Wild Bajie

Author, there are all kinds of sadistic protagonists behind you. I don't want to read them. I love them all to death, and I want to abandon the book. Support the jack-up

Come on↖(^ω^)↗

First of all, the punctuation is sometimes missed, and there are errors in punctuation, and I hope the paragraphs can be made clearer, otherwise it is a bit difficult to read, and the personal feeling that Pangu left in the book in the third chapter is a bit unclassical and vernacular, a bit strange. If it doesn't work, the author can Baidu search for classical Chinese words, and we will not look down on the author because of it. This way, it looks more professional, and we don't have to worry about us not being able to understand. After all, those who read the novel should not be elementary school students, right...? I only read the first few chapters and took them out of context, but the beginning is indeed a bit too impatient and not attractive enough. I hope the author can change it later. After coding, you can read it several times and revise it more than other authors. Only by updating slowly, coding the text that readers like to read, and writing the essence will more readers urge you to update. Of course, these are just some of my personal suggestions and opinions, hope you will adopt them!

It's perfect for my bedtime story, because it's so boring that I fell asleep just watching it.

Disappointed. . . .

I don't want to read it,

Can the author change it?

I really think this book is very good and I hope the author will stick with it✊

How are the realms of practice divided?

I was also drunk when I saw this introduction.