Brother Guan Yunchang
by Xuanzang
About This Novel
In the fifth year of Guanghe (AD 182), the Yellow Turban Rebellion was gaining momentum, and the great Han Dynasty was coming to an end. At this time, Liu Bei was still wandering around the market and making friends with heroes. Yuan Shao was busy helping scholars and accumulating fame. After Cao Cao failed to assassinate the eunuch, he hid back in his hometown of Qiao County, and Sun Quan had just been born... At the same time, Guan Zhao II became a sibling of Guan Yu. But seeing that the shocking fission was about to happen, and with the help of his understanding of the Three Kingdoms at the end of Han Dynasty, he decided to take his brother to Zhuoxian in advance to help Liu Bei establish his foundation. But this time, he vowed to lead the people of Ji Han to rejuvenate the Han Dynasty without any regrets!
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Official(3)Scraped 23d ago
The plot design is good, but the use of classical Chinese is not appropriate enough.
5 stars encouragement
You can speed up the pace appropriately. I have been reading books for more than 40 years, and most of the authors are desperate for success. As a result, the results are not satisfactory after being published, and they can only end it hastily.
Authors should read more books and read readers' reviews.
The writing is indeed not very good. Many things are based on the author's own imagination without any basis and does not pay attention to the butterfly effect. The author also did not bring in a protagonist who is about to face troubled times without gold fingers to analyze and solve the problem. Forget about causing trouble, the Yellow Turbans have not yet revolted, and they killed Zhang Rang in such a period. It does not develop itself, does not maintain the historical trajectory, and does not protect its own advantage of foresight. The protagonist's behavior is more like catering to the author's conjecture (which is called blind imagination in a bad way). The character creation is too poor and has no own thoughts and realistic logic. It is not considered a brainless novel, it is too far away. It deviates too much when it comes to historical writing. It is too brainless when it comes to Machiavellian military writing. I really don't know what you want to write. You don't grasp the key and always like to add superfluous information. They don't look alike but have a bit of a resemblance. You don't have any merit at all.
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 23d ago
The plot design is good, but the use of classical Chinese is not appropriate enough.
5 stars encouragement
You can speed up the pace appropriately. I have been reading books for more than 40 years, and most of the authors are desperate for success. As a result, the results are not satisfactory after being published, and they can only end it hastily.
Authors should read more books and read readers' reviews.
The writing is indeed not very good. Many things are based on the author's own imagination without any basis and does not pay attention to the butterfly effect. The author also did not bring in a protagonist who is about to face troubled times without gold fingers to analyze and solve the problem. Forget about causing trouble, the Yellow Turbans have not yet revolted, and they killed Zhang Rang in such a period. It does not develop itself, does not maintain the historical trajectory, and does not protect its own advantage of foresight. The protagonist's behavior is more like catering to the author's conjecture (which is called blind imagination in a bad way). The character creation is too poor and has no own thoughts and realistic logic. It is not considered a brainless novel, it is too far away. It deviates too much when it comes to historical writing. It is too brainless when it comes to Machiavellian military writing. I really don't know what you want to write. You don't grasp the key and always like to add superfluous information. They don't look alike but have a bit of a resemblance. You don't have any merit at all.
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