a mess, and it was so messed up that the author himself probably thought it was badly written, so he let the protagonist and the zombie king die together, and then changed the main world! But what the hell is the third overworld? Straight Avengers hodgepodge? The collapse is getting worse! The author was probably unable to save anything, so he started to let himself go and kept changing the main world. After that, he still hinted that the main world would eventually be changed to the world of martial arts in the Great Zhou Dynasty? Seriously, if the author had an outline, he wouldn't write in such a mess! Either you decide to kill the main world, and then let the protagonist improve in the dungeon world to feed back the main world! Either you don't want the main world from the beginning, go straight to the flow of the heavens, and just travel and improve with your physical body. Why bother to have to travel with your soul and practice again?

If you cut the grass without eradicating the roots, you won't be able to move when you see a woman.

After coming back from The First World in the World, it was like a different author. The plot was ridiculous and heart-warming, making people feel frustrated. The writing began to become stupid, and all the storytellers became dull. They just said what they said, and everyone, including the protagonist, was given a halo of intelligence. The protagonist has reached the ancestor level in Yitian Shaolin Temple, and has lived to be nearly a hundred years old in the world's number one world. After so many years, the protagonist's martial arts relies solely on the system, and he is not as good as a native of a small world. The Yi Jing Jin that the protagonist has trained hard for many years has been reduced to the background. After more than a hundred years of experience, he has not broken through to the ninth level. After teaching it to Wang Shouren, who does not know martial arts, he broke through to the seventh level in half a day. This is ridiculous. Who is the protagonist of this comparison? Relying solely on the martial arts training accepted by the system, with no ability to create any martial arts of his own, and nearly a hundred years of experience practicing Yi Jing Jin, was surpassed by a person who didn't know martial arts in one day, and developed an advanced version?

The system is too smart, and the system will help the protagonist solve any problems. I feel that it is useless to ask the protagonist.