With Hundreds of Thousands of Soldiers Rampant, Am I the Biggest Weirdo?
About This Novel
Good news! Traveled through time again! Bad news! The spiritual energy in this world is extremely thin. Good news! The spiritual energy has begun to revive. Bad news! Weirdness also began to revive. I don't know which Feng Shui master with two swords. Jue Tian Di Tong cuts the dragon veins but didn't do it well. The Jue Tian Di Tong was completed, but the Dragon Vein was hastily sealed. Good news! The secret treasure that he fought for in his previous life also came with him before his death. In other words, it brought it here. ....
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Official(14)Scraped 2d ago
Let me tell you a very funny thing. The protagonist went to beg for food with a golden bowl😁😁😁😆😆😆. It's not a question of whether to pull or not, but a question of whether it's a person or not? 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
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There are a lot of typos. I've read about 30 chapters so far and it's okay.
The writing is good, the plot advancement is well-founded, and it's not too silly. Although it has a few flaws, it's okay.
Why did it become 500 acres in Chapter 78? Didn't the protagonist ask the country for the entire Hexin Island?
There is a big problem with shaping the character of the protagonist.
Can't write people
When the protagonist interacts with people, all he encounters are pseudo-human beings. The aunt at the beginning and the classmates in the back, I don't dare to think about who he will meet later. The idea is good, but the plot really needs to be carefully thought out, and things are too rushed one after another.
I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. The corpse turned into a zombie, and the evil soldiers appeared. I could see it all clearly. There was an old woman who didn't believe it, and she was trying to blackmail me. I saw that the director of the police station had contacted others, and in the end, even people from the special department dared to threaten people. This contradiction was too blunt.
No, brother, what kind of thunderous sentences are you talking about? I feel like you still want to write. This sentence fragment of yours needs to be revised. It's coming out here, it's coming out there, it feels like it's affecting the flow.
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Official(14)Scraped 2d ago
Let me tell you a very funny thing. The protagonist went to beg for food with a golden bowl😁😁😁😆😆😆. It's not a question of whether to pull or not, but a question of whether it's a person or not? 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
Asking for tweets
Is there anyone who tweets? Please tweet!
I'll build a building!
Not many comments, just build a building!
There are a lot of typos. I've read about 30 chapters so far and it's okay.
The writing is good, the plot advancement is well-founded, and it's not too silly. Although it has a few flaws, it's okay.
Why did it become 500 acres in Chapter 78? Didn't the protagonist ask the country for the entire Hexin Island?
There is a big problem with shaping the character of the protagonist.
Can't write people
When the protagonist interacts with people, all he encounters are pseudo-human beings. The aunt at the beginning and the classmates in the back, I don't dare to think about who he will meet later. The idea is good, but the plot really needs to be carefully thought out, and things are too rushed one after another.
I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. The corpse turned into a zombie, and the evil soldiers appeared. I could see it all clearly. There was an old woman who didn't believe it, and she was trying to blackmail me. I saw that the director of the police station had contacted others, and in the end, even people from the special department dared to threaten people. This contradiction was too blunt.
No, brother, what kind of thunderous sentences are you talking about? I feel like you still want to write. This sentence fragment of yours needs to be revised. It's coming out here, it's coming out there, it feels like it's affecting the flow.
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