I Am the God of Ninja

Because I personally like the outcome of Dazhu and Madara... I really can't figure out why the author repeatedly introduces women who are born in advance. It's really annoying. Is it possible that parents don't even want to think about unrequited love? I'm afraid you're not even more of a lover than Obito! It's really disgusting. I originally had high hopes for this movie, but it turned out that after more than 80 chapters, that woman is still the same. Isn't it really annoying? I'm really bored to death. I feel like I won't go to the Hokage area in the next few days.

I have to point this out. The beginning is really poisonous. I think at least half of the people will leave the part about killing the bandits, and some will still insist on it. However, your poisonous points at the end will make them so disappointed that they will give up the book. Author, you have written several books. Although you have been working hard, the core has not changed. This is also the reason why you are not popular. Maybe only you know what it is, but you don't know how to change it. The suggestion I give is that you should change your style. The main reason is that there are too many poisonous points at the beginning, which makes many people unable to stand it. Although some people will watch it, it will be much less than at the beginning. After all, fan fiction shouldn't be written like this. It will make readers feel very uncomfortable and uncomfortable, and then they will just abandon it. (This is purely hand typed, just to give the author some advice. I don't know if it can be seen by the author, but I really hope the author can change it, so more people will definitely see it)

Just a salted fish, just let it happen.

If some content in the novel is untrue, readers will say it is divorced from reality; while some content will clearly pursue truth, but it will still be criticized by readers. Do you know why? My answer is that the criterion for judging the content of a novel is not "whether it is true or not" but "whether it is interesting or not"! Anything that will reduce readers' interest in reading should not be written. On the contrary, you should write whatever can arouse readers' interest. ‼ ️Note: This is not to say that everything should be "cool", because interesting does not mean cool. For example, Lu Xun's articles have almost no cool elements, but they can make readers find them interesting and classic. Of course, the reason why people find this interesting may be complicated, and may be the result of multiple factors, and this is the most worthy of our study. [Addition to similar reasoning] A similar rationale often appears in film and television adaptations of original works. Adaptations are likely to be criticized and said to be disrespectful of the original works. But in fact, this is not a question of the degree of restoration of the original work. It is clearly a question of whether the audience finds it good-looking or not. If the adaptation is really good, no one will pay attention to whether it matches the original work. It's just because I think it's not good-looking that I use the original work as a reference. After all, the reality is that many film and television viewers may not have seen the original work. A typical example is Journey to the West. In the new version of Journey to the West, there is actually a version that is very consistent with the original work, but it is still criticized for not respecting the original work. On the contrary, most people actually adapted the 1986 version of Journey to the West, which was more beautified, and most people approved of it, and few people said it disrespected the original work. So in the final analysis, the most important thing is whether it looks good or not. If you say you don't respect the original work, it's just because the adaptation is not good enough.

Why is the protagonist afraid of killing?

Okay, I admit that I didn't even finish my homework when I watched Shinobi World for the first time last year... I rushed over when I saw the new pit - come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The author is just trying to get the word count down. Who would care about that when the author is dying.

It is normal for a modern person not to dare to kill people. Don't you think it's fake that you can't break through your own psychological defense even if you're about to die? That part is rubbish. People can do anything to survive.

I have to say, I had high hopes when I saw the name, but when it came to killing the bandits, it was really a little more poisonous. The protagonist is a fan novelist, so he should understand what the world in Naruto is like. In Naruto, no one is equal, and whoever is more powerful will listen to whoever. When he was killing the bandits, he wrote a lot of principles, but the final thing he wrote was still the same. Therefore, the author's experience of Naruto is unrealistic and does not have that feeling. Please ask the author to read more about other Naruto fans. There are too many poisonous points, please change it.

Why did the author have to describe the murder scene in such detail? Trying to be real, but it's really embarrassing.