Daming: Fourth Brother, Take Us to Cultivate Immortality Together!
About This Novel
(PS: In a word, the protagonist was written by following a reading master!) Zhu Gaohuang, who was reborn as Zhu Di's fourth son, has become invincible in the world by virtue of the immortality check-in system. But in order to cultivate immortality and live forever, he left home and traveled around the world for several years. When he returned to the palace with a sword. This is when the style of painting changes... Zhu Gaochi: "Second brother, I haven't asked you for anything in so many years. Now I just ask you to inherit the throne!" Zhu Gaosuo: "Hey, brother, that's not the case for you. I was born with a sharp mouth and monkey cheeks. I still think that my eldest nephew has the appearance of an emperor!" Zhu Zhanji: "Second uncle, but I have become fourth uncle's personal guard!"
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Official(46)Scraped 2d ago
The word "love" wins over heaven. Ruthless novels cannot retain people after all. People are all emotional. Did you not say a word to your mother about saving her? A little flawed. Unethical. Most book friends like to take flying people, and one person can achieve the goal of chickens and dogs ascending to heaven. The routines written by the great master Angelu, the pig's feet combat power is the main line, the hostile forces are the dungeons, family and friends are the plot branches, main line, dungeon, new map, new dungeon, branch line, enhancement, krypton gold, etc. The starting point master, Tomato, Chendong, and the like are all new maps and new dungeons, and they are always refreshed to the climax, not to be strong, but to be strong. What did I write?
My personal suggestion is that if there is a heroine, it's best not to write the protagonist as if he has a cold personality. If there is no heroine, then just put away the emotional plot. Anyway, I think it's quite awkward.
Your use of punctuation marks is really random. There are many unnecessary places added randomly. It is obvious that you want to use sentence fragmentation to forcibly improve the quality. Isn't it awkward for you to read it yourself? It's so cool that it doesn't get more and more uncomfortable the more you watch it, so you just make up the word count, right?
Who is the heroine? I want Xu Miaojin and Miss Ji
Immortal cultivators always write about the intrigues between mortals, are you embarrassed?
Ten years ago, maybe I could still watch it
You were acting cool the whole time, you idiot.
If you want to cultivate immortality and have a lot of love words attached to you, you will be speechless and a lot of burden.
I can't see anyone, but I keep boasting that I have been poisoned to death, everyone can do whatever they want
What is written next? Are you going to play with the great Ming Dynasty?
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Official(46)Scraped 2d ago
The word "love" wins over heaven. Ruthless novels cannot retain people after all. People are all emotional. Did you not say a word to your mother about saving her? A little flawed. Unethical. Most book friends like to take flying people, and one person can achieve the goal of chickens and dogs ascending to heaven. The routines written by the great master Angelu, the pig's feet combat power is the main line, the hostile forces are the dungeons, family and friends are the plot branches, main line, dungeon, new map, new dungeon, branch line, enhancement, krypton gold, etc. The starting point master, Tomato, Chendong, and the like are all new maps and new dungeons, and they are always refreshed to the climax, not to be strong, but to be strong. What did I write?
My personal suggestion is that if there is a heroine, it's best not to write the protagonist as if he has a cold personality. If there is no heroine, then just put away the emotional plot. Anyway, I think it's quite awkward.
Your use of punctuation marks is really random. There are many unnecessary places added randomly. It is obvious that you want to use sentence fragmentation to forcibly improve the quality. Isn't it awkward for you to read it yourself? It's so cool that it doesn't get more and more uncomfortable the more you watch it, so you just make up the word count, right?
Who is the heroine? I want Xu Miaojin and Miss Ji
Immortal cultivators always write about the intrigues between mortals, are you embarrassed?
Ten years ago, maybe I could still watch it
You were acting cool the whole time, you idiot.
If you want to cultivate immortality and have a lot of love words attached to you, you will be speechless and a lot of burden.
I can't see anyone, but I keep boasting that I have been poisoned to death, everyone can do whatever they want
What is written next? Are you going to play with the great Ming Dynasty?
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