Pirate Storm Lord

The protagonist is inexplicably happy with himself. He talks too much and makes it annoying to read. The word count is obviously low. The author's writing style needs to be improved. I look forward to the next novel being more exciting.

After getting the system at the beginning, after five years of training and the system, the physical fitness of an ordinary person is more than twice that of an ordinary person, and he still wants to travel to the East China Sea? Just hit GG when you encounter a sea monster... I really don't understand this setting.

Sign in, get ready to climb the sign-in building, hey hey hey

I couldn't sleep and finished reading the novel. I saved it for a long time and finally finished it. Faster, faster, faster. Great.

Change the title of the book. Changed to One Piece: My Comforting Journey. She is always in a bad mood and needs comfort. She doesn't know how to react when she is wronged. Instead, she complains like a harem. And then need to be comforted. I think the main plot of this book is that you comfort me, I comfort you, and everyone comforts each other. Rubbish.

Looking at the first few chapters, the protagonist has not improved at all after five years of golden finger training. It is still weak. In addition, I feel that the author is really average in terms of writing. It is not much better than a running account. There is no sense of substitution at all. I feel that the text is clear and watery. It is very watery. It takes three or four pages to write a memory that can be conveyed in one stroke. It is really difficult to overcome.

There are no Devil Fruits directly related to water in One Piece, only those indirectly related.

Who is Usopp? The one who kills those with the Rust Fruit ability with a slingshot. Rust Who is the one with the Rust Fruit ability? The man who suppressed Sauron. Who is Zoro? The man who defeated Monkar the Axeman. Who is Mengka the axe? Kill the card with an axe A common man. Who is Garp? A man who is a brother of the Warring States Period. Fight Who is this country? The man who single-handedly defeated the Blackbeard Pirates. Black Who is Beard? The man who defeated Ace. Who is Ace? With Jinbe A man who fought for five days and five nights with no outcome. Who is Jinbe? Kill Morley instantly Asian murlocs. Who is Moria? A man who dares to confront Kaido. Who is Kaido? The man who shocked Ming Ge. Who is Brother Ming? Beat Luo Disabled man. Who is Luo? The man who can kill Viagra with one knife. Viagra is Who? The man who violently tortured Smoker. Who is Smoker? He captured Bucky alive. Man. Who is Bucky? The man who ignores Hawkeye's slashes. What is eagle eye Man? The man who beat Luffy until he was unable to fight back. Who is Luffy? The man who killed the King of the Near Sea with his fists. What is the King of the Offshore? One Bite The thing that breaks the red-haired arm. Who is the red hair? The man who easily blocked Akainu Who is Akainu? The man who defeated Aoi. Who is Qing Pheasant? Broken Diamond A man with a Jozi arm. Who is Qiaozi? One blow knocked Lao Sha into vomiting blood man. Who is Lao Sha? The man who threatened to take the head of Whitebeard. Who is Whitebeard? He once competed with Roger for supremacy and is known as the strongest man in the world. People. Who is Roger? The pinnacle of pirates-One Piece. By analogy, Roger may be more powerful and can take two slingshots.

I suggest you learn how to write fan fiction. Your writing style and word choice are really awkward, and it's so ridiculous...

Why did the protagonist only accept Nami's sister? Don't want to get Nami on board? And Nami and her sister left with the protagonist without waiting for Nami to come back? When I went to Cocosia Village, I completely ignored Nami and skipped it without any explanation. Also, is the protagonist asking such a bunch of weaklings to board the ship because he is afraid that he will not be able to find the hostages when the enemy cannot defeat him? It's really a no-brainer to write this.