Douluo: a Sharp Comment on the Goddesses, Bibi Dong Breaks the Defense

Douluo: a Sharp Comment on the Goddesses, Bibi Dong Breaks the Defense

by Elementary School Student Windy

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429Kwords235chapters
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Ch. 235Huo Yun'er Completely Broke His Defense! I Don't Want to Recognize This Son Anymore!
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About This Novel

In Douluo, Song Ye awakens to the critical evaluation system! Just complete the daily critical review tasks to get rewards! But he didn't expect that his sharp comments would be seen by the Douluo girls! ... [Please comment critically on Bibi Dong's view of love] Song Ye: "Love? Yu Xiaogang can eat it too, she's really hungry!" Bibi Dong: "What do you mean! Whoever made the critical comment, come out!" [Please comment on Qian Renxue's strategy] Song Ye: "Wasting ten years and finally making a wedding dress for Tang San? Is this also called strategy?" Qian Renxue: "Wow! Who is Tang San? How dare you ruin my plan!" [Please comment on the choice of white agarwood] Song Ye: "Haha~ I was seduced by Tang San and married to a piece of trash! What did I get?" Bai Chenxiang: "I will never marry trash! Who is Tang San? I want to kill him!" [Please comment critically on Liu Erlong's IQ] Song Ye: "Using Wuhun Palace to pretend to be a master! But she likes it, what do you think?" Liu Erlong: "What? Xiaogang's theory was stolen! He actually lied to me?" [Please comment critically...] ... As the number of critical reviews increases, Song Ye relies on rewards to surpass the God King! Looking back, huh? How come the female character has become normal and still sticks to me? !

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Sunsetglow2mo ago

I feel that more than half of these ratings are bought, or they are a bunch of fools who don't understand the logic of the original work, and just want to read it. Although the Douluo Continent written by the Third Young Master of the Tang Family is said to have no logic, it cannot be changed randomly, and Tang San in Dou Yi is just selfish. During the Soul Master Competition, when she met Yu Xiaogang, his love for Yu Xiaogang had been twisted into a disease. It could even be said that the love has turned into hatred. You didn't even explain it before. You even explained that because of the Ruiping system, the evil thoughts of Bibi Dong Rakshasa God couldn't interfere with him. I believe that any explanation you gave was just nonsense.

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Book Friends 202512138513mo ago

It's very toxic, and you keep complaining about others. The character of the protagonist you wrote is not that good. This style is 100% harem novel. To be honest, there is nothing wrong with harem novels. The problem is that your protagonist is having a harem here while complaining about the original character's nonsense. This is not It's a double standard, and the protagonist's IQ is somewhat problematic. As for the Star Dou Forest part, he is totally clueless. You all know that Xiao Wu is going back to the Star Dou Forest and you are still peeping there. Isn't this sb? What are you waiting for when Daming picks you up? Are you waiting to die? I'm speechless. When I was watching "Get the Immortal Grass", I was also speechless when I found the detoxification method for Dugu Bo. I copied the detoxification method from the original book... Generally speaking, the first 20 chapters can be read while I can read them. I can't stand the rest and can't complain.

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Qi Qing_cd2mo ago

zz protagonist,

He said that other people's IQs were worrying, but his own IQ was so high. He also had a halo of wisdom, and asked Xiao Wu to go to the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect to find Sword and Bone Douluo to suppress Lonely Bo. What was going on in his head, he also asked Ning Rongrong to control two titled Douluo, and said that he would rather die for Ning Rongrong in the later stage. You also know that it is the later stage. In the later stage, the Seven Treasures Glazed Sect had a deal with Tang San, and Tang San's father was Tang Hao, and Xiao Wu was Tang San's woman. There were a lot of things that happened later. Things have created a bond, and even knowing that Xiao Wu is a spirit beast, he will not do anything. The problem is who are you in the early stage? You were suppressed as soon as you arrived at the door. Even Tang Hao can't use his hands. Is a hundred thousand year spirit beast a Chinese cabbage? Just let Ning Rongrong do whatever he wants. It is impossible to listen to Ning Rongrong about this kind of thing. She can't do anything except stare. If the author imagines Sword and Bone Douluo to be the Great Holy Mother, stop practicing and find a river to commit suicide.

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Lonely Years. Can't Keep It3mo ago

Selling dog meat over sheep's heads, saying it is a critical review, but in the end, every time it is half-reviewed, such as those things Bibi Dong did in the normal harem, Yu Xiaogang's plan, etc.

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Shooting Arrows and Beacon Fire3mo ago

Letting Bai Chenxiang marry Ma Hongjun was her grandfather's intention. It was to improve the family's martial arts. It was a utilitarian marriage in itself, and the purpose was basically achieved. It would be outrageous to criticize morality and love.

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Stray Cat at Night1mo ago

Not pretty.

The protagonist has low strength and little cheating. Caught and held captive like an idiot. Goldfinger actually doesn't have a setting to prevent each other from hurting each other. Obviously, it will be difficult to write later. After all, everyone is a different force. The protagonist grows too slowly, and the fairy grass must be eaten according to the original work. Only three plants of fairy grass can be eaten. The original book said that as long as it is beneficial to you and does not conflict with you, you can eat it. The little boy eats three plants because the others are of no use to him, and there are some fairy grass that the little boy does not know about. The protagonist eats the two grasses of ice and fire, eats star grass, does not eat autumn dew, and does not eat other beneficial grasses. He is already weak, but he insists on not eating, suppressing the protagonist. Compared with Su Yan's chat group review article, this book is really not good. . . The setting is incomplete, the combat power is weak, the emotions are dragging, and the plot is speechless.

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Zizizi_db28d ago

Purely mentally retarded **Plot, imbecile novel.

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Summer of 2018_bb3mo ago

All I can say is that the characterization of the characters in the original work is just a mess, and many classics don't mention it, such as Yu Xiaogang's martial spirit, and Ning Rongrong's indifference to the death of the sword bone. Is this called Ruiping?

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Book Friends 202405298306233mo ago

The behavior of the protagonist makes me very confused. You have a system. I won't say anything about this kind of exposure system. You have a fucking system and you still run into the forest. Isn't that stupid? Why is my life not important? If you have to run into the forest, or simply kill the protagonist, how can there be such an exposed system? Doesn't the protagonist just find a place to stay when he runs around? Or is it because I'm just clinging to you? This is the first time I've seen this. I'm speechless. I can only give you four stars. I don't want to say anything.

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Willow God_de23d ago

The content is of poor quality. The main character is cursing people throughout the whole process. He does things without any brains. It is just a piece of history. The main pacing of this book is too rambling. The main character can clearly do critical reviews once a day but he has to wait for a year and a half. It is pure SB. He knows the danger but doesn't know how to stay away. When he sees the female character change the plot, there is no problem or reaction.

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