
Daming Partner
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By chance, Shen Lang, who was desperate, discovered that his warehouse was actually connected to the Ming Dynasty Palace, so he had a communication with Chongzhen, the last emperor of the Ming Dynasty, across time and space. When Emperor Chongzhen, who almost killed this uninvited visitor, learned that the Ming Dynasty only had one year left to live, the two sides finally had a basis for cooperation. Partner Q skirt: 931787875
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Official(77)Scraped 23d ago
I can't bear to see anyone calling me "Emperor, Emperor" all the time. Generally, each dynasty has its own name.
For example, in the Han Dynasty, they were called county magistrates and everyone, in the Sui and Tang Dynasties, they were called saints, in the Song Dynasty, they were called officials, in the Yuan Dynasty, they were called great Khans, in the Ming Dynasty, they were called long live emperors, and in the Qing Dynasty, they were called emperors. There is no denying the Qing Cheng Ming system. But would you use the title of an emperor who destroyed the previous dynasty?
Everything else is pretty acceptable to me, but the fact that the infantry rides on horseback and the kite cavalry seems outrageous to me! The key point is to dismount and shoot every time you shoot! Author: Do you know how long it takes for a group of people to dismount and line up to form a fighting force? Didn't you tell me after you fired the gun whether you could catch the horse? It takes several minutes to go up and down. If there are too many people, if you keep issuing instructions, the team will become chaotic! Do you know how far a cavalryman can run in one minute? Let's say three or four miles away! Do you feel like you are playing a game? Can you mount the horse with one click, move to chop + look back and dig? As a veteran rider of twenty years, this matter is very absurd to me. Not every horse is close to its owner. If you jump off the horse while running and not tethered, there is a high probability that you will not be able to catch it back! If you want to get on the horse at this time, you can only compete with it to see who can run faster! Do you still need to carry the tethered horse with you in the team? I know you want to give your own personnel more damage, you want to hit accurately, and you want to run fast. Do these things together make you really powerful? If you ask me to dismount and line up, I think it would be more reliable to shoot directly from the horse! This is a typical example of a layman guiding an expert! After you finish writing these tactics, you feel nothing is wrong. All you have to do is type a few lines with your fingers! How embarrassing it would be for professionals to hear the term "mounted infantry"!
The subject matter is good
It's just that the fighting in the next few dozen chapters feels boring. Others read novels for fun, not nonsense, such as returning to modern times to make things, such as killing treacherous ministers, such as fighting foreigners, such as destroying other people's countries, such as getting plants or seeds, etc. Nowadays, we read novels at a fast pace. If you write a sword-fighting slave and write dozens of chapters, I am not complaining! Personal opinion!
The author gets the point of the book wrong
For this kind of novel that can travel back and forth, people will not regard it as a war-type historical novel. It is really unnecessary for you to describe a war in detail in such a long space, and completely ignore the exciting points that readers want to see. I wrote several chapters just for watching the movie with Chongzhen, and wrote dozens of chapters for a war, which made me a little impatient. I hope the author can make some adjustments in future chapters.
I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 70. It's too vicious. Are you copying modern military training methods to train modern soldiers with flintlock guns? Modern military training is relatively close to the line of individual soldiers. Modern soldiers who use flintlock rifles must use group concentrated fire training to exert their maximum strength. So is this reasonable? ? ?
No, how long will this battle last?
The author has gone in the wrong direction. What readers want to see is the protagonist carrying out reforms step by step to change the Ming Dynasty, not your detailed description of the war. He obviously has such good equipment, but he insists on wearing footcloths for the old lady. It's normal to write about wars, but every chapter is basically watery, and I feel very unhappy when there is no progress. I originally signed up as a member and came to take a look, but I quit since I started playing Jiannu. I came back a month later and I am still here. The book here is very good. It is rare to be the same as the one next door in Chongzhen, but there are many other wars, but every chapter has progress. How can I not write well? You are a partner, not a war person
Tell the truth, boss
Your subject matter is very good. I have read more than fifty pages of this one you wrote, but I don't have any sense of involvement at all. There are too many things explained, and it is difficult to get involved in the story. I just need to write more about the storyline and explain the manufacturing process.
Chapter 63, death due to poison 😂
The author teaches us how to make guns again
Not slandering, telling the truth
The first part was fine, but after more than 50 chapters, I got really bored. There is too much written about weapons.
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Official(77)Scraped 23d ago
I can't bear to see anyone calling me "Emperor, Emperor" all the time. Generally, each dynasty has its own name.
For example, in the Han Dynasty, they were called county magistrates and everyone, in the Sui and Tang Dynasties, they were called saints, in the Song Dynasty, they were called officials, in the Yuan Dynasty, they were called great Khans, in the Ming Dynasty, they were called long live emperors, and in the Qing Dynasty, they were called emperors. There is no denying the Qing Cheng Ming system. But would you use the title of an emperor who destroyed the previous dynasty?
Everything else is pretty acceptable to me, but the fact that the infantry rides on horseback and the kite cavalry seems outrageous to me! The key point is to dismount and shoot every time you shoot! Author: Do you know how long it takes for a group of people to dismount and line up to form a fighting force? Didn't you tell me after you fired the gun whether you could catch the horse? It takes several minutes to go up and down. If there are too many people, if you keep issuing instructions, the team will become chaotic! Do you know how far a cavalryman can run in one minute? Let's say three or four miles away! Do you feel like you are playing a game? Can you mount the horse with one click, move to chop + look back and dig? As a veteran rider of twenty years, this matter is very absurd to me. Not every horse is close to its owner. If you jump off the horse while running and not tethered, there is a high probability that you will not be able to catch it back! If you want to get on the horse at this time, you can only compete with it to see who can run faster! Do you still need to carry the tethered horse with you in the team? I know you want to give your own personnel more damage, you want to hit accurately, and you want to run fast. Do these things together make you really powerful? If you ask me to dismount and line up, I think it would be more reliable to shoot directly from the horse! This is a typical example of a layman guiding an expert! After you finish writing these tactics, you feel nothing is wrong. All you have to do is type a few lines with your fingers! How embarrassing it would be for professionals to hear the term "mounted infantry"!
The subject matter is good
It's just that the fighting in the next few dozen chapters feels boring. Others read novels for fun, not nonsense, such as returning to modern times to make things, such as killing treacherous ministers, such as fighting foreigners, such as destroying other people's countries, such as getting plants or seeds, etc. Nowadays, we read novels at a fast pace. If you write a sword-fighting slave and write dozens of chapters, I am not complaining! Personal opinion!
The author gets the point of the book wrong
For this kind of novel that can travel back and forth, people will not regard it as a war-type historical novel. It is really unnecessary for you to describe a war in detail in such a long space, and completely ignore the exciting points that readers want to see. I wrote several chapters just for watching the movie with Chongzhen, and wrote dozens of chapters for a war, which made me a little impatient. I hope the author can make some adjustments in future chapters.
I can't stand it anymore after seeing Chapter 70. It's too vicious. Are you copying modern military training methods to train modern soldiers with flintlock guns? Modern military training is relatively close to the line of individual soldiers. Modern soldiers who use flintlock rifles must use group concentrated fire training to exert their maximum strength. So is this reasonable? ? ?
No, how long will this battle last?
The author has gone in the wrong direction. What readers want to see is the protagonist carrying out reforms step by step to change the Ming Dynasty, not your detailed description of the war. He obviously has such good equipment, but he insists on wearing footcloths for the old lady. It's normal to write about wars, but every chapter is basically watery, and I feel very unhappy when there is no progress. I originally signed up as a member and came to take a look, but I quit since I started playing Jiannu. I came back a month later and I am still here. The book here is very good. It is rare to be the same as the one next door in Chongzhen, but there are many other wars, but every chapter has progress. How can I not write well? You are a partner, not a war person
Tell the truth, boss
Your subject matter is very good. I have read more than fifty pages of this one you wrote, but I don't have any sense of involvement at all. There are too many things explained, and it is difficult to get involved in the story. I just need to write more about the storyline and explain the manufacturing process.
Chapter 63, death due to poison 😂
The author teaches us how to make guns again
Not slandering, telling the truth
The first part was fine, but after more than 50 chapters, I got really bored. There is too much written about weapons.
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When Emperor Chongzhen, who almost killed this uninvited visitor, learned that the Ming Dynasty only had one year left to live, the two sides finally had a basis for cooperation.




[6.19]Serialization! Cool article, happy whole day. To be honest, this book has an interesting perspective on historical time travel. The protagonist travels to Chongzhen and finally reaches a cooperation. The rest depends on what happens between the protagonist and Chongzhen. I haven't caught up with the latest chapter.




By chance, Shen Lang, who was desperate, discovered that his warehouse was actually connected to the Ming Dynasty Palace, so he had a communication with Chongzhen, the last emperor of the Ming Dynasty, across time and space. When Emperor Chongzhen, who almost killed this uninvited visitor, learned that the Ming Dynasty only had one year left to live, the two sides finally had a basis for cooperation.




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