All Heavens Summon Divine Refiners from the World of Jiu Shu
About This Novel
Returning to the origin and returning the yuan has reached the end, and you can be promoted or demoted to become a flying immortal. The first yang is the day of meritorious deeds, and the ninth lunar cycle is the year of enlightenment. Shen Lipu traveled to the world of Uncle Jiu. Bite! [Inheritance of Summoning Gods and Refining Generals] has been distributed! ......Bite! [The Great Technique of the God of Heaven and Yushu Cutting and Surveying the Five Thunders] is waiting to be collected. ... When Yuanshi Tianzun opened the sky, a piece of Yuanshi Ancestral Qi was refined into a jade tablet by Taishang Daojun, and by chance, it was obtained by Shen Lipu. From then on, he traveled across the heavens and slayed demons!
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Official(7)Scraped 26d ago
There are too many plots in the original work, so you are completely repeating them.
The protagonist's sense of participation and presence is too low, and the plot is the same whether it has a protagonist or not, so why do we need a protagonist? The number of words has to be mixed into this plot
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The sense of participation is too low, and I feel why the monks are not upright. It feels like the protagonist is indifferent to life.
We need to write more about soldiers and horses, otherwise they will be there but not used. There will definitely be other plots in the future and we need to pay attention to the connections.
come on! , I don't think it's very good, because you wrote a lot of Taoist things.
The other novels I read are all very simple and have no Taoist elements at all, so the writing is very poor. Your writing is very good.
You must keep at it. As long as you write, I will read it.
If you travel through time and still follow the original plot, then what are you looking at? There is no innovation at all.
There should be a Tao Te Ching at the beginning
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Community(0)
Official(7)Scraped 26d ago
There are too many plots in the original work, so you are completely repeating them.
The protagonist's sense of participation and presence is too low, and the plot is the same whether it has a protagonist or not, so why do we need a protagonist? The number of words has to be mixed into this plot
black black
The sense of participation is too low, and I feel why the monks are not upright. It feels like the protagonist is indifferent to life.
We need to write more about soldiers and horses, otherwise they will be there but not used. There will definitely be other plots in the future and we need to pay attention to the connections.
come on! , I don't think it's very good, because you wrote a lot of Taoist things.
The other novels I read are all very simple and have no Taoist elements at all, so the writing is very poor. Your writing is very good.
You must keep at it. As long as you write, I will read it.
If you travel through time and still follow the original plot, then what are you looking at? There is no innovation at all.
There should be a Tao Te Ching at the beginning
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