The Wizard Comes from Afar

The story is good, but I can no longer accept the protagonist's unscrupulousness. He is becoming more and more like a "villain" and will not hesitate to kill irrelevant people to achieve his goals.

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It's too frustrating for a wizard who has mastered violence to be driven around by the helpless church and nobles.

You can fight one against ten. Even if you can't, you can still fight. Even if you can't, you can assassinate. Poison and curse Even elemental mages can do it. Multiple people can fly and attack at night. I won't say anything else. I just want to say what ordinary people have in this book. Do you have extraordinary blood power? No? Is there magic? I haven't seen it. In this way, what can Jintong people do to ride on the heads of people with extraordinary power?

I have a bold idea. The author wants to collect it and get monthly tickets. So can we make the author dress up as a woman? (?1?7?1?1Ω?1?1?1?7)

This book felt a bit like a wizard when I first started reading it. The closer you get to the back, the better it feels. What is being staged is a palace drama. If you feel aggrieved after reading this book, please raise your paws.

First of all, the advantage of this book is that the power system and writing method are quite unique, and it feels eye-catching. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. In terms of world view setting, wizards have extraordinary power and can use magic attacks. However, in the eyes of ordinary people, their status is not as good as that of knights. Their strength is 50-50 equal to that of knights. Even a knight can threaten the wizard in person. Why? Besides physical strength, what else does a knight have? There is also a church that is awesome and boastful. It is said that such a church has no magic and no army. How can it show off its power in front of wizards? Are you still so powerful in front of the Duke? Can you win people's hearts just by relying on doctrine? If you don't understand this, let me give you an example: Wizards = martial arts masters, nobles = government, and churches = Confucianism. Let me ask, when the government and Confucianism do not have their own high-end martial arts, should they have a better attitude towards powerful martial arts masters? Is the status of a martial arts master very high?

Very nice! Really good! I like the author's narrative technique very much. It can be seen that the author is a very thoughtful person. The more I read, the more resonance I have. I hope the author can continue writing. I am looking forward to the subsequent development of the story. Thanks for your hard work!

Not many people want to see how you practice witchcraft in another world. The setting is just a carrier, the plot is the core. Of course, if it's just for fun, just pretend I didn't say it.

There is no logic, and it is very ink-stained. I don't know what the central idea you are expressing is! It's so ambiguous! And what kind of Holy Cross is inside? What kind of toy is that? It has never been expressed! Is he a church of God? Or is it a national belief? Or something? Aren't you mainly writing about wizards? Why does it feel like it has nothing to do with wizards? It feels like "junk". Although I may not be able to write it, I have read quite a few novels, and I really don't have that sense of immersion! It feels like a running account with constant writing! It's boring to watch!