Hokage Starts as Naruto's Older Brother
About This Novel
Chen Kai traveled through time and became Naruto's brother and Uchiha Itachi, known as his contemporaries. However, Chen Kai was also bound by the system to see how he would live in the world of Naruto. (You don't travel through other worlds in the Naruto world, magic modification.)
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Official(13)Scraped 4d ago
Aren't Hinata and Naruto in the same class? Your timeline is messed up.
Timeline
It's so messy, so messy, I'm speechless.
Is the author a newbie?
This novel doesn't make much sense when I read it, it always feels like a narration. Sit back and cheer! It's better not to use names like Namikaze Chen Kai in the future. Namikaze is a surname, and Chen is also a surname. Chen and Kai only have their first names that they can read together, which is weird and awkward. Come on! 😊
Give you 2 stars
I just wanted to ask if I could add some punctuation marks?
What the hell kind of novel is this? I'm completely confused.
Hinata and Naruto-nii are in the same time period?
The timeline was messed up as soon as I started writing it, and Hinata grew so big when Naruto was still a baby, which really messed up the timeline.
Brother, there was a slip of the tongue in the first two chapters and he called himself Uchiha.
Brother, there was a slip of the tongue in the first two chapters and he called himself Uchiha. I suggest you change it. Can you also add punctuation marks?
I think
I think it would be better if the protagonist has less harem.
I hope Haruno Sakura can join you
This way Naruto won't be bullied anymore
Sure enough, we are going out again. How many years will we go out again?
It seems that all novels follow this routine
Rating
Community(0)
Official(13)Scraped 4d ago
Aren't Hinata and Naruto in the same class? Your timeline is messed up.
Timeline
It's so messy, so messy, I'm speechless.
Is the author a newbie?
This novel doesn't make much sense when I read it, it always feels like a narration. Sit back and cheer! It's better not to use names like Namikaze Chen Kai in the future. Namikaze is a surname, and Chen is also a surname. Chen and Kai only have their first names that they can read together, which is weird and awkward. Come on! 😊
Give you 2 stars
I just wanted to ask if I could add some punctuation marks?
What the hell kind of novel is this? I'm completely confused.
Hinata and Naruto-nii are in the same time period?
The timeline was messed up as soon as I started writing it, and Hinata grew so big when Naruto was still a baby, which really messed up the timeline.
Brother, there was a slip of the tongue in the first two chapters and he called himself Uchiha.
Brother, there was a slip of the tongue in the first two chapters and he called himself Uchiha. I suggest you change it. Can you also add punctuation marks?
I think
I think it would be better if the protagonist has less harem.
I hope Haruno Sakura can join you
This way Naruto won't be bullied anymore
Sure enough, we are going out again. How many years will we go out again?
It seems that all novels follow this routine
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