Dou Po: One-stop Start

The writing is poor and unreasonable. A first-grade elixir costs one thousand gold coins and a bottle of first-grade elixir costs 50 gold coins. What does the author think? No matter how the original work is, you should at least be reasonable! Who would go out of their way to look at the price of the original book? If there is any difference, just explain it. If your book is unreasonable, it is garbage. What is a set of medicinal materials? At most, it is just a pair or a bottle of medicinal materials. Do you think it is reasonable for the author? If you don't know the data, don't write it so clearly. If you write it clearly, as long as the book is reasonable, no one will say anything about you. But you are shooting yourself in the foot. You don't need to write such things as how much you earn and how much you sell. No one will care. It doesn't matter whether the protagonist is short of money or not. All you need to do is give a reason in one stroke. This book is one of the few rubbish I have ever seen. In a world where fantasy force is the most important, the protagonist's skills, abilities, and combat power are all mentioned in one stroke. It keeps writing about trivial things. Just write it! Please write more reasonably!

Can we end this Yun Yun quickly? From Chapter 41, when Yun Yun was caught, to Chapter 56, the protagonist and Yun Yun made another five-year agreement. In more than ten chapters, the protagonist kissed Yun Yun, then looked at her body and then disappeared. I have been dawdling there and writing it like you, the author, waiting for the protagonist to eat Yun Yun. I guess the kid next door can make soy sauce.

Is Yun Zheng so weak? This is something I can't understand. My qualifications are rubbish. Is it good-looking? Obviously he's not that good either. After such a long period of development, there are many anime models who are much better than him. Another point is that in the first ten pictures, the main character was only interested in profit, and now he starts to look like a hungry ghost again. In the first part, the fighting king did not explain how to make medicine at all, but in the second part, he suddenly became a third-grade alchemist. I don't know what the author is thinking. You didn't have any foreshadowing at all, and suddenly you can make medicine. The gap between the conflict before and after is too big. I thought it was because you were obsessed with pursuing the big road. After 40 photos, you were a hungry ghost. It really only had a little foreshadowing. No brother is really like his grandmother.

He is both mature and mature, he likes sexual immorality and is impotent

Not very good, the logic doesn't make sense in many places

I don't know how I became an alchemist later on, don't you think it's strange that someone who has the talent of being an alchemist can actually become poor? Haha, no wonder the time traveler has the talent of being an alchemist. In addition to being poor in the early stage, the one in the back will be poor. He actually robbed and defeated the Dou Wang. Are you kidding?

I just looked at the previous article. Pig's feet are a typical character like Tang San, and the author is like that.

The writing is quite good, but Yun Yun is too slow. I think Yun Lanzong took a big advantage. Yun Yun and Nalan Yanran's talents are actually very average. The reason why they look good depends largely on the Gate of Life and Death. Otherwise, their talents are very average. The protagonist is a 23-year-old sixth-grade alchemist and a seven-star Dou Emperor. If there was no life and death gate, Yun Yun would have to be in her 30s at the earliest to become a Dou Emperor. In terms of beauty, Su Mei from the Black Corner Region is no worse than Yun Yun. Su Mei is also in the top ten of the black list. There is no door to life and death, but she is a real fighting emperor.

Well, I haven't seen such high-quality Doupo for a long time. Don't write discontinuous updates, comrade. The monthly vote is for you.

Come on, don't stop updating. Although some parts are indeed a bit unreasonable, compared with other Dou Po fans, yours is very good.