The Dynasty of Luck: it Starts with the Fake Emperor Taking a Concubine

I really can't complain. I don't know if it's just my problem, or the problem of the novel, or whether it's a problem for others, or a problem for others, or maybe a small group of people see a problem, so I just want to complain, so what does the real emperor do? But in reality, there is no possibility for him to make a comeback. Let me ask you, a real emperor would never let you have contact with his woman, okay? He just lets you be a puppet, replace him, pretend to be him. You can eat ordinary food and delicacies, but don't even think about anything else, and it's impossible for you to come into contact with other people. The more you think about it, the more your mind becomes screwed up.

There is so much nonsense in banning a few Huang Fei. So much fucking nonsense. I have written so much, and I always write about women every day. Nor does he build his own army. Just like that, I still want to replace others. It's really pornographic. There is a problem with the writing. You said that you have written so much, but in what way is the protagonist you wrote better than the real emperor? Nor does it establish its own power. Nor does he build his own army. I always wander among a group of women every day. I really can't figure it out. The protagonist you wrote is like this. What do these women see in him? Apart from having a golden finger, I really don't see what abilities he has. So author, have you told me what earth-shattering thing the protagonist has done? Or have you dealt with some government affairs? Not outstanding at all. What do these women see in him? Are they still so devoted to him? Is it just because he is the protagonist? That's what I'm looking at right now. The protagonist has nothing but a group of women. Let me ask you, why should he compete with the real emperor? How strong is the luck of the country you also wrote about? Let me ask you, is the world still in chaos? Can his luck be stabilized? Besides, the true emperor is still alive. Can you take all the luck in the world by yourself? Want to be a thief? Still not working hard? I spend my days among women. Rubbish.

The first part is okay, but the later part it gets more and more wrong. It only describes the heroine's figure, clothes, appearance and so on. There are also things like the eunuch's psychological activities. It can be said in one sentence, but it takes several pages. The plot advances very slowly. The writing is becoming more and more obscure, does it seem like my writing skills are good?

The heroine you described is purer than a fairy, and more seductive than a witch. When I read your novel, I just imagine the appearance of the heroine, which is more pornographic than pornographic films, and I can't stand it.

It can be cut. What is it about? How many chapters have it been? It's still so bad. I keep describing women.

To be able to describe the scene vividly, you still have some writing skills. It will soon reach the climax of the plot. After this plot, it is the time to test the real world view shaping and character shaping.

Soul-piercing article, mark it, the author should change it

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It's very good-looking. Come on, the author. Make your presence felt.

I read the last 10 pictures and said one thing. I won the battle. When the ink mark reached 10 pictures, it was a novel. Even if there are few words, you can still write wonderfully. I am afraid that the author will be too grindy.