Executive Wei

The book recommended by Beisong was good at first. It can be seen that the author carefully checked the information, but then it was not good. However, the writing style and plot were of average quality. There was nothing eye-catching, and there was a sense of dissonance. There were some problems focusing on the harmony between the character expressions and the differences of the times. The main problem is that the story is a bit stiff and not so rounded and natural. The era of the story is from the period of the Five Hunan Dynasties to the Northern and Southern Dynasties. The author should have spent a lot of energy on reviewing complex information, from titles to the environment, large systems and customs of the time. A lot was written in the first dozen chapters. But it is because I am too eager to describe some things and change some things that the story becomes a bit stiff. I want to express too much and change too much, which makes the story seem too deliberate. This is the sense of dissonance caused by the difference between modern thinking and ancient environment mentioned above. I have read more than 20 chapters now, and I feel that it is very awkward to read, as if the author is holding a lot of things and has not finished them. One is on the table, and there is no time to chew carefully. Overall, the main problem is that this is a novel. Successful novels such as Romance of the Three Kingdoms and Chronicles of the Three Kingdoms are very different. Storytelling is more important than authenticity. I don't know if anyone likes to read novels as official history. In terms of readability, the more realistic it is, the more difficult it is to improve readability. Grasping the scale is a problem for many historical novels.

The paragraph about Hua Mulan should not have been written. Hua Mulan is not a national hero and should be considered an enemy. Her spirit of joining the army in place of her father is commendable. 1. Hua Mulan was loyal to the Northern Wei Dynasty ruled by the nomadic Xianbei people. She fought against the nomadic Rouran people. The enemy of the Northern Wei Dynasty was the Liu Song Dynasty ruled by the Han people. The enemy of the enemy is a friend, and the Rouran people are the allies of the Han people. 2. There is no conclusive conclusion about Hua Mulan's famous clan. It is more likely that Hua transformed into a Xianbei people. The status of the Han people in the Northern Wei Dynasty was very low. They were guarded by the rulers and would not let you have armor and weapons. Hua Mulan is skilled in bow and horse, has martial arts skills, has weapons and armor, and has a rich family, so her status is definitely higher than that of the Han people. To boast of an enemy hero as one's own national hero is a joke.

This book seems boring at first, but it can be said that it gave me a surprise at the end. I learned a lot of things, such as staying in a hotel is not called a hotel, what is the origin of a hotel, what is a war horse, etc., Etc., Etc., Which shows that the author is very careful. It is more realistic, and the description of the battlefield is very detailed, including some details, which are paid attention to. The only flaw is that the author's writing style is relatively immature, but it gets better later on. It seems that the author is still making progress. Also, the updates are not good enough. It only has 4,000 words a day, which is not enough. Hope to see Hua Mulan appear! The Northern Wei Dynasty was a Hu people's regime. The main character was the descendant of Liu Xiu, Emperor Guangwu of Han Dynasty. Liu Jinbo, a Hu and Han person who intermarried with the Xiongnu, was like Yang Jian and Li Shimin in history. He had great potential in this era of mixed Hu and Han people. Looking forward to...

He is a good young man of the 21st century who loves smoking, playing games, and staying up all night... Three good things! Originally, he was playing a game, a historical role-playing game. This game was addictive and addictive, and he was no exception. No, he was so addicted that he didn't sleep every day and kept playing. The most important thing was that he got into a fight with a Krypton Emperor. I don't know if it was a favor, but he just got involved. And Liu Sheng, who didn't have much money, could only rely on his liver. At this point, the liver emperor, who is known as always online, was born. We can see him during the day, and we can see him at two or three o'clock at night. Almost as long as we call him, he is there. His figure is everywhere in the game. With all kinds of brushes, his combat power is also rising slowly. This shocked the Krypton Emperor and quickly made another fortune. For several days in a row, the two refused to give in to each other. The Krypton Emperor was so relaxed. He thought to himself, your liver is good, your liver is good. Your liver is not as good as mine to recharge a thousand dollars a day. It feels good to earn money all the time. Can you not sleep for three days? Liu Sheng also thought, you can spend money on it, you can spend money on it, I can go without sleep for three days and make you bankrupt. Three days later, with eyes wide open, he manipulated characters to fight back and forth with the Krypton Emperor, and was defeated by the Krypton Emperor again. Seven days later, the Liver Emperor Liu Sheng, who felt uncomfortable everywhere, manipulated his character and started fighting the Krypton Emperor again. He died countless times. The moment he finally killed the Krypton Emperor, Liu Sheng relaxed and felt comfortable all over. As soon as I relaxed, my eyes felt drowsy. At this point, the generation of Liver Emperor, who was known as always online, stayed awake for seven days and seven nights, and disappeared into the gaming world. The gaming world was finally occupied by the Krypton Emperor... The liver emperor Liu Sheng was confused when he woke up. He was in a yurt. He thought he had been kidnapped, but when he thought about it, I had no money and I didn't offend anyone, so that's not the case. He moved his fingers, and immediately felt a burst of pain, which almost made him faint. When he looked at his body, hehe, isn't this a mummy? When he saw this scene, he knew that this was his body, which was covered in injuries, and he was so frightened that he did not dare to move. I don't know how long it took, but a bunch of people with bald hair and pleated trousers (Hu clothes) who looked like ancient people appeared. This shocked him. Did he travel through time? Or traveled through time? Fortunately, these barbarians came to take care of him and did not harm him. As time went by, under the care of a bunch of barbarians, his injuries gradually improved. Because he didn't understand the barbarians' words, he didn't dare to speak. Gradually, he understood them and gained more memories in his mind. He really traveled through time. He also knew what era this was. This was 421 AD, an era of conflict between Hu and Han. And his body is the descendant of Liu Jinbo and Waiguo woman. Although their parents often say who their ancestors are, their years of nomadic life have integrated them into the country, and outsiders have regarded them as barbarians. I don't know if God did it on purpose. Seeing that the Dugu family was about to forget their roots, they sent Liu Sheng here. But Liu Sheng couldn't accept this identity! Because he knows that no matter what time it is now, as long as it is ancient times, it must pay attention to one's origin. He is a barbarian? ... Oh no, Han people? ... That's not right either! ! ! This... No, we must get our ancestors back! If you let me be a spy, then you have to let me go home. No one knows about it. How can I just play with a hammer? With this in mind, Liu Sheng ran out on the day his injury recovered. He stayed there for three years. Although he has not had a system plug-in in the past three years, he is already very satisfied that his own knowledge and thinking that are thousands of years ahead of him still exist, not to mention that he has been given such a strong body? After seeing the power-generating techniques of later generations, and after some training, the martial arts can be considered extraordinary. As for why it is extraordinary, you can see that Tuoba Tao, the first barbarian in the Northern and Southern Dynasties, had to climb up the horse's trunk when he escaped, and then climbed over the wall, which illustrates one thing. This world has gravity. People can't fly, respect Newton very much and completely scientific world. As for the so-called martial arts, it is a matter of practice makes perfect and the amount of force exerted. Flying over the roof and walking over the wall is pure nonsense. Jumping three meters high is a superman. Just like UFO and true love, I have only heard of it but never seen it. Therefore, in his opinion, his wish to molest a girl with soldiers and food can still be realized...

Author, I would like to ask you whether this book is for helping others or for oneself to strive for world domination. I haven't started reading it yet. Please clarify, thank you!

The first 20 is okay, but the plot behind it is too childish. I even cut off the ginseng myself and was speechless.

Writing Mulan is really my biggest failure, it's embarrassing to watch.

Maybe the book is a good book, but I don't have the peace of mind. I have read too many books. I have my own judgment on a book. I have also read a lot of historical articles. Some are good and some are bad. I don't go out of my way to praise anyone or which work. The quality is completely up to my heart. Everyone reads it. The readings are different. I didn't continue reading this one because I didn't have a sense of immersion, it was quite difficult to read, and I wasn't very interested. I've read a lot of martial arts, fantasy, fairy tales, and urban novels. It's not that I can't accept this kind of non-vernacular novels. I can only say that the quality is not there yet.

Has the author entered the palace? Will you come back?

It's so complicated to read, with too few vernacular words, and I'm a little tired from reading it.