People Are in Douluo, and Martial Arts Are Mega Rayquaza

First: A bit ostentatious, but the author's patch makes sense Second: When describing Zhang Lexuan, it gives readers the feeling that Xuanzi abandoned his students and ran away, giving people the illusion that Zhang Lexuan died. The author did not say whether Zhang Lexuan died or not, and I don't know if it is a secondary design. If you have not read the original work or do not understand the relevant plot, it is easy to be led astray (I read it as if the author has written Zhang Lexuan out of the picture) Third: The plot is a bit delayed. Although the description is good, it is too lengthy. The summary is that the plot is too slow. Currently, 119 is still playing games and has not even entered the finals. When fighting, it is also the same. You can go faster but you have to ink, you have to make yourself very embarrassed and then fight back to win. Does the author think it is interesting to write like this? Fourth: The soul ring skills for mega Rayquaza are hard to describe in one word at the moment. How can I put it this way? To be honest, the current five rings are quite acceptable with the Speedy Dragon Dance and Meteor Swarm, but the others are a bit biased, especially the storm and surf skills (maybe I am the original anime plus half of the game party, but it can also be said that the current author has combined the nine soul rings in a reasonable order with at least nine skills and as many as 13 skills) Fifth: The protagonist does not have a long memory, and he will suffer again if he has suffered a loss. Sixth: The value is inexplicably lowered. The summary is that the protagonist has been cut, and even the previous article I wrote has been forgotten.

I remember the protagonist's martial spirit correctly. He should be considered a dragon. I'm sure he'll be taken advantage of by Gu Yuena's atmosphere in the future. Don't let go of the Soldier Spirit Beast clan, and accept all you can. It's been a while since I watched Pokémon, and I've almost forgotten all the settings. Collect whatever you can. What is written after this? I'm too lazy to complain, this opportunity is not strong, that opportunity is not strong. That's nothing, nothing special. My recommendation can only be given with two hearts.

It's too watery and not fluent at all. It takes several chapters to write about every little thing.

Awesome, Douluo only knows the rules and can only say that it deserves so many bad reviews. I guess the 8.4 Is all bought.

It's too shabby. There are now 155 chapters in total. I have written 75 chapters for the Soul Master Competition. There are two chapters before the start, two chapters for the start, 4 chapters for the fight, and two chapters for the end. I have never seen someone so good.

Doesn't Pokémon have its own skills? ? ?

I feel that it would be better for Fengyuan and the three idiots to create a book together. The protagonist could be Groudon as the hot-blooded male protagonist, Kyogre as the tsundere female protagonist and the two protagonists, and they would be happy enemies. Then Rayquaza could adopt a brother who adopts them or set up a big sister. The two of them would quarrel one by one and punch each other. The setting is similar to the queen of Fairy Tail. However, this Dou Yi is easy to write, Dou Two takes up three positions and is difficult to allocate resources🤔

It relies entirely on signing in Pokémon to drive content, with no plot or emotion of its own.

Is there a female protagonist? Who? Several? Single girl or harem?

He is so capable of water, 10 chapters and 6 chapters of water. I have never seen anyone with such ability.