Douluo Jueshi: the Martial Soul Rolls Eyes at the Beginning
About This Novel
[Dou Er, multiple female protagonists, no system] Traveling through the peerless Tang Sect, Born in the Tianhun Empire, he is 4 years older than Huo Guai. The first martial spirit [White Eyes], White Eyes is known as one of the three major eye skills of Hokage. When it is used as a martial spirit, what kind of brilliance will it shine in the Peerless Tang Sect? The second martial spirit [Scorpion Tiger] was later enlightened by Electrolux and transformed into the supreme existence where light and evil coexist, [Light Evil God Tiger]! ... Not only did he join the Noumenon Sect, Lin Ye also wanted to cut off all opportunities, repel the iron hoof of the Sun and Moon Empire, and annex Shrek and the two empires. The Wuhun Palace will reappear, the Spirit Transferring Tower will stand, A unified and powerful Douluo Empire will be born in his hands. "Tang San, you watch carefully. This chess game is being manipulated by you. Now, let me take charge."
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Official(27)Scraped 3d ago
The writing of the Byakugan Martial Spirit is so bad, it looks like a Sharingan. How come the skills are copy, insight, and mental shock? There is no Byakugan characteristic at all, and there is no soft fist. My clairvoyance ability is so weak. The acupuncture points cannot be developed. Douluo also has meridians. The acupoints are so powerful. I hope it is the reincarnation eye for the golden awakening.
Subjective evaluation, personal opinion
1. The protagonist's leveling is a bit strong. He has full innate soul power but his attribute level is not as high as Long Aotian's. 2. There is a problem with the ratio of soul rings. Did you eat three purple and one yellow to awaken the martial soul? Moreover, the setting you wrote earlier is very good, but the actual performance of the fourth ring is not ten thousand years. It will be even worse if the martial soul is awakened and it is not ten thousand years. 3. It is recommended to rewrite the fighting scenes. Although I don't know Tang's character, the fighting scenes are okay. You are writing it as a martial artist. To sum up, it is watchable but not amazing.
Author, where did you forget about the second martial spirit brought by Tianmeng Bingsi?
Author, why do you want to join Shrek? You really can't ask the Noumenon Sect to form a team, or join the Di'ao Academy. I think it's better for the Noumenon Sect. What's more, Shrek still has a grudge against the Noumenon Sect.
If you fight with a girl, you will always take advantage. If you go out with a girl, you will be a hero and save the beauty. What's the point of a spiritual person who has been ranked second in a thousand years but not ranked fourth in ten thousand years?
Speechless, if you don't go to Shrek, you won't be able to write, right? Sharingan is not good? The author's supercilious writing is really not good!
Author, please take a good look at the original work. Long Aotian, the young master of the main body sect, worked hard to awaken to the silver level. As long as your spiritual soul martial soul awakens, you will be at the silver level. Isn't this a bit disrespectful to the original work? If the silver level is so easy to awaken, in the original work, there are not only Long Aotian and Wei Na, but the original sect leader cannot die from poison, and the former sect leader will die from poison. The second awakening reaches the silver level, and then reaches the gold level.
Dear author, some of the questions are about the competition between men and women, which are a little too frequent. Now that they are on the stage, it is just a fun experience. The arrangement is a little deliberate. Others are quite good.
May I ask how many times a day it is updated? The author is great
The evil tiger of light. What a bad name. It is better to call Ming Yao Zhao Tianhu. Shengyao evil tiger.
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Official(27)Scraped 3d ago
The writing of the Byakugan Martial Spirit is so bad, it looks like a Sharingan. How come the skills are copy, insight, and mental shock? There is no Byakugan characteristic at all, and there is no soft fist. My clairvoyance ability is so weak. The acupuncture points cannot be developed. Douluo also has meridians. The acupoints are so powerful. I hope it is the reincarnation eye for the golden awakening.
Subjective evaluation, personal opinion
1. The protagonist's leveling is a bit strong. He has full innate soul power but his attribute level is not as high as Long Aotian's. 2. There is a problem with the ratio of soul rings. Did you eat three purple and one yellow to awaken the martial soul? Moreover, the setting you wrote earlier is very good, but the actual performance of the fourth ring is not ten thousand years. It will be even worse if the martial soul is awakened and it is not ten thousand years. 3. It is recommended to rewrite the fighting scenes. Although I don't know Tang's character, the fighting scenes are okay. You are writing it as a martial artist. To sum up, it is watchable but not amazing.
Author, where did you forget about the second martial spirit brought by Tianmeng Bingsi?
Author, why do you want to join Shrek? You really can't ask the Noumenon Sect to form a team, or join the Di'ao Academy. I think it's better for the Noumenon Sect. What's more, Shrek still has a grudge against the Noumenon Sect.
If you fight with a girl, you will always take advantage. If you go out with a girl, you will be a hero and save the beauty. What's the point of a spiritual person who has been ranked second in a thousand years but not ranked fourth in ten thousand years?
Speechless, if you don't go to Shrek, you won't be able to write, right? Sharingan is not good? The author's supercilious writing is really not good!
Author, please take a good look at the original work. Long Aotian, the young master of the main body sect, worked hard to awaken to the silver level. As long as your spiritual soul martial soul awakens, you will be at the silver level. Isn't this a bit disrespectful to the original work? If the silver level is so easy to awaken, in the original work, there are not only Long Aotian and Wei Na, but the original sect leader cannot die from poison, and the former sect leader will die from poison. The second awakening reaches the silver level, and then reaches the gold level.
Dear author, some of the questions are about the competition between men and women, which are a little too frequent. Now that they are on the stage, it is just a fun experience. The arrangement is a little deliberate. Others are quite good.
May I ask how many times a day it is updated? The author is great
The evil tiger of light. What a bad name. It is better to call Ming Yao Zhao Tianhu. Shengyao evil tiger.
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