
Pokemon Farmer
About This Novel
I had just graduated and was looking for a job, but when I woke up, things had changed. As a flower grower, I rely on my hard-working hands to build my farm in the Pokemon world.
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Official(3)Scraped 2mo ago
Give some suggestions
Can the first person be changed to the third person? Few people read the first person. Can the paragraphs be divided into more detailed sections? It's quite uncomfortable to read a long paragraph on a mobile phone. . .
The subject matter is pretty good
It's just that the writing is a bit poor. It seems a bit weird to always use the first person. Also, the text is too long and needs to be divided into more paragraphs.
It is recommended to change the first person to the third person so that more people can read it😹
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Community(0)
Official(3)Scraped 2mo ago
Give some suggestions
Can the first person be changed to the third person? Few people read the first person. Can the paragraphs be divided into more detailed sections? It's quite uncomfortable to read a long paragraph on a mobile phone. . .
The subject matter is pretty good
It's just that the writing is a bit poor. It seems a bit weird to always use the first person. Also, the text is too long and needs to be divided into more paragraphs.
It is recommended to change the first person to the third person so that more people can read it😹









