I Cleared the Real-life Game

It's not good to watch when Jiang Shiya appears. I usually like to watch multiple female protagonists, but the green tea character created in this book is too green and a bit green. The green tea characters in other novels are all green tea on the surface, but in fact they are just like jade. Green Tea in this book has all kinds of intimate contacts with boys, and not just with the male protagonist. And the male protagonist, when facing Cheng, he is a warm man who knows how to flirt. When facing Jiang, he is an innocent little puppy, and he is not just pretending. Two-faced, right? In fact, although the portrayal of Jiang's character was very unsuccessful, she appeared in more wrong situations. I can accept the scumbag green tea, but she must not be the main dish, that is, the only one. Whether it is a single heroine or a double heroine, the appearance of such a heroine is very unpleasant. The solution is actually simple, either downplaying their presence, or expanding the number of female characters to share the roles.

There is no pressure in the plot, and everyone and everything you encounter can be solved easily. It was really good at the beginning, but the more you read, the weirder the world becomes. It seems that except for the people around the protagonist, other passers-by are ignored as if they don't exist (the protagonist co-writes and sings a one-man show). The various intimate actions between the protagonist and the heroine and the co-star are not visible to passers-by in the school. Passers-by appear when needed and disappear when not needed. When I read it, I didn't think it was anything, but when I stopped and thought about it, I was hooked.

2100 Chaoyang Hospital winter An old man surnamed Tang was lying on the hospital bed, surrounded by his children and grandchildren. He could no longer breathe, his eyes were cloudy, and he raised four fingers in a daze. Eldest son: "Dad, are the four houses at home going to be divided?" The old man coughed heavily and shook his head. Second son: "Dad, do you want to withdraw the 40 million from the company's account?" The old man's eyes widened and he remained silent. Third grandson: "Grandpa, I am the only one who understands you. "I Completed the Realistic Daily Game" ended early this morning when the male protagonist graduated from senior year and passed postgraduate studies. You can go with peace of mind." The old man held on and shook his head, tears streaming down his cheeks. For a long time, he left his last smile in this world...

It's okay in the front, but when Jiang Shiya's female partner appears in the back, it's nothing interesting, like a mouse droppings in a pot of soup.

I can't say they are exactly the same, they are simply the same.

It's just that Jiang, the female supporting role, is abrupt and her plot is not pleasing to the eye. First of all, the main plot requires the protagonist to exceed the score line, but the protagonist is still a scumbag at present. The protagonist's emotional intelligence is not particularly low when chatting with the top school girl, but when he meets Jiang, he becomes an innocent boy. Lust is instinct but not intelligence. A person who can chat with other girls normally and dares to ask a top school girl for tutoring will at most be a little embarrassed when asked by Jiang. He can be arrogant and talkative, but it is not good to be pushed away directly. I don't rule out that some people like this, but you set up Jiang's green tea style personality, so he's not likable.

I feel like this is a very good article in this type of article. I like it very much.

I have followed the latest chapter, so I should be qualified to make some evaluations. The advantage is still the overall rhythm and language of this book, which at least made me feel comfortable reading it. The shortcomings are, first of all, when writing about the college entrance examination, you have foreshadowed in the previous article that you will have good luck in the college entrance examination, but you also write that there are many difficulties in the college entrance examination process, which is indeed very contradictory and poisonous. Then the overall pacing is too slow. Although it has recently begun to increase the pace, I have reason to suspect that the author can't continue writing. Third, and this is why I suddenly want to post a chapter review today, the protagonist in your novel is first of all capable of getting 985. No matter how bad he is, 211 is no problem. For this math test, he has no problem-solving skills at all. Of course, if you treat question-picking as a skill, I won't tell you. When you get the test paper, you are not allowed to look at the questions? Can't you tell that something is wrong with the test paper? Only 10 minutes left at the end? Also, no matter how difficult it is to calculate solid geometry, it is definitely a big step behind conic sections, let alone derivatives. Your protagonist has practiced so many big questions, but he can't even calculate solid geometry? I don't know if you were referring to a paper from last year's new college entrance examination and wanted to write about this feeling, but from this chapter I can conclude that the author has never taken the college entrance examination, or his math scores are relatively average. Of course, I'm not saying there's anything wrong with this, but I just want to at least understand it before writing an article? It is indeed poisonous.

I read the introduction and then the beginning of the first chapter. The introduction should be about an office worker. Why is it that the first chapter begins with a high school student?

Why are you a eunuch? Another good book is missing.