Trench Bolts and Magic
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After Maureen was punched awake, he found himself a prisoner of war. I thought this was a world similar to the one before the outbreak of World War I, but I found that the actual situation was worse than I thought. And why did I, an imperial soldier, become an ally with the volunteers of the International Brigade! Assault soldiers with swords and shields who look like tin cans, armored knights who mix diesel and magic, and accompanying mages... All this tells Molin that there is a big problem in the world. But what he has to consider now is how to survive in this war known as 'the end of all wars'. Elements of this book: A battle with demonic transformation, real men must pull the strings, diesel armored knights, airship gang jumping...
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As for the novel, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory, especially because the author has a poor grasp of the theme of the novel. It can be said that the first eight chapters are all insignificant introductions to the war. Many times, the protagonist is left aside to write about some insignificant secondary characters, regardless of priority. First of all, you need to be clear about the theme of your novel, whether it is about war or about an individual. If you are writing about a war, then you can leave the protagonist aside, or even let the protagonist die, or change the protagonist. After all, your theme is war, and individuals are just pawns in the war. If you are writing about an individual, then you should try not to let the individual leave your plot, and don't let other subplots suppress your protagonist. From the theme, this novel is about individuals and about modern times. The growth of the protagonist in a war that combines modern technology and magic, so you always write about irrelevant characters, throw the protagonist aside, is to ignore the essentials, read eight chapters, and carefully recall the content of the novel. From the beginning to the eighth chapter, there is very little content about the protagonist, either about the relationship between countries, or about war issues, or about generals, emperors and ministers. At least in the first eight chapters, I think this is a war novel, and I can't tell that it is a novel with personal themes.
The author does not give any experience book. No new spells are given either. Many times princes and generals asked what rewards they wanted. The result is that we don't need a few new experience books. The empire itself has a 7-level high-level mage. If you don't want to blow it up yourself, why don't you take a look at what you already have?
If you make mistakes, don't correct them. The poisonous points are obvious in 23-24. I will wait and see in the future.
Very well written
But it's not very good-looking. If you want to read cool articles, just change it.
The protagonist is so ambitious all day long about making magic weapons lighter, why not put some thought into developing RPGs, anti-material rifles, and mortars first? As a modern military time traveler, these weapons are easy to develop. RPG's shaped armor-piercing warheads already exist. If you can't make a modern RPG, then the American bazooka can do it, right? If that doesn't work, you can always imitate the British guys and build a spring-launched PIAT, right? For anti-materiel rifles, you can learn from the guerrillas in the Middle East. You can get a large-caliber heavy machine gun tube, and it can be used to fight heavy armored infantry general guards. Isn't it a joke that if you don't develop a structure as simple as a mortar, you end up applying for a trench gun? If you are thinking about infantry innovation, you might as well think about bringing out tanks and armored vehicles first. The power of the sprite engine is a waste without adding some armor.
Bro, you'd better change your basic settings. It's still too difficult for a battalion that fought an entire infantry division in street battles to be considered the crown prince's baby army.
It's pretty good. You can check out the cold ingredients.
It's becoming more and more like Magic Witch 66, you can still watch it
Author! Author! Do you have a high-definition map? Yours looks so blurry
Um, the beginning feels like a Spanish guy beating Arthur😲 (Huh? Talk! Who are you?)😘
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Official(24)Scraped 7d ago
As for the novel, I can only say that it is quite satisfactory, especially because the author has a poor grasp of the theme of the novel. It can be said that the first eight chapters are all insignificant introductions to the war. Many times, the protagonist is left aside to write about some insignificant secondary characters, regardless of priority. First of all, you need to be clear about the theme of your novel, whether it is about war or about an individual. If you are writing about a war, then you can leave the protagonist aside, or even let the protagonist die, or change the protagonist. After all, your theme is war, and individuals are just pawns in the war. If you are writing about an individual, then you should try not to let the individual leave your plot, and don't let other subplots suppress your protagonist. From the theme, this novel is about individuals and about modern times. The growth of the protagonist in a war that combines modern technology and magic, so you always write about irrelevant characters, throw the protagonist aside, is to ignore the essentials, read eight chapters, and carefully recall the content of the novel. From the beginning to the eighth chapter, there is very little content about the protagonist, either about the relationship between countries, or about war issues, or about generals, emperors and ministers. At least in the first eight chapters, I think this is a war novel, and I can't tell that it is a novel with personal themes.
The author does not give any experience book. No new spells are given either. Many times princes and generals asked what rewards they wanted. The result is that we don't need a few new experience books. The empire itself has a 7-level high-level mage. If you don't want to blow it up yourself, why don't you take a look at what you already have?
If you make mistakes, don't correct them. The poisonous points are obvious in 23-24. I will wait and see in the future.
Very well written
But it's not very good-looking. If you want to read cool articles, just change it.
The protagonist is so ambitious all day long about making magic weapons lighter, why not put some thought into developing RPGs, anti-material rifles, and mortars first? As a modern military time traveler, these weapons are easy to develop. RPG's shaped armor-piercing warheads already exist. If you can't make a modern RPG, then the American bazooka can do it, right? If that doesn't work, you can always imitate the British guys and build a spring-launched PIAT, right? For anti-materiel rifles, you can learn from the guerrillas in the Middle East. You can get a large-caliber heavy machine gun tube, and it can be used to fight heavy armored infantry general guards. Isn't it a joke that if you don't develop a structure as simple as a mortar, you end up applying for a trench gun? If you are thinking about infantry innovation, you might as well think about bringing out tanks and armored vehicles first. The power of the sprite engine is a waste without adding some armor.
Bro, you'd better change your basic settings. It's still too difficult for a battalion that fought an entire infantry division in street battles to be considered the crown prince's baby army.
It's pretty good. You can check out the cold ingredients.
It's becoming more and more like Magic Witch 66, you can still watch it
Author! Author! Do you have a high-definition map? Yours looks so blurry
Um, the beginning feels like a Spanish guy beating Arthur😲 (Huh? Talk! Who are you?)😘
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[72 points·Good grass·War article] The background of war stories about a magically modified world is probably the First World War. The protagonist travels to a different world and becomes a member of an international column. He is captured at the beginning, and then gets acquainted with important people and starts his military career. All countries in the world are magically modified versions of European countries. In addition to general thermal weapons and equipment, there are also some magic weapons based on industry, such as power armor and the like. Because of the support of magic, the battlefield is also a melee between cold weapons and hot weapons. It is similar to ordinary war articles, but without the big hooks. All aspects of the war are written in great detail. I felt a little tired from reading it, but there are also people who like this more sophisticated style of writing. In short, there must be a fixed audience. It depends on whether you like it or not.
B+ War + magic + gunpowder + history = 👨🏻🦳 romance. There will be a lot of follow-up piano tuning content on the shelves, and the score will drop to B+.
Finally there is a similar article again, it's rare
It is a rare World War I novel with a very unique angle and good writing style. Although it is classified as science fiction, it is actually suitable to be viewed as a war novel. What will happen when magic is integrated into modern war?
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