In the Red Age of the World, the Refrigerator is Refreshed Every Day

This author doesn't listen to anyone's advice. Mandarin is Mandarin, don't add Mandarin to Shanghai, it will be very awkward whether listening to or reading. The common language across the country is Mandarin. Author, why don't you take the ordinary path?

I had seen this novel before, because it was on the bestseller list. I didn't see the content behind it, so I couldn't stand the front part. I'm from Heilongjiang, and I hate the dialect aspect when I see rural novels written about Northeast China. Can you just write a few chapters in the first few chapters to let everyone know which place you are writing a novel about? There are so many dialects, and it doesn't matter whether others can understand it or not, or whether it's comfortable or not, you just have to watch it all at once, right? Another thing, regarding family, I understand that the eldest brother in the family has selfish motives for his wife after getting married, and I also understand that I look down on my brother who has no job at home, but is he a mute? Ah? Why didn't I see this thing talking at home from beginning to end? I know that my brother has found a good job on his own, and his eyes are complicated as he eats the delicious food his brother brought back. There are some changes in his eyes. Re-examine, what's the use of you? It's up to you? I heard that the brother who went to the countryside was not doing well and needed thick quilts and food stamps, but he didn't say anything. Finally, he lowered his head and said, "If it's more complicated, your eyeballs will be screwed up by me. How can I look at him and not like him?" There are so many adjectives, and the descriptions are so detailed, that I thought for a moment that what I was reading was not an online article, but a traditional literature. Did the person named Li in the office change the document, or the leader's speech, and let the leader lose such an adult in other places, and finally change the milk powder ticket to forget about the past?

I can't understand Shanghainese. It's best to switch back to Mandarin. Just know where you are from.

Let's be honest. If my brother wants to go to the countryside by himself again, he will be ashamed of himself, but you are still nice to him, I feel speechless.

Yo! Still writing? I can't understand the Shanghai dialect.

I've read dozens of chapters and I don't understand why the words are always written in dialect. Is it because I can't type in Mandarin? Is what you write meant to be read only by locals or by a wide range of book lovers? This is the first time I have read a novel written entirely in dialect. The chapters are inked and the dialect is the biggest flaw.

Master Hu only reads novels, and few others watch. .

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to leave after entering 😋

I don't know if it's the low number of words or the author's writing habits, or the way the environment and manner modify the writing. Half of an article is nonsense, some are well written, and some feel very stiff. Change it

1. First of all, the protagonist has just passed through. How can he emotionally connect seamlessly with the original owner's family? It feels like the protagonist is a member of this family. It's very smooth. 2. The protagonist's mother and sister-in-law feel very high-profile. Every little good deed must be made loud and loud and loud enough to be known to all the neighbors. Every little good deed must be celebrated. Make readers feel as if Shanghai women are very high-profile and like to show off 3. The protagonist knows that his mother likes to show off, and does not ask his family to keep a low profile. Every time something good happens, he celebrates. As soon as he celebrates, the protagonist starts spending money on supplies. Although you can use the name of adjusting supplies, it seems that the transfer does not require money. This is a flaw. Does the transfer not require money and supplies? There are 4-5 kinds of supplies at each time. You can take one kind home every 1-2 days for your family to enjoy secretly. If you think about your family having a big meal and drink every once in a while, the smell will definitely spread. People who are thoughtful in that era should not have too many. If someone reports you, the whole family will be ruined, because your eating and drinking level is obviously not in line with the family's consumption capacity. People in special generations will report it at every turn. 4. The protagonist took the initiative to do evil and put people to death (framing a colleague in the factory affairs office). The former colleague changed the data, but the director clearly knew and chose to deal with it coldly. Why did he bother to put people to death when everything was fine afterwards? I think the protagonist should strengthen self-restraint when he has his own magic weapon, otherwise once Pandora's box is opened, he will dare to do anything. 5. I admit that the author's writing style is indeed very good, but I would like to ask whether this heaven is planning to write eight stories of different periods into one book. Why not write more books when there are so many creative ideas? In fact, there are too many novels about the red era (love in the courtyard and the like) at the starting point. To be honest, it makes readers feel physiological disgust and discomfort. Currently, I have only seen one in the category of the red era that I can stick to the end (returning to the prosperous era to be a layman). At least I can read this kind of short-lived and daily life type. The author can refer to his opinions.