One Piece Everyone System

No. 1: What is One Piece? King, if you are a king, you must kill decisively and have clear rewards and punishments. Otherwise, the people under your command will not listen to you, and others will not be dissatisfied. After all, if you oppose you, you will not die. No. 2: Are all pirates bad people? Are the Navy all good people? No! Most of the people who become pirates are bad people who go to sea to plunder big secret treasures. It is not ruled out that there are good people. There are no absolute good people in the navy, and there will also be bad people. 3: We cannot see the darkness of the world of One Piece in the comics, because our perspective is centered around the Straw Hats. If the original work depicts a series of shady things such as burning, killing, looting, and collusion between soldiers and bandits, do you think One Piece will still be published? Will there be anime? 4: What the author writes is a fanfic, not the original work. What the author builds is a brand new world of pirates. It is not the original work. Many settings do not have to be the same as the original work. What attracts people to watch fanfics is the new world and the new settings. If they are exactly the same, it is better to watch anime.

It would be fine if the protagonist were someone else, but Luffy kills people, emmmmm, it doesn't really fit.

I habitually read book reviews before reading a book. I would leave if it was toxic or holy. Then when I was just reading the book reviews, I saw a dispute. Let's focus on the fact that Luffy, the protagonist of this book, kills people. Some people think that this is not in line with what Luffy looks like in their hearts, but in fact, this is no longer Luffy. It would be fine if you don't bring it in. And this is a novel. If you really want to watch Luffy, you can go back and watch the anime or watch "Funa Ryū". It is definitely the authentic Luffy. Everyone reads time-travel novels, right? ! Everyone knows that time-travelers can only live better if they kill decisively (except for people who constantly have their butts wiped and daily traffic) In the One Piece anime, there is no main scene of killing people, because everyone knows that killing animes will be blocked, such as giants and food species, so they will not appear in the shots. Every country has a cultural bureau that manages it. Such murdering animes rarely show him in front of him. Just because there are no dark scenes in the anime does not mean that he will not appear in reality. There is no problem if he is written out in the novel. That's about it, I also went to sea to try books. .

The author is responding to the wishes of readers who like the protagonist to have a rubber fruit. Of course I will add some personal opinions. Please don't pay attention to future readers! I hope the author and readers will not give up on this novel because of me! The author. Since you wrote about Devil Fruit. So since you have the equipment. Do those seas and seastones really affect it? So why not add the rubber fruit. Don't say that rubber has many shortcomings. Those shortcomings cannot be avoided with a system. Then this system is just an equipment dealer and prop dealer. What exactly is this system for the protagonist? Change to some different plane props? Then this is very embarrassing. It will give others the impression that you are bringing props from other dimensions to the One Piece world to cause trouble. It feels a lot like online game writing. After pushing this boss, I feel like I am working on the next boss. There will be a lot of abandoned books. Because I can't say anything. I don't quite understand this either. So it feels like reading an online game novel. I used to read many novels and online games, but now I'm really not that addicted to them. It will lose a group of readers who follow the anime. I guess the author has also read the One Piece anime and some fan fiction. It was the first time I saw Luffy in second gear in an anime and I was excited. It's so naughty to have a sense of substitution. I also want to fuck those people's sense of substitution. Now the author has made the protagonist lose the rubber fruit, which is a bit annoying for me, who is slightly inclined to some original works. (Of course, it doesn't have to be all copied from the original work. I just don't have the rubber fruit. I really can't let go and that's why I posted this long review.) Well, how should I put it? It doesn't feel very burning. It's not that I'm not very excited, I just feel a sense of loss. Hope there are still rubber fruits. In fact, it's not too late to discard it when it's no longer needed. And the author, really, made the pig's feet a bit too powerful. Raise it slowly, don't raise it to full capacity all at once. That would be really boring. Do you really want to fly to other universes? Plane? It depends on what the author thinks and I can't interfere with the author. I can only let the author think about it himself. That's all I can say about my opinion. I haven't read too much. I got this one for free. I hope readers and authors will not laugh at me. I really don't have that much money to spend. As a reader of online novels for ten years. These are just my own opinions. Please don't let readers read my long comment to dissuade you. (Of course, in the past, if I didn't have money, I could only silently read pirated copies. Now, if I don't have much money, I can only silently spend time and use discount coupons to read novels.) Also, dear readers, this is my first time writing such a long comment. I guess you can see it too. All I can say is, whether the novel is good or not, please don't listen to other people's words of trying to persuade you to give up. It's better to see if the novel is to your liking. Can you please continue reading? Please don't give up on this novel because of what I said. Please moderator or author can give me more details and pin them to the top. Thanks.

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To be honest, although the writing is okay, I don't like the style very much, and the setting is basically broken in my opinion. First of all, it is impossible for six-year-old Luffy to go to sea alone, even with Shanks, he would not dare to take him. After all, Luffy is Garp's grandson, Garp will definitely ask the people of Windmill Village to take care of Luffy, so at least until Luffy becomes an adult Maybe going to the sea, and even Shanks couldn't bear Garp's anger if something happened to Luffy. Shanks would not take Luffy out, so the setting of Luffy going to the sea at the age of six is broken. Then, Luffy taking Zoro to the sea is another unqualified setting. Zoro should be eight years old when Luffy is six years old. How many years has the eight-year-old Zoro studied in this dojo? I dare say it will never take more than three years! How much kendo knowledge can Zoro learn in three years? Has the foundation been solidified? Just go to sea directly! ? Do you, Luffy, think that you can give Zoro better guidance than Koushiro? I have only seen the Zoro Zanpakutō chapter and don't know the plot below. Although I am a bit nitpicking, I think that although most fan fiction is fictional, it must withstand a certain degree of scrutiny! After all, this is a pirate fanfic, not some random original work.

At the end of the second volume, there are two abrupt chapters 296 and 345. This is a network error of the Writer's Assistant, which sent me the wrong volume. I am speechless. I encountered it twice! ! ! When you see around 280, don't subscribe to the two chapters after 280! The missing numbers 161 and 207 were severely beaten because of driving! Friends who want to see it can move to the QQ group, which is available in the group file. There is also 333 after 302. I simply made a typo on that one. You can subscribe with confidence. . . Starting point cannot change the published chapter name. I feel so helpless and no one can help me. . .

Is this what those people who say I haven't watched One Piece look like?

The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What is a fall injury? Xiao Ming replied: You fell from upstairs. The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What is luck? Xiao Ming replied: There is a haystack downstairs. The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What is misfortune? Xiao Ming replied: There is a fork on the haystack. The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What is hope? Xiao Ming replied: You didn't fall on the fork. The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What is despair? Xiao Ming replied: You didn't fall on the haystack either. The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What does "thank you" mean? Xiao Ming replied: You fell into the water. The teacher asked Xiao Ming: What does it mean to be finished? Xiao Ming replied: There is a shark in the water.

Looks good, pretty good