Naruto Dream Master!

I don't want Sarutobi Hiruzen to be whitewashed. If you really want to clear your name, this book will be almost half ruined. Now looking at what you mean, I already feel that half of it is clear. That old thing can't be cleansed at all. The old man just wanted to control Naruto. Family affection is another means of control.

Two bad points 1. Whitewashing Hiruzen Sarutobi is so disgusting 2. The protagonist has been dreaming, but I don't see what the protagonist is trying to do? Do we really have to wait until we carry rice before coming out? All readers left In fact, I didn't want to watch Yuan Fei after I saw him whitewashed.

Not even the behind-the-scenes stories, more than 200 pictures with almost no protagonists are just used for ending. The number of plots in the plot is comparable to the size of Metkai's acorns. This also allows the protagonist to travel through the fair and directly arrange the system to be the protagonist. The protagonist does not waste a lot of emotional points and waits for you to burn it at the festival in early April? What's the use of having a skinny protagonist in a time-travel novel? There is no difference between having a protagonist and not having a protagonist. Other books have different primary and secondary protagonists, but the protagonists of this book can't even be divided into secondary protagonists. It's worse than Parker, who doesn't even have a key plot. There is no layout, no goal, no goal, and no character. At least two-thirds of it is daily content and the plot has no ups and downs.

Whitewashing the third generation is really bad. As far as the original work is concerned, if you cleanse the third generation, there are many things that cannot be explained clearly.

The treatment of Naruto and Konohamaru cannot be vindicated. Not to mention Naruto's various troubles with Sarutobi without being punished. This is because the Jinchuuriki wants to control his emotions, and it is impossible to punish him in order to create a persona that is close to the people. It is purely a politician's approach.

If you wash the third generation, I will give you the rating you deserve if you wash the third generation.

There is no breaking point. It took more than 50 chapters to reveal that the 4th generation is Naruto's father. Then he arranged for Kakashi to whitewash the third generation. The role of the protagonist was very low! Just arrange your dreams every day, collect emotional points, and then buy, buy, buy. It doesn't make any sense, but when Kakashi cleans up the third generation at the ramen shop, the protagonist asks: Why can the identity of the son of the Hokage be hidden, but the identity of the Jinchuriki is known to everyone? I can't even give you this score. Of course you can say that this is all Danzo, but let me ask you, is it your fault for failing to supervise, shielding criminals, and not punishing wrongdoers? Danzo has done so much and still has a high position of authority. Does this mean that everything he did was tacitly accepted by the third generation? You said that if it is not the case of those three generations, it is a crime of dereliction of duty, and it is a serious dereliction of duty and a serious violation of the law. Not to mention the immediate death penalty, at least it will be life imprisonment. You said those three generations are the bad guys.

The protagonist is too much in the way, so I suggest he be kicked out.

I thought it was a mainstream Otsutsuki. What's the use of exchanging it for Zabuza? What dangers were you in before becoming a chuunin? Just let the plot overwhelm the combat power.

At the beginning, it was said that the abilities of the world can be exchanged, and then the protagonist bought the basic ninja abilities after getting the first emotional value. It was simply an NT approach. Chakra can't be concealed at all. An ordinary ramen restaurant employee suddenly turned into a ninja. Won't you immediately capture the ANBU? There shouldn't be too many people and abilities to discover. Does the protagonist have to gamble? There are so many abilities in the world, why do we have to stick to the ninja system? Guan Gong's battle with Qin Qiong is also a highlight. Not to mention what's the use of basic ninja abilities? It's better to buy a life-saving ability from other worlds, prioritize saving your life, and then slowly save money to develop your own system. For example, buying a Devil Fruit is faster than saving money to buy Otsutsuki. It's obviously a behind-the-scenes trick, but you still have to write down the basic skills and practice them yourself. Are you afraid that you won't die quickly enough?