Start with Captain Daguo!

Momojiji has been in constant selection and has not entered college since it was released. In high school, the main character is like a gangster, "lazy" and out of tune, and suddenly turns into a character who studies hard. The single heroine, who was very sweet with Xie in the past, exchanged contact information with the stewardess on the plane, hooked up with Fu Gou, a disgusting person, and had an affair with Jiang... She often made outrageous remarks, including but not limited to talking about Bitcoin, circumventing the wall, gambling, and claiming in front of Fu that she and Xie would hit home runs during the holidays, etc. All in all, I can't watch anything. I want to watch Kill Kill Kill Kill, and the aerial combat plot, not the glib and arrogant talk.

There are more than a hundred chapters. It's too long-winded, and it's not overdone. It's all nonsense, and it doesn't focus on the plot of college and the army. It's strange that the number of people watching it doesn't decrease. I have told you to learn the writing style and outline of Eagle Sweeping the Nine Heavens. In particular, the protagonist has some experience in passenger aircraft in the past and has no other advantages. At least he has a special ability. For example, he can know the parameters of a fighter jet by touching it, his eyes can simulate flight, he has a super memory, etc. If you still write it as you do now, it will be a little bit less enjoyable, and it will have farts to look at.

To be honest, there's a lot of nonsense. I've finished reading 45 chapters, and I'm still in the selection process. I haven't entered university yet, so I felt lonely reading it.

With a playful smile, he said things that were inconsistent with his cognition several times. According to the army's style, if you say something you shouldn't say, you will be investigated. Also, you were having an affair with your deskmate at the beginning, and you were having an affair with a female pilot later on. Are you writing about fighter jets or about urban emotions?

Why do you feel like the protagonist is so awesome after being reborn? The whole plot seems carefree. Do you think there is a golden finger or a top student? Being a pilot is really humbling.

Time is always a powerful force, and the original choice is still a regret after all. Who would have thought that after the promotion banquet, he would be reborn unexpectedly, and then apart from his skills, he would not know other benefits of time, so he could only make up for the regrets... If you start over again, you can do what you want. If you don't have enough talent and don't work hard enough to make it happen, what kind of waves will a genius with stronger hands-on ability than learning ability make! Maybe it was because I was used to it, and I didn't realize that my childhood sweetheart turned out to be a good partner. Maybe it was because I didn't care about his scumbag behavior back then. The rebirth novel has a clear structure and a smooth storyline with ups and downs, which brings a unique reading experience. The full score💯 must be 99 points. I am afraid you will be proud of the rest, so you have to keep working hard~(˶╹ꇴ╹˶)~

I still don't know what the author wants to write? I wanted to write about the military but couldn't get to the point for a long time. And when you join the army later, will there be a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? When writing a female lead, is it necessary to have so many emotional scenes? If I write about multiple female protagonists, can I still pass the political review and join the army and fly fighter jets?

It's best to write about being a soldier and have a single female protagonist. Write less about ambiguities with other girls. If you write about being a soldier, don't marry her. If it doesn't feel right, just write about it.

I've read almost 200 chapters, and there are very few that are really related to flying airplanes. One test took about a hundred chapters, and the only ones related to airplanes so far are flying simulators a few times. I'm just about to enter college after more than a hundred chapters? Are you serious? I'm here to see the plane fly. When will you arrive? There is also the issue of female protagonists. You are not a stud romance novel, so what are you doing with so many women? You are a soldier, but you are not a breeding machine in heat. After a while, a woman is ambiguously interested in the protagonist. You are not a soldier. You are the template for the return of the military king and the son-in-law of the God of War, okay? There are also some remarks made by the protagonist that transcend time and space and transcend their background. I doubt that the protagonist will be censored as a spy? Given the protagonist's rural background, what kind of reason would make people above ignore where he got this knowledge? At least I've read so much and haven't seen anything that makes sense.

What have you written recently? The expressions before and after are different. There is no cause and effect. It's written indiscriminately. It's a bad review.