On Top of the Elf Mountain
by Mang Yue
About This Novel
(The new book "Elf: Planning the Start to Metagross" is officially uploaded and everyone is welcome to collect it. This story begins with hearing about Metagross...) The ultimate illusion, no distinction between true and false! --Zoroark Buddha said: "There is a ghost in the heart" - Geng Gui The pride of a quasi-god cannot be blasphemed! --Bangira Poisonous to the depths and naturally cute~--Alidos You can fly even without wings! --Megalodon The more little brothers I have, the stronger I am! --Heruga It's impossible to act cute by being cute - Moon Elf If you love me, hug me - Meng Ge Naiya Book club group: 711868761, welcome to harass at any time~
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Official(160)Scraped 10d ago
4 year bookworm review
I have read a lot of Pokemon fan fiction, but they all deviate from the theme of Pokemon, such as starting with a champion level and starting with a shining Rayquaza. . . . . . Invincible at the beginning, and then in the harem, born with a lusty aura and a stallion aura. . . . . Easily use a system to draw prizes and get whatever you need, cool article not suitable for Pokemon 😪
I heard that the protagonist intends to regain the new evil system
If the next evil element is too unnatural and bad, so the three evil dragons and the water + evil guaguapaowa will obviously not work. Besides, the water evil already has the Megalodon, so it is not necessary. Poison + evil is also unnecessary. Fire + evil, Fire Spot Meow is okay, but the place is too far away and it is Yu Sanjia. It does not fit. I thought The two elves have Fighting + Evil, Commander Slash and Rogue Panda. The race values of these two elves are not too bad, and they are not from the Yusan family. They are relatively rare. Pig's Foot lacks the Fighting + Evil attributes, so I think they are very good. Both in terms of appearance and complementary attributes, they are suitable elves.
I have some small personal suggestions, hehe
I think since the protagonist has the power of darkness, is it possible to add a slight mutation to make Eevee evolve? For example, use the protagonist's blood to add a little foreshadowing during the Eevee period, and then add the power of darkness during evolution to promote its mutation and evolution. Of course, this kind of mutation has a probability of failure. It is unlikely to take risks based on the character of the protagonist, so some opportunities are needed. For example, because of some things, Ibrahimovic particularly wants to become stronger (or has no choice but to do so), and then the protagonist has no choice but to respect Ibrahimovic's ideas (duh, I feel so cliche myself). The above are some personal ideas, I hope the author can adopt them (methods... I can only think of such old-fashioned ones😲). If the author is optimistic about my idea, I hope he can think of a better one😷
Koga Ninja is pretty good! Water and evil, if they were still flashes, they would be all black and quite handsome...
How to say it?
Not enough compared to the top, but more than enough than the bottom. The best elf novel right now is Darkness Rises .
The picture shows all the evil elves (probably)
Not bad,,,,,,,
A: Have you heard? B: What? A: There are male Gardevoir. B: Isn't this better? A: Why? B: Now you don't have to worry about getting pregnant.
The first elf mage evolution
I feel handsome. I feel handsome.
The heroine is Sirona!
BUG
I said before that Heiluga was released to protect Joey, but why did he come back later? Did he forget to mention it or did he remember it wrong?(￣_￣;)彡
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Official(160)Scraped 10d ago
4 year bookworm review
I have read a lot of Pokemon fan fiction, but they all deviate from the theme of Pokemon, such as starting with a champion level and starting with a shining Rayquaza. . . . . . Invincible at the beginning, and then in the harem, born with a lusty aura and a stallion aura. . . . . Easily use a system to draw prizes and get whatever you need, cool article not suitable for Pokemon 😪
I heard that the protagonist intends to regain the new evil system
If the next evil element is too unnatural and bad, so the three evil dragons and the water + evil guaguapaowa will obviously not work. Besides, the water evil already has the Megalodon, so it is not necessary. Poison + evil is also unnecessary. Fire + evil, Fire Spot Meow is okay, but the place is too far away and it is Yu Sanjia. It does not fit. I thought The two elves have Fighting + Evil, Commander Slash and Rogue Panda. The race values of these two elves are not too bad, and they are not from the Yusan family. They are relatively rare. Pig's Foot lacks the Fighting + Evil attributes, so I think they are very good. Both in terms of appearance and complementary attributes, they are suitable elves.
I have some small personal suggestions, hehe
I think since the protagonist has the power of darkness, is it possible to add a slight mutation to make Eevee evolve? For example, use the protagonist's blood to add a little foreshadowing during the Eevee period, and then add the power of darkness during evolution to promote its mutation and evolution. Of course, this kind of mutation has a probability of failure. It is unlikely to take risks based on the character of the protagonist, so some opportunities are needed. For example, because of some things, Ibrahimovic particularly wants to become stronger (or has no choice but to do so), and then the protagonist has no choice but to respect Ibrahimovic's ideas (duh, I feel so cliche myself). The above are some personal ideas, I hope the author can adopt them (methods... I can only think of such old-fashioned ones😲). If the author is optimistic about my idea, I hope he can think of a better one😷
Koga Ninja is pretty good! Water and evil, if they were still flashes, they would be all black and quite handsome...
How to say it?
Not enough compared to the top, but more than enough than the bottom. The best elf novel right now is Darkness Rises .
The picture shows all the evil elves (probably)
Not bad,,,,,,,
A: Have you heard? B: What? A: There are male Gardevoir. B: Isn't this better? A: Why? B: Now you don't have to worry about getting pregnant.
The first elf mage evolution
I feel handsome. I feel handsome.
The heroine is Sirona!
BUG
I said before that Heiluga was released to protect Joey, but why did he come back later? Did he forget to mention it or did he remember it wrong?(￣_￣;)彡
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The protagonist is reborn. Before his rebirth, he was an organization killer, so his character at the beginning seemed a bit confusing to me. Through the abilities he obtained in his previous life, he escaped from the organization in this life with foresight. During the adventure along the way, I met new friends and new elf companions, and slowly changed myself. In short, the more you write later, the better. Come on!
, with a word count of more than 80 W, the protagonist is a native reborn, and he was a killer in his previous life. In this life, he no longer wants to be a killer, he just wants to find his original partners and become the strongest together. The progress is fast. The initial favorite is Zoroa, and he is expected to specialize in evil.
The killer of the Rocket Organization, he cannot let go of his emotional bond with the elves in this life.
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