I Am in the Yellow Maple Valley, and I Use the Formation to Prove Immortality!
About This Novel
[Gou Dao] + [Array Master] + [Sword Array] Zhou Ming, a man from Earth, traveled to the world of immortality and became a casual cultivator in Huangfenggufang City, Yue Kingdom. He accidentally activated the most precious Ten Thousand Formation Beads. [Collection: Through contact, all kinds of formations in the world can be collected and stored in the bead. [Deduction: Spiritual energy can be consumed to optimize, complete, and even create the collected formations. [Simulation: Consciousness can escape into the space inside the bead to practice formations. [Fusion: The formation can be fused into the bead. With a thought, the formation can be formed in an instant, and the formation can become one. Ten Thousand Formation Beads can analyze formations and make endless deductions. In the eyes of others, formations are dead objects that require the help of spiritual materials from the terrain. In Zhou Ming's eyes, the formation is alive and can be integrated into the body. The formation becomes one and the formation forms itself with a thought. By integrating the Great Spirit Gathering Array, his body can independently absorb the spiritual energy of heaven and earth, and his mana can be automatically restored. He merged with the Xuanwu True Spirit Formation and easily reached the Nascent Soul stage monk to strike with all his strength. He integrated the Five Elements Demon-Slaying Sword Formation, and thousands of sword energy instantly killed and transformed into a god! He integrates the large teleportation array and can travel tens of thousands of miles with a single thought. ... Time goes by, eras change, and we are accustomed to seeing vicissitudes of life. Unknowingly, Zhou Ming has stood at the top of the immortal path, sharing the same life span as heaven and earth, and the same brightness as the sun and the moon.
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Official(31)Scraped 3d ago
Formation still depends on the person's understanding. If the protagonist has poor understanding, this plug-in will be useless. Just like in the real world, ordinary people will not be able to learn advanced mathematics, physics, etc.
What the hell, the author didn't even read the original work when writing fan fiction. There are restrictions on the stone wall of the Bloody Forbidden Land. You can only pass through the four stone gates. There is a dead end through the stone wall. This is the first mortal fan fiction book I have read. I hope the author can polish it well.
It's not that good. The pressure is very fierce. And it doesn't look like a time traveler at all. It has no brains at all.
Prices have plummeted so much that the protagonist has raised the cost of pills from one or two spirit stones to dozens of spirit stones. The consumption of spirit stones by formations has also been increased by more than ten times. In short, there are all kinds of pressures to suppress the battle, and they will do whatever it takes to make the protagonist suffer.
I don't like some of the protagonist's actions and personality
1. The protagonist is imprudent, meticulous, and steady. The protagonist has no background and is not very strong. Often reveal strength For example, letting Han Li know about killing Senior Brother Lu and Wang Chan. The protagonist believes in Han Li so much. Forget about Senior Brother Lu, there is a Nascent Soul cultivator behind Wang Chan. He also told others that if he killed Wang Chan, wouldn't he be able to escape even if he did? Aren't you afraid that the Golden elixir or Yuanying monks will come? Do you have a brain? He is a talented person with such a big heart. 2. When it comes to going to the Lingshi Mine, just go after building the foundation. As a result, it kept dragging until the devil came. It's so funny that I can't write the plot so I just have to wait for the original plot. It seems that the protagonist really likes fighting. 3. How to arrange Xin Ruyin so as not to drag down the protagonist. If you want to close, close quickly; if not, stop the loss in time. Novels about mortals cultivating immortality are the most annoying and cumbersome. 4. Some of the protagonist's actions are not stable. Simply put, they are like human-machine dialogue. The strength, resources, etc. That exceed the protagonist's cultivation are often exposed. I don't even act, I'm laughing so hard
It's a very nice fanfic, but it doesn't have many chapters.
Why don't you read the original work when writing a fanfic?
Han Li's term was the penultimate one, and it was also Nangong's. When Mo Jiao appeared, why was Nangong there when you entered? If she doesn't go to get the gold box, she has to wait for you to go through the refining teleportation array for the second time to get it?
Why do you worship Ji Zhu as your teacher? Why do you need to get a soul lamp when there is still a Qi refining period?
There are not many good ones that ordinary people can write.
The protagonist's time travel has no plan at all. The time line is confirmed as soon as possible. If there are no plug-ins and the spiritual root is normal, then he must grab the small green bottle and die. If you don't dare to grab it, at least see if you have a chance to get the Immortal Ascension Order, and then make friends with Han Li in exchange for some cultivation resources. Calculate the time to collect the pills that captured the body. His spirit beast will go out to look for food, so he can secretly pick up the storage bag.
My brain hurts when I hear the grinding and chirping stuff. It's almost 6.9, Which is more than 8 points.
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Community(0)
Official(31)Scraped 3d ago
Formation still depends on the person's understanding. If the protagonist has poor understanding, this plug-in will be useless. Just like in the real world, ordinary people will not be able to learn advanced mathematics, physics, etc.
What the hell, the author didn't even read the original work when writing fan fiction. There are restrictions on the stone wall of the Bloody Forbidden Land. You can only pass through the four stone gates. There is a dead end through the stone wall. This is the first mortal fan fiction book I have read. I hope the author can polish it well.
It's not that good. The pressure is very fierce. And it doesn't look like a time traveler at all. It has no brains at all.
Prices have plummeted so much that the protagonist has raised the cost of pills from one or two spirit stones to dozens of spirit stones. The consumption of spirit stones by formations has also been increased by more than ten times. In short, there are all kinds of pressures to suppress the battle, and they will do whatever it takes to make the protagonist suffer.
I don't like some of the protagonist's actions and personality
1. The protagonist is imprudent, meticulous, and steady. The protagonist has no background and is not very strong. Often reveal strength For example, letting Han Li know about killing Senior Brother Lu and Wang Chan. The protagonist believes in Han Li so much. Forget about Senior Brother Lu, there is a Nascent Soul cultivator behind Wang Chan. He also told others that if he killed Wang Chan, wouldn't he be able to escape even if he did? Aren't you afraid that the Golden elixir or Yuanying monks will come? Do you have a brain? He is a talented person with such a big heart. 2. When it comes to going to the Lingshi Mine, just go after building the foundation. As a result, it kept dragging until the devil came. It's so funny that I can't write the plot so I just have to wait for the original plot. It seems that the protagonist really likes fighting. 3. How to arrange Xin Ruyin so as not to drag down the protagonist. If you want to close, close quickly; if not, stop the loss in time. Novels about mortals cultivating immortality are the most annoying and cumbersome. 4. Some of the protagonist's actions are not stable. Simply put, they are like human-machine dialogue. The strength, resources, etc. That exceed the protagonist's cultivation are often exposed. I don't even act, I'm laughing so hard
It's a very nice fanfic, but it doesn't have many chapters.
Why don't you read the original work when writing a fanfic?
Han Li's term was the penultimate one, and it was also Nangong's. When Mo Jiao appeared, why was Nangong there when you entered? If she doesn't go to get the gold box, she has to wait for you to go through the refining teleportation array for the second time to get it?
Why do you worship Ji Zhu as your teacher? Why do you need to get a soul lamp when there is still a Qi refining period?
There are not many good ones that ordinary people can write.
The protagonist's time travel has no plan at all. The time line is confirmed as soon as possible. If there are no plug-ins and the spiritual root is normal, then he must grab the small green bottle and die. If you don't dare to grab it, at least see if you have a chance to get the Immortal Ascension Order, and then make friends with Han Li in exchange for some cultivation resources. Calculate the time to collect the pills that captured the body. His spirit beast will go out to look for food, so he can secretly pick up the storage bag.
My brain hurts when I hear the grinding and chirping stuff. It's almost 6.9, Which is more than 8 points.
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