Beginning at the End of Jin Dynasty

To be honest, it should only be rated three points, because the author's assumptions are as naive as some of his details and were not handled well. This is also the reason why the writing seems to be good, but the results seem to be poor. There is a problem with the character design and the main premise - you have to go to the Beacon Fire in the North - you either have fame, ability, force, or a backer - you have nothing. It is impossible for Zudi to write the protagonist as a weak and unknown nobleman growing up in the cruel North. The author's idea is similar to Western Fantasy's "The Growth of the Northland Lords". Let's compare it. What are the flaws? You need to have force, capital, and reputation. The nobles are not as consistent as the nobles. The struggle between the noble clans was also more bloodless, and they simply put their lives on others. The simplest thing is that if the protagonist does not have the force to overturn the situation on his own, in this period, it will be out of date and have no sense of substitution.

The writing style is delicate and smooth, the words are well-chosen, and the happiness accumulated, come on~

Hay can be seen, but the poison points are constant in the early stage. I think this is why there is no fire. For example, First, Yunzhen's handling was very inappropriate, which resulted in the loss of some readers. Secondly, he was weak and traveling without a guard, but a woman captured him. As the saying goes, a gentleman does not build a dangerous wall. Should he act rationally in a place where refugees are everywhere? Or is it just to introduce a female character? No matter how you say it, it is a way of writing to lower your wits. Some readers have been lost here again. I haven't watched the back yet. Slow heating is inherently delicate. If you have time, I suggest you make some slight modifications in the early stage, which may be better.

I would have read this novel four or five years ago. But now I can't see it. Fast food novels are popular nowadays, especially novels of this period.

Okay, okay, the writing style is solid and delicate, and it looks good.

Come on, author, it's really difficult to write a book about the late Jin Dynasty. There are many characters and few detailed descriptions of historical events.

I read the work carefully. If you can, my friend, come on.

The plot advancement is really too slow, too slow, too slow, and there is no strong and attractive main line. Although the writing is indeed good, I don't know how many people have the patience to follow all the way, and how many people are on the edge of the cliff of keeping books or abandoning them, hey...

It's not a stallion novel, but women spend so much time writing and ink.

It gave away girls, missed girls, and had too many male partners. The other places were very good, but I couldn't stand it anymore, so I withdrew.