
There is a Skeleton Dungeon in My Basement
About This Novel
I was tired of the life of cattle and horses in the city, so I returned to my hometown and inherited my grandfather's farm and old house. But my friend, why didn't I wait for a friendly village chief to start a leisurely and healing ranch life? Why is there an extra dungeon in the basement of my house that spawns skeletons? Etc! This skeleton seems to have exploded with skills!
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Official(27)Scraped 20d ago
I suggest that the protagonist learn some necromancy and go to Tibet. The standing Potala Palace is a legend at least.
There is a problem with the data and the settings are incorrect.
One It was already Level 3 of Shimmer Career at the beginning, but it was upgraded to Level 2 later. Moreover, no skill points were given when upgrading to level three, so I suspect it was a sudden increase in settings. Two Justice needs three times. The ghost woman started the mission and made a deal on the first floor of the second dungeon to let the Taoist Duomu dig out the evil eye, which led to the death of Duomu. That was the first time. Three The setting of the Pot of Greed is that potion adds attributes, but later I got an ointment, which can also trigger the Pot of Greed. Four The protagonist is simply stupid, not crazy. I feel that the author wanted to write crazy, but the result was very stupid. Five I regret subscribing all at once.
The plot line is too weak. The main thing is that the protagonist is mining gold alone in the dungeon. The actual plot is worse than not having it at all. The trading place is a failure. The protagonist is like a novice who suddenly makes friends with a group of big guys. Moreover, the gap between these big guys and the protagonist is too big, and he has never interacted with anyone of his level.
Mark it.
Nothing else matters, it's just too watery. It's too boring. I say a sentence once in positive terms, once in negative terms, and again after disrupting and reorganizing it. , And then explain it again. Repeat it again. Then the next paragraph continues. A bit exaggerated. You fall asleep pressing the page turning button, and you can still pick it up when you wake up.
The definition of the protagonist is okay
The definition of the protagonist is okay. But the writing was too vague and weak. It was like asking a 12-year-old boxing champion to challenge Ultraman. It was so funny. Especially after killing the heir of the evil god, the descriptions of the protagonist's strength are very vague and weak. There is not even a complete set of systematic skills.
After reading Rat Man, I was not satisfied with this book.
I feel that the author has lost his temper and regards writing a book as a job. It is obviously not as serious as the previous one. The story line is too limited and many details cannot be elaborated. The most important thing is that it is not refreshing and refreshing. I will not pay attention to the author anymore.
I've read dozens of chapters, and they're all about fighting monsters and trading and buying things in the heavens. Isn't it a city at the beginning? There's no daily life. Otherwise, you can just travel through time.
Goodbye, the pacing is not good. I couldn't get into it after reading a few chapters. It's all too deliberate. When I saw the skeleton, I knew that the pacing was super slow, and coupled with the self-created talent, Dungeon Advancer would be useless if there were no dungeons. From this look, everything is well arranged. In fact, the main character's strength grows quickly only if the writing is not good enough. I have seen many good stories that grow quickly, but it's just a problem with the writing.
Not a good start
Colored talents feel inferior to golden talents. There is also the attribute point-adding system that either gives more or less, and the points have a greater effect. Go read the novel by the bald monk next door. The number of points she adds is very small, but the points are very useful. That means the beginning is in the dungeon, and the ending is still in the dungeon. I all doubt that your rating of more than 8 points was fake.
It's quite good to watch. God Game and Dungeon Gate are both licking dogs. The protagonist is the version t0, a being that makes people lick. Come on
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Official(27)Scraped 20d ago
I suggest that the protagonist learn some necromancy and go to Tibet. The standing Potala Palace is a legend at least.
There is a problem with the data and the settings are incorrect.
One It was already Level 3 of Shimmer Career at the beginning, but it was upgraded to Level 2 later. Moreover, no skill points were given when upgrading to level three, so I suspect it was a sudden increase in settings. Two Justice needs three times. The ghost woman started the mission and made a deal on the first floor of the second dungeon to let the Taoist Duomu dig out the evil eye, which led to the death of Duomu. That was the first time. Three The setting of the Pot of Greed is that potion adds attributes, but later I got an ointment, which can also trigger the Pot of Greed. Four The protagonist is simply stupid, not crazy. I feel that the author wanted to write crazy, but the result was very stupid. Five I regret subscribing all at once.
The plot line is too weak. The main thing is that the protagonist is mining gold alone in the dungeon. The actual plot is worse than not having it at all. The trading place is a failure. The protagonist is like a novice who suddenly makes friends with a group of big guys. Moreover, the gap between these big guys and the protagonist is too big, and he has never interacted with anyone of his level.
Mark it.
Nothing else matters, it's just too watery. It's too boring. I say a sentence once in positive terms, once in negative terms, and again after disrupting and reorganizing it. , And then explain it again. Repeat it again. Then the next paragraph continues. A bit exaggerated. You fall asleep pressing the page turning button, and you can still pick it up when you wake up.
The definition of the protagonist is okay
The definition of the protagonist is okay. But the writing was too vague and weak. It was like asking a 12-year-old boxing champion to challenge Ultraman. It was so funny. Especially after killing the heir of the evil god, the descriptions of the protagonist's strength are very vague and weak. There is not even a complete set of systematic skills.
After reading Rat Man, I was not satisfied with this book.
I feel that the author has lost his temper and regards writing a book as a job. It is obviously not as serious as the previous one. The story line is too limited and many details cannot be elaborated. The most important thing is that it is not refreshing and refreshing. I will not pay attention to the author anymore.
I've read dozens of chapters, and they're all about fighting monsters and trading and buying things in the heavens. Isn't it a city at the beginning? There's no daily life. Otherwise, you can just travel through time.
Goodbye, the pacing is not good. I couldn't get into it after reading a few chapters. It's all too deliberate. When I saw the skeleton, I knew that the pacing was super slow, and coupled with the self-created talent, Dungeon Advancer would be useless if there were no dungeons. From this look, everything is well arranged. In fact, the main character's strength grows quickly only if the writing is not good enough. I have seen many good stories that grow quickly, but it's just a problem with the writing.
Not a good start
Colored talents feel inferior to golden talents. There is also the attribute point-adding system that either gives more or less, and the points have a greater effect. Go read the novel by the bald monk next door. The number of points she adds is very small, but the points are very useful. That means the beginning is in the dungeon, and the ending is still in the dungeon. I all doubt that your rating of more than 8 points was fake.
It's quite good to watch. God Game and Dungeon Gate are both licking dogs. The protagonist is the version t0, a being that makes people lick. Come on
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Overall score: 6.0 Category: Fantasy Dungeon Adventure Introduction: An urban youth returns to his hometown to inherit a farm, and accidentally discovers that the basement is connected to a skeleton dungeon in another world. In the cycle of killing monsters and exploding equipment, you gradually unlock hidden areas and trading systems, trying to use modern thinking to crack the rules of dungeon survival. Settings: 7.0 The combination of Skull Dungeon + Abyss Traits + Interdimensional Trading Market is quite innovative, but the monster settings such as vampires and zombies are reduced to skin-changing templates. The attendant system has no sense of existence, and the characteristics of the Abyss Balrog are only used as combat value patches. The ecological logic of the dungeon is broken, and the scene where giant bats and human skeletons coexist on the platform is like child's play. Plot: 6.0 The anti-routine design of Escape from 996 at the beginning is eye-catching, but then it falls into an endless loop of "climbing - falling off the cliff - spawning monsters". The hidden area exploration is like a procedurally generated side mission, and the bargaining plot in the trading area exposes the author's naive understanding of business logic. The "fight of wits" in which the protagonist jumps over levels and kills monsters is actually a numerical coincidence, and the battle relies entirely on the system's critical hits. Writing style: 5.0 The action descriptions are like live broadcasts of the game ("one axe, two axes, three axes"), and the environment rendering is so stingy that only the word "dark" is used to summarize the dungeon. The characters are as flat as paper, and the interaction between the violent protagonist and the mute skeleton is colder than the stone walls of the dungeon. The only bright spot is the black humor in the copywriting of the dropped items, but unfortunately this kind of inspiration is fleeting.




It is a dungeon survival adventure type. The protagonist is a real man, currently the only extraordinary person on earth. The author lacks writing skills and wanted to write something in-depth, but it ended up being written in a literary style. The protagonist has too few skills and relies entirely on numerical values to defeat monsters. Currently, he is fighting against various evil gods and their descendants.













