
The First Ancient Emperor Who Covers the Sky
by The Shining Sun Covers The Sun
About This Novel
At the beginning of time immemorial, thousands of races competed for the throne. The afterglow of the mythical heaven still shines on the universe, and various bloodlines and physiques are competing to emerge, starting a battle for destiny. The destiny of the human race is not in the human race, but Jiang Ling defied heaven and became the first emperor in ancient times, opening a new chapter for the human race. The First Emperor, the first emperor from the beginning of time, was a person who would never appear in the past or in the future. He stood alone on the long river of time, overlooking the passage of eternity...
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Official(30)Scraped 6d ago
write without basis
Before writing a fanfic, read and research it carefully. It took 1,000 years for the Emperor of Immortality to become a general and enlightenment. When he was in the Emperor's Heavenly Court, he already had emperor-level combat power. At that time, even if he was not a different kind of enlightenment, he would at least be a quasi-9. Xiaoyao Tianzun ran out, and he had just finished eating the Nine Transformations Elixir. He was just claiming to be himself, so why did he run out? The original work was written by him and you also wrote it
This book is going to be a hit, this book is going to be a hit 😚
The fighting power of pig's feet is really weak. Even if you are a fairy in the mortal world, you can't even think of a way to fight with self-respect. It takes so much effort for the Hongchen Immortal to defeat a crippled immortal. Isn't the Hongchen Immortal a quasi-immortal king? In your eyes, the Red Dust Immortal is not in the realm of immortality, but still in the realm of humanity? He also said that Lingbao Tianzun, the ninth mortal immortal, only has a little hope of surviving the catastrophe of becoming an immortal? People who have been immortals in the ninth world are almost immortal kings, but they still can't survive the tribulation of becoming an immortal?
This setting! The creatures in the Zhetian universe are all the creatures from the Immortal Realm that thrived after they fell when the Immortal Realm was shattered!
When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was a talented author.
I didn't expect it to be written by Yiyun, and I couldn't understand many of the settings in the original work.
It's rubbish, the logic is confusing, and the writing by humans is worse than the writing by AI.
The entire timeline is a mess. I don't know what I'm writing. It's here and there. It starts to get messy after about 100 chapters. It's a waste of my time to skip reading.
You can't even see the suggestions I gave you, can you?
Damn it, so many typos really affect the reading experience, okay? Have you read it yourself after sending it?
After 60 photos, it becomes extremely disgusting.
Ma Dan, where are the traces of your practice after the Great Emperor? Damn it, he has become a quasi-immortal king all of a sudden, right? I don't know why I suddenly turned into the original Tianzun, right? It all made me confused and unsightly.
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Official(30)Scraped 6d ago
write without basis
Before writing a fanfic, read and research it carefully. It took 1,000 years for the Emperor of Immortality to become a general and enlightenment. When he was in the Emperor's Heavenly Court, he already had emperor-level combat power. At that time, even if he was not a different kind of enlightenment, he would at least be a quasi-9. Xiaoyao Tianzun ran out, and he had just finished eating the Nine Transformations Elixir. He was just claiming to be himself, so why did he run out? The original work was written by him and you also wrote it
This book is going to be a hit, this book is going to be a hit 😚
The fighting power of pig's feet is really weak. Even if you are a fairy in the mortal world, you can't even think of a way to fight with self-respect. It takes so much effort for the Hongchen Immortal to defeat a crippled immortal. Isn't the Hongchen Immortal a quasi-immortal king? In your eyes, the Red Dust Immortal is not in the realm of immortality, but still in the realm of humanity? He also said that Lingbao Tianzun, the ninth mortal immortal, only has a little hope of surviving the catastrophe of becoming an immortal? People who have been immortals in the ninth world are almost immortal kings, but they still can't survive the tribulation of becoming an immortal?
This setting! The creatures in the Zhetian universe are all the creatures from the Immortal Realm that thrived after they fell when the Immortal Realm was shattered!
When I saw the title of the book, I thought it was a talented author.
I didn't expect it to be written by Yiyun, and I couldn't understand many of the settings in the original work.
It's rubbish, the logic is confusing, and the writing by humans is worse than the writing by AI.
The entire timeline is a mess. I don't know what I'm writing. It's here and there. It starts to get messy after about 100 chapters. It's a waste of my time to skip reading.
You can't even see the suggestions I gave you, can you?
Damn it, so many typos really affect the reading experience, okay? Have you read it yourself after sending it?
After 60 photos, it becomes extremely disgusting.
Ma Dan, where are the traces of your practice after the Great Emperor? Damn it, he has become a quasi-immortal king all of a sudden, right? I don't know why I suddenly turned into the original Tianzun, right? It all made me confused and unsightly.









