The Trajectory of the Heavens

To be honest, I couldn't stand it after seeing the first one. I would like to express my opinion here instead of criticizing this book. After all, these are all written by the author's hard work. This is the first chapter of the pioneering chapter, Zhongnanhai Bodyguard Bureau. Anyway, I haven't read it. It may be very good, but It's just that I haven't seen it. If I think that his strength is weak at the beginning, but makes him much stronger than ordinary people in a short period of time, he should write "Dragon Babu" or "The Legend of the Condor Heroes". Also, if you think this is relatively low, you should write "Sword Immortal III" and worship under the sect of Shushan. Learn to fly with a sword, it's really yours. At the beginning, the Zhongnanhai Bodyguard Bureau. If ten people read it, at least four or five people have never seen it. So, the first chapter at the beginning is already poorly written. You know, I don't mean to criticize this book, I just want to give my opinion. , If you think I am talking nonsense, take a look at my homepage, well, I have spent more than 300 hours on Armpit, and I only started reading it half a year ago. Most people will not read this. You see how many times I have been liked, and they are usually comments that I think are more suitable for everyone's tastes, you know!

For the horse thieves who have killed countless people, they can obviously be destroyed, but they have to do everything possible to save their lives. Everything must follow the ideas of the original work, so why do you want to interfere? It was not a pity to die in the first place, but in the beginning, they were discussing revealing the food road map for the court's disaster relief to the vicious horse thieves? These three views are enough!

It would be pointless in the Dragon Ball world not to green Vegeta.

Pindao watched the sky at night and came to test the poison. Pindao did it first as a sign of respect, and he was stuffy.

There has been no update for 51 days, and I won't tell you the reason for not updating. It's like a eunuch!

The story is okay, but the problem is that Zhu Wuwu, who has hundreds of thousands of years of internal strength, and Cao Zhengchun, who has a century of pure internal strength, are evenly matched? Do you know how much a kilogram is? Does the author have any misunderstanding about Yijiazi?

I just read the first chapter and it feels good, I'm looking forward to it. Don't let the trolls affect your mood, come on ↖(^ω^)↗! Gold will always shine. You have to believe that only a small part of the people who actually read the book will comment, because they are just reading the book and have no time to read or write comments. Therefore, there are many trolls in the book review section and less essence.

I haven't read much of this book yet. I won't talk about the rest, but because it has almost a hundred chapters and there is nothing about the relationship between men and women, I will give you five stars.

The first few chapters are okay. It's a mess from behind

The writing is too messy, it's better to finish one story and then start writing something else. Also, you can redeem so many things before you finish the story. Invincible Articles