Wandering Around the Qin Dynasty's Career as a Sword Dealer

They are Jianxingzhi, Mingche, Yuelongmen Silence, Chixiao, Lengxiang, Xia Gu Qingguang Yin, Shaoyang, Hua Chongjin, Bing Po. I personally think the skin is more beautiful, Fuchun Mountain Residence and Purple Gold Sword are also good, but no pictures can be found.

The sword made of "Uranium 235" is called the "Lord Devourer"

It's just that the emotional scene is super awkward and a bit obscene. I strongly recommend not writing it. It won't affect the direction of the whole story anyway.

Overall it's okay, but if you can't write emotional scenes, you don't need to write them. Isn't your 16th chapter embarrassing?

It was okay at first, but the logic in Chapter 149 was problematic. The author of this comment will delete it as much as he likes.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. A smelly smell will come to your face, and I'll dig my toes into the ground while listening to the book.

Swords are boring. It would be interesting if famous swords such as Changhong, Bingso and Qingguang were made in the Qin Dynasty.

What kind of image is the animation? What did you write, the description of the appearance, the behavior of the male protagonist in the brothel, and then the weird smile. The charm of this character itself is a cold-faced killer, because the child has motherhood and becomes a human being. When you write this kind of thing before, I doubt your understanding of Qin Shimingyue. I can't stand it anymore and ran away.

Have you forgotten about the Amazing Salamander? How many chapters have passed and you still haven't found the protagonist? How come the Amazing Salamander is here too and is still on the way here on horseback?

In Chapter 154, killing someone is not easy, and you let him live without a last hit. If you say there is a plot about him later, then don't write a plot about killing him. The first few chapters are not very good at writing in such a grinding manner.