Spiritual Scholar

After more than 150 chapters, the main character's natal curse was finally disaster. So what's the point of the "illusion world" that you have laid out for more than 100 chapters? Before, you emphasized how powerful the "illusion world" is. But because of an unexpected accident, you chose disaster, which you said was the weakest and single-function, as your natal curse. You also paved the way for more than 100 chapters. I really can't stand it anymore. It's disgusting!

The author wanted to invent a new power system, but now he added another system, and now he added a golden elixir cultivation system. The feeling of inconsistency was so strong.

The writing is not bad at all. There are quite a few pitfalls in the book, and filling them is almost the development of the plot. The first big pit: the mystery of the whale. His origin and experience and death. Judging from the current plot, this is the ending and the beginning. He is the problem with this book. Not much to say, let's see how the author explains it later. The second biggest pitfall: the mystery of God. What role does it play in its origin and current layout? As God, one should not keep a low profile, and besides, there is a shadow that is also keeping a low profile. Also watch the plot behind. The third biggest pitfall: the mystery of the traveler. At present, this guy is an important character in the development of the plot. Although he hasn't really appeared yet, he really can't keep a low profile. The current situation was also caused by this person. It shouldn't be possible to commit suicide, but my personal feeling is that it has something to do with the fourth major pit behind. The fourth biggest pitfall: hope and detachment. From my personal point of view, the biggest problem in the whole book so far is that it cannot be transcended, and everything has its limitations. Whether it is a master or an evil creature like Leviathan, it includes the protagonist and the development of civilization. All have limitations that cannot be escaped, and whales are where all limitations lie. At present, it seems that there is still no way to follow up, and everything will eventually return to madness and destruction. Is hope and detachment visible without the influence of outside forces? It feels like the two previous masters should also be planning in this direction. In the end, the reason for everything cannot be bypassed by the whale. Is it the beginning and the end?

Can the author explain to me the division of realms? I haven't figured it out yet.

Books are okay, but there are too many various settings and they are too gaudy.

One thing to say is that the author's writing style is okay, and the overall text quality is okay. It is not a brainless white article, but I don't know if you have noticed that the main line of this book is not clear and very confusing. After a while, he said that he should quickly improve his strength. As a result, there are not many chapters on cultivation. This article feels like a cultivation realm. Zhao - Extraordinary - Sage - Great Sage, I have been reading for more than 900 chapters. The protagonist's realm written by the author is still enlightened, so I kept skipping to read it. How can I put it in the writing? The early stage is a masterpiece, but the middle and late stages are broken. There are too many things to write, and a bunch of useless plots, so I skip it directly. Seeing that there are now more than 900 chapters saying that time is very tight and we need to improve our strength quickly, but the result is that we don't improve and a lot of nonsense surrounds the protagonist. Author, your writing is good, but the plot planning is terrible. I strongly recommend that you rewrite this book, just have one main line, improve your strength, and then in the two lives The world is crazy and desperate to improve. Stop writing about other things besides the plot. My head hurts when I read it. It's a bunch of nonsense. You can refer to Yuan Tianzun, Dao Master Wants to Ascend, and I Eat Tomatoes. The main plot is very clear. The starting point of everything is to improve your strength. I suggest you rewrite this book and don't waste a good plot!

A masterpiece in the early stage, a poison in the middle stage I gave up after reading over 400 chapters. It's completely out of line with the previous people and society. I even doubt that someone else wrote it. Also, if you don't know how to write emotional dramas, then don't write them.

The protagonist's progress is really slow.

Generally speaking, the author's ideas are pretty good, but the plot and settings are too confusing. Repeating some of the same plots is a bit monotonous.

There are too many various settings in the back, such as background settings, two worlds interpenetrating each other, the real world is a fantasy parallel world, the protagonist has died and been resurrected twice... There are too many settings, it is really unnecessary. As a result, the rest of the plot is a mess. After more than 900 chapters, the protagonist is still in the awakening state. The basic route of the main plot is not clear, and the rhythm of the plot is too chaotic. Lin Chen, the villain in front of the protagonist, didn't feel like he was dead at all. It gave me the feeling that the protagonist was fighting wits and courage with the air in the early stage, and there was no sense of satisfaction at all when the villain died. Alas, my scalp is numb when I look at the various settings in the back. The protagonist also feels very strong. He can kill prince-level evil objects alone, and he can also fight with monster-level monsters in a 50-50 match. I feel that the power system in the back is about to collapse...