The Sword That Swallows the Stars Cuts Through Reincarnation

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is worth recommending. It is in the line of time, not the line of popular space. The author's setting is very good, and the content is also very detailed (for fan fiction, it is really not easy to write in detail. Of course, for some people, it may be a bit verbose, but I think it is good to write in detail). Here I will give you a way. The author can consider it and give the conclusion directly. The explanation can be put in the comments. Otherwise, people will always say you are bad, and the evaluation of this book will definitely drop. Let's start with the advantages. Feng Shi Yimai is pretty good and relatively novel. This is another track. Let's start talking about the poison. 1: Regarding the World Master Genius of the Sirius Clan, you said he has a lot of wealth. I agree. It can be explained by the gift from the teacher, but the top soul treasure cannot be used. It cannot be explained at all. First of all, the author, you must understand that the number of the demon clan is equal to or even exceeds that of humans. There are constant internal battles, and the demon clan is also quite selfish (compared to the human race). You can start from Chaos. From the conversation with the Lord of Sirius, it was concluded that even the cheapest top soul treasure can be exchanged for a treasure (in the original work, the cheapest treasure seems to cost a few tenths of a treasure point). If that genius is just a disciple of the universe overlord, it is absolutely impossible to be given. Personally, I think that if he is from the Sirius clan, the second strongest person, Tianhua Venerable, can barely make sense when he is weak. 2: The protagonist, I understand that he knows the existence of Chongbao, but why can he know it in such detail? He has not yet joined the five major forces. He is a world lord and inquires about the limit information of a king (note that this is detailed information). This is simply impossible. Well, even if it is publicly owned, it is not something that he, a member of Sanwu, can know. 3: In addition, regarding the strength of Palace Master Bai Feng, let's talk about the conclusion first. How could he not have the strength of the top universe overlord? Author, you have to understand that not all the top ones can compete with the Lord of the Eclipse Palace, and there are so few top human race universe overlords. I don't believe that the human race will not give treasures. In addition, he has a special life clone of 3,000 levels. Logically speaking, he definitely has a Master of the Universe level teacher (it belongs to the Universe Virtual Company. When he first entered the initial universe, the Chaos City Lord could definitely see it. Chaos is extremely special. No, even if no other universe lord accepts him as a disciple, I think the Chaos City Lord might accept him himself, because there are not enough seedlings that can grow into top universe overlords, and they cannot sit idly by.) Here, the author can refer to Venerable Tianhua of the Demon Clan. His special life seems to be only 2,000 times (I forgot it was the original text, or a fan novel). Not all top overlords have the strength of the Lord of the Eclipse Palace. The definition of a top overlord in the original work seems to be that one has either a high life level, a divine body, or both. So when it comes to Palace Master Bai Feng, he must have a top cosmic overlord. No matter how weak he is, just say whether he has it or not. Finally, to summarize, this novel is not a popular novel. The author explains it very thoroughly, but I hope the author can change or modify the three major problems I mentioned above. In short, this novel is very worth reading and the quality is very high. On the track of Devouring the Starry Sky, I seem to see the shadow of Yuan Zhongzhizu. Come on, author

1. The entire article is procrastinating! There are five clone quotas that you don't have to hold off on. Then there are all kinds of romances. If the author didn't let the protagonist die, he would probably be the first wrongdoer who would die the fastest if he doesn't have a clone. 2. There are all kinds of inexplicable hidden plots and follow-ups that make people guess. I don't know the identity of the protagonist and how he traveled through time. Then the description of being transported is endless, and then the protagonist starts to take over. 3. There are restrictions on the five clones of the protagonist, but this restriction can only be used for elemental clones. Then just put it off in various ways! After I started using it, it contained the external incarnation of the body for no apparent reason😐. Then the original flesh and blood Nine Nether clones were changed into elemental clones and conceived. 4. I couldn't stand watching it anymore, and then I had a question about why the rating was so high, and then I started to read the comments. I found out that the water was so serious, I just brushed it off.

It can only be said that it still needs to be settled. It is almost boring to write a fan like this. The original work has already explained it in detail, and it is really hard to stand repeating it one by one.

After reading a few chapters, most of them were popular science. There are so many various introductions to popular science! ! ! !

It's too artificial. It's embarrassing because the author is pretending to be sophisticated. If he doesn't have the writing power, he just pretends to be a hammer.

Author, the good reviews in your comment area are just brushed up, and have you deleted the bad reviews? Otherwise, based on the content you are currently writing, it is impossible to have only this few bad reviews. 1. Water 2. Pretend to be mysterious and inexplicable 3. Likes to overpower the protagonist 4. The second setting of Blind Chicken After you finish writing it, you don't care whether it makes sense or not, as long as you feel happy writing it at the time, the reason why you are so excited is because you intend not to miss it.

I don't know who wrote this book with such a high rating. I saw that Chapter 34 starts with the basic background of the characters and then comes to the original secret realm. Normally, Chapter 2.3 Is enough. If there is more foreshadowing and background, it is only Chapter 8.9. The author wrote 34 chapters without stopping to write about his own basic background and weapons and equipment. Introduce any basic knowledge that has been memorized in advance. Jing introduced the introduction, and Che Zhuluan talked back and forth. Readers who read it said that the author of Mojishui also replied that he was introducing the background, otherwise it would not be possible to expand on it. In Chapter 34, he wrote about the original secret realm without writing anything. The background he mentioned did not add up to two chapters. But he kept saying it back and forth. This kind of book has such a high score. Are all the villains in the comment area always scolding and giving high scores? So who set the scores?

The first problem is that it's too watery. If this book has 100,000 words, he can give you 70,000 words. Going back and forth is that his understanding of the law is close to being awarded. He just mentioned it in the last chapter and he can still mention it at the end of the next chapter. And this is included in every book. He mentioned it again at the end of the next picture. Why does he keep mentioning this thing? Secondly, it's hard to explain exactly what the plug-in is and what it is. He mentions it every now and then, but after mentioning it, he doesn't tell us what the purpose of the plug-in is. Now it's all in the clouds. What about the third one? The most serious problem is the spaceship. He always says that he has a mechanical spaceship, and he doesn't like other things, but he still likes to mention this spaceship or go to the mall to look at it. I read 33 chapters, and at least 20 chapters are about spaceships.

Although it's a bit confusing, it's very good for Devouring fandoms. The Fengshi route does not follow the public space route, which is quite novel. Every time I raise a question, the author will reply carefully. I just saw it on the shelves. (It seems that everyone persuaded me to put it on the shelves. 😘). I hope it won't be criticized after it is put on the shelves. I write it well and hope to finish it. There are still quite a few good Devouring fandoms.

There is too much nonsense. If you are reading Devouring fandom, you have basically read the original work. If you have some common sense, there is no need to write so many chapters.