Immortal People

The writing is not bad, but the three views are too biased. I can't stand it after reading more than a dozen of them. I saw the part about the fusion of real dragons based on your previous book. I want to abuse the master again? I'm really convinced... I have to abuse the master? It doesn't require you to be brainless and feel a little more comfortable? For example, in Boyikao, you can't see the inheritance of the protagonist, but you can see that the cultivation base gives good treatment and then the ideas are inconsistent or you want to use the protagonist to do business. Isn't it delicious? At least it will be comfortable for readers to watch. Does the sadist have depth? Does it make sense that the protagonist has a bumpy journey? I don't want to complain about the other treatment of my sister. I can only say that the slap in the face after the abuse was a little more comfortable? It was just a simple killing. Then my sister left it alone. The key point is that your abuse is not the kind of abuse that either hates you or is very heart-wrenching. It's just a simple response. It's okay if the whole text is not interesting. The key is that I don't see much depth in the writing. There was no imperial examination in the Shang Dynasty. What the hell is the guardian king? If you can write about the gods and bring your own understanding, that's fine. If you can give people refreshing insights, you can be considered a good writer. They are all original characters. You are a complete fantasy. It's better to write a new setting. It's paradoxical. Are you making fun of yourself or writing it for the readers? And the protagonist knows about Lu Ya. The three religions have come out, and they know it's the Shang Dynasty but don't know Xibohou? Even a fool should know that it's Fengshen.. Forget it, I'm too lazy to say it. In summary, it's poisonous. If you want to read it, don't read it as a fan of Fengshen. The three views of the protagonist are extremely wrong. According to the author's novel, he has a tendency to lick dogs. Just read it if you want to.

Author I would like to ask, do you have any brothers or sisters? I know what kind of person you are from the novels you write. Not to mention ungrateful, they are worse than pigs and dogs. Let's just say that the protagonist of this book is dependent on his sister. If a woman saves you, you have to repay her kindness. Can and should. Where's your sister? You can practice by yourself, why don't you bring your sister with you... Forget it, to put it harshly, you are trash. There is something wrong with morality, and if a person like this still wants to become enlightened, God is blind.

The protagonist has so many magic weapons. Is it interesting to use the token in the Hunyuan Universe as a savings bag to repay Qi on the same day? And you were stopped by 3,000 people. What did the umbrella slave you trapped do with it? There is also the usage of learning in school, which is like this in ancient schools. The protagonist insists on going to listen, and looks like he is enjoying your nine years of compulsory education. Is your state like feeding a dog? So weak, do you know what a saint is? I looked at this saint, alas, Return to Void Realm 660

No need for fate! No need for fate! No need for fate! Say important things three times! The Supreme Being has been poisoned, so don't let this book have any fate! I really can't stand it if I want to have a relationship! No need for fate! Damn Daoyuan! Damn Daoyuan! Damn Daoyuan!

Brother, I have read more than 70 chapters from the first chapter, and I want to ask you, are you serious about characterization? Do you understand the emotional changes of the characters? It is too rigid. The characters were wrongly written more than 20 times. Where is the content that should be carried out? How capable are you? For example, in the chapters where Tao Nan was kidnapped by bandits, I wanted to ask why the protagonist's name was mixed in? And the protagonist, how does the mood change? Brother, have you thought about it carefully? In the past, how did you get married? I'll go ahead and figure it out just by scratching my head, right? After a few pats on the head, this article came out, right? Can't you fix it more? I was so embarrassed when I saw it, it was so embarrassing, don't you know?

I have read all the novels of the author, which belong to the top writers, Shen Gongbao Inheritance, Yipindaomen, Taishangzhufu, writing, conception, and plot are all top-notch. Now I only read the novels, Nine Lives, Chen Dong, Tomato, San Shao, and Potato. I hope the author can work harder and write more wonderful works. Come on.

I have read every book by the author. They are very well written and very interesting. I have read Shen Gongbao's Inheritance three times and I support the author.

Starting from Shen Gongbao's Inheritance, I started reading Ninth's books, Tai Shang Zhi Fu, and Shen Gongbao's author's imagination is getting better and better, not to mention his writing skills. Everything in Ninth's books is good, but the description of emotions is too disgusting. Why, Shen Gongbao's Inheritance has been censored! Not to mention the Supreme, Jade Qilin, Daoyuan, Huang Zu, the emotional dramas have always been written in rubbish. All kinds of torture, all kinds of death, all kinds of cuckolding, all kinds of being cuckolded! It's very disturbing to watch. Ninth's books all feel like all races are above all else, and the protagonist plots for this or that plot. I feel that the protagonist is very cool and can do all kinds of tricks. Then there is a twist and the protagonist is slapped in the face. The protagonist is fighting against the law of heaven and cannot defeat it. The ending is a little more satisfactory. The writing is indeed very good, but when I look back at it, all the pretentiousness of the protagonist is slapped in the face. Really, if you don't believe me, go back and take a look! After reading three pages of this book, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. At the beginning, it is said that the world is very chaotic and turbid, and the protagonist has to commit suicide. It is a society where people cannibalize people! It's all normal! But the protagonist has traveled through time in the past, so it doesn't matter whether it will disgrace the person who traveled through it or not. But it is indeed the first time I have written something so frustrating, and it was even with a golden finger. And, so in the Ninth Book, for some reason, family affection is never as good as love, and love is always being exploited. I feel that the male protagonist has been giving, and the female protagonist is to preserve the family and the race. The green protagonist is forced to marry, but that race and family are simply not worth it. Then, the family, friends, and brothers behind the male protagonist have been working hard for the male protagonist. However, the male protagonist said "I have everything under control", and then they all fell into disrepute. The one who survived was to report the news. It's heart-wrenching to watch! Looking back at this book again, in the first three chapters, I was decisively persuaded to quit, and I couldn't continue the abuse. Every time I read the ninth book, I felt uncomfortable for a long time. The male protagonist was cheated, the heroine killed the male protagonist, and the heroine liked someone other than the male protagonist. Never be cruel! Then every time you plan, there will always be an accident. Every time you can kill, but you can't, you can't give him a happy life, look at morality! He was killed once on Fangcun Mountain, but he didn't die. The Qilin King saved him. The Qilin clan killed him once, but he didn't die. He turned into a demon, traveled through time and space, and was killed once, but he still didn't die. He didn't die until the finale! Forget it, let's look at how long Kunpeng has lived, and how long has Zulong been unable to kill him. It hurts to watch →_→

Now you've given the protagonist a mother. Damn it, I feel like I'm going to die reading it right now. Damn it, can you let that Shi Niang die? You really don't want to make money, you really don't want to write novels. You can really persuade people to quit. I feel like all your book friends can leave. Let me tell you, the author, no one will have the patience to read this book. Your book is becoming more and more poisonous, no matter how you let others read it. Please brothers, please upvote this book review

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