
Immortal Ni: the Strongest in the Whole Map, Join the Stunning Chat Group
by Marshal Of The Central Plains
About This Novel
Qin Hao traveled through the world of Immortals and was bound to the strongest system in the entire map. As long as he sets foot on a new map, he will become the strongest player in various values of the current map. Just when Qin Hao had just joined the Hengyue Sect and became a monk in the early stage of Nascent Soul, he received an invitation from the stunning chat group. Bite! [The stunning chat group invites you to join! Qin Hao: "??? I'm a man, what the hell is a stunning chat group?" In the chat group. Li Muwan: "The newlywed sisters' explosive photos!" Hongdie: "No, you're a man, how did you join in?" Yao Xixue: "What? You became a Nascent Soul at the age of sixteen? Why are you so perverted?"
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Official(116)Scraped 2d ago
Thoroughbred Ma Wen, you fall in love with every one you meet. Women all over the world fall in love with you as soon as they see you. It's so simple.
The poisonous point is clear. The powerful diaosiwen is obviously the classic poisonous point. Do you still dare to write a plan to connect every village to the internet, a routine that was deadlocked decades ago? Poison Point 2 has no sense of boundaries. Especially from the reader's perspective. That's it. Poison point three. The sewing is terrible. If the writing is not good enough, don't bother with sewing. The more sewing there is, the worse it will be. Just like technological products, the more complex they are, the easier they are to be damaged. Isn't Poison Point 4, the so-called strongest in the whole map, just a deleted version of the automatic max level? Or the kind with various restrictions. At least I can be as arrogant as I want with automatic max level. You are so over-the-top and poisonous. There is a serious mismatch between your strength and your behavior. You have too much of a bad feeling. If you are a scumbag, it is understandable. But if you still do this after your strength suddenly increases, it is 100% poisonous. A writing method like this that suddenly increases your strength is a test of your skills. If you don't have that kind of ability, don't write a sentence that says what to say. It's like this if you're a fool who can't show off. Here you can refer to what Wang Lin looks like when he is weak, and what does Wang Lin look like when he is strong?
A time traveler has a system, can't the system reward those who conceal their identity? To use clones to contact and fall in love with the heroine, the key is to have multiple heroines. Your future heroines will all use clones, right?
Alas, you are a weirdo, selling dog meat, you can't eat any of them for a long time, it's all on your face!
There is no big problem with the map upgrade itself. The problem is that setting up a chat group is very nonsense. Suddenly Nascent Soul was very stiff at the beginning, and there was no way around Heng Yue's start with Huang Long Zhenren. Yao Xixue should not have appeared too early in the original timeline, otherwise she would not be right. If she had changed at the beginning, what was she doing hundreds of years before Wang Lin joined the Tianyun Sect? Taking away Li Muwan is actually very bad, because as long as this point is eliminated, the whole plot will be stiff. Besides, the original Li Muwan's appearance is not top-notch, at least it cannot compare with Zhou Zihong. There's no problem with having a harem, the key is the plot. If you take away the personality of the original characters, it won't be that interesting. The character characteristics of the original work must be reflected, otherwise the more the plot develops, the more boring it will become. Sooner or later, it will be abandoned. Without traffic, the author will have no motivation to continue writing, and naturally he will rush to the market.
Licking a dog, no need to say anything bad
There are still people writing diaosi articles nowadays.
The protagonist is a combination of a turtle man and a licking dog, with a diao silk on his lower head😐
In the nanny story, Wang Lin knew that the protagonist would save him and ran directly to the protagonist.
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Official(116)Scraped 2d ago
Thoroughbred Ma Wen, you fall in love with every one you meet. Women all over the world fall in love with you as soon as they see you. It's so simple.
The poisonous point is clear. The powerful diaosiwen is obviously the classic poisonous point. Do you still dare to write a plan to connect every village to the internet, a routine that was deadlocked decades ago? Poison Point 2 has no sense of boundaries. Especially from the reader's perspective. That's it. Poison point three. The sewing is terrible. If the writing is not good enough, don't bother with sewing. The more sewing there is, the worse it will be. Just like technological products, the more complex they are, the easier they are to be damaged. Isn't Poison Point 4, the so-called strongest in the whole map, just a deleted version of the automatic max level? Or the kind with various restrictions. At least I can be as arrogant as I want with automatic max level. You are so over-the-top and poisonous. There is a serious mismatch between your strength and your behavior. You have too much of a bad feeling. If you are a scumbag, it is understandable. But if you still do this after your strength suddenly increases, it is 100% poisonous. A writing method like this that suddenly increases your strength is a test of your skills. If you don't have that kind of ability, don't write a sentence that says what to say. It's like this if you're a fool who can't show off. Here you can refer to what Wang Lin looks like when he is weak, and what does Wang Lin look like when he is strong?
A time traveler has a system, can't the system reward those who conceal their identity? To use clones to contact and fall in love with the heroine, the key is to have multiple heroines. Your future heroines will all use clones, right?
Alas, you are a weirdo, selling dog meat, you can't eat any of them for a long time, it's all on your face!
There is no big problem with the map upgrade itself. The problem is that setting up a chat group is very nonsense. Suddenly Nascent Soul was very stiff at the beginning, and there was no way around Heng Yue's start with Huang Long Zhenren. Yao Xixue should not have appeared too early in the original timeline, otherwise she would not be right. If she had changed at the beginning, what was she doing hundreds of years before Wang Lin joined the Tianyun Sect? Taking away Li Muwan is actually very bad, because as long as this point is eliminated, the whole plot will be stiff. Besides, the original Li Muwan's appearance is not top-notch, at least it cannot compare with Zhou Zihong. There's no problem with having a harem, the key is the plot. If you take away the personality of the original characters, it won't be that interesting. The character characteristics of the original work must be reflected, otherwise the more the plot develops, the more boring it will become. Sooner or later, it will be abandoned. Without traffic, the author will have no motivation to continue writing, and naturally he will rush to the market.
Licking a dog, no need to say anything bad
There are still people writing diaosi articles nowadays.
The protagonist is a combination of a turtle man and a licking dog, with a diao silk on his lower head😐
In the nanny story, Wang Lin knew that the protagonist would save him and ran directly to the protagonist.











