Literary Man 1978: I Have to Teach the Literary World a Lesson

It can be said that the author's writing style can definitely write a good novel, but the author's writing is not refined at all, the main line progresses slowly, and he likes to talk about some insignificant places. This is also the reason why many readers say water. This kind of water is not the kind of water that is verbose, but likes to write about trivial and insignificant things. There are many places. The content is just passing by, but the author likes to talk about it endlessly. For example, in the part of the cultural center, there is a lot of content, a lot of people, and a lot of trivial things. It can be cut off and passed over, because this part has no meaning at all in the portrayal of the protagonist. This part only describes the cultural atmosphere and work of the cultural center in 1978. In fact, the atmosphere has little to do with the protagonist, and the protagonist does not work in the cultural center. This is a lack of priority. I want to write everything, and I want to write everything completely. As a result, the content is delayed. This is a problem that many authors make. Therefore, online novels cannot be written only if you are good at writing. If you cannot master the method and essence of writing online novels, your novel will not be popular in your life. Well, why is it said that the writing style of Tomato is average and that it is a novice novel, but its grades are good and people like it. In fact, in essence, the rhythm of its novel is well controlled, the content is concise, and it is not procrastinating. If the online novel can't even do these three points, you are still popular. Who wants to spend time watching you grind on and write about irrelevant things?

In 1978, the ticket price for the Forbidden City was only a few cents, but it only rose to 50 cents in 1985. Where did the one yuan come from? Why I know, because I wanted to go to the Forbidden City the next day, but I found out from the newspaper that the price had increased to 50 cents starting from the next day. I thought it was expensive and went home directly. Another bug is that the north gate of the Forbidden City is not Nanluoguxiang to the north, but Di'anmen. At that time, Nanluoguxiang didn't have a reputation at all, it was just a broken alley. Anyone who doesn't live nearby knows? No one knows. At that time, the alleys in Dongsi were famous for their orderliness and many large houses.

When looking for a wife, aren't you looking for someone younger or about three years old? When did you like someone who was seven or eight years older than you?

Why did you write about him when there are only a few books in China? Isn't there a lot of adaptations in Japan? Isn't it okay to adapt foreign movies and TV shows into novels? The writing is so bad that you are still writing?

If you choose a female lead, in fact no matter who you are, you will be scolded. If you write a lot, you are tired of scolding, or there are various reasons. I scanned a lot of articles and watched a lot of female protagonists. Zhang Yu studied abroad. At that time, there were many choices to go abroad. There were no scandals about her studying abroad, and she didn't come back because she couldn't survive anymore. With good looks, he was the first person to really become popular all over the country in the 1980s, and his good looks in his later years are also very attractive. Rebirth changes not only yourself, but also the people around you. Let's show mercy...

At first I thought you were overstating the word count, but later I found out that I was actually wrong. You weren't overstating the word count, but your writing style was like this. I don't know if it's my reading habits or some other problem. Why do you feel that what you write is so bland? It seems that there is no emotion at all, and everything I write is like writing a running account. Just recording for the sake of recording. And there is something special that cannot be said. How should I say it? It's as if what you wrote doesn't belong to this era, but to 1978. This is not a problem, because what you wrote originally happened in 1978. But don't forget that the protagonist is a time traveler. How can he perfectly integrate into 1978? Even if the living habits can be integrated into his thoughts, it is impossible to integrate them. So I didn't find any place in your article where the protagonist is incompatible with other characters, it's as if the protagonist has always belonged in this place. Belongs to this era. Also, what I find most awkward is that all the other characters you write are based on the same template. Let's talk about a few female characters that have appeared so far. Zhang Yu, Zhu Lin, and Yu Jiajia, are there any essential differences between these three people? There seems to be no difference between the editors of several different magazines. You will find out after exchanging their names. Not inconsistent at all. It's as if these people have no emotions, no personality, and are just standard editing templates. On the contrary, the most unique people are the people in today's magazine. It gives me a very unreal feeling. You editors are all surrounding the protagonist. Is this reasonable? To put it bluntly, "Donkey Deshui" is just a satirical novel with a side of comedy, and its literary quality is not as high as expected. These editors are all people who have seen it before, so why do they regard the protagonist as the successor of a literary giant? In this part of the poem, Bei Dao actually. Be more famous than the main character. Well, why don't the editors of these poetry magazines compose their manuscripts around Bei Dao, but around the protagonist? Too deliberate. It makes me feel that what you wrote is not true at all. You are just a little Karami who has published a few articles and poems in literature. Why do you let famous editors surround you? Who are you? Let Zhou Yanru ride her bicycle to Peking University to find you? Do you count six? Is Beijing's literature and art so useless? Is the style so low? Is there no other writer? Or are these editors very idle? I feel like the author raised the protagonist too high, especially in the first half. What should I do next? Don't tell me that I want to make my own magazine. Zheng Yuanjie is able to do this because he writes fairy tales. Moreover, the fairy tales written by Zheng Yuanjie tend to be popular and not very literary. As a person who writes serious literature, do you expect that you can support a magazine? What are you thinking about? So so far, this novel has been weird for me. As if we haven't entered the topic yet

Zhu Lin got married in 1975 and got divorced in 85. It's good for you. In the middle of 1978, you were almost on good terms with others? What? Can you marry two people?

Plot of the first 150 chapters: The heroine Zhu Lin, I haven't seen any romantic scenes yet, but she agreed to become boyfriend and girlfriend He became famous in "The Donkey Gets Water" at the beginning, and also wrote the poem "A Generation". Later, he also became Cao Yu's apprentice and adapted the plot into a drama. (Zhu Lin starred in "Romance on Lushan Mountain" (no face-to-face, filming on loan )) The more you read, the more boring you become. There are no emotional scenes in the first 200 chapters.

In 1978, Zhu Lin was 26 years old. She was born in 1952 and was no longer the girl described by the author in this chapter.

Both Zhu Lin and Gong Xue are obsessed with the protagonist of the period novel. I heard that it is level 130 and I wonder if Gong Xue will be portrayed in the future of this book...