Longevity Begins with Hong Kong Tv Series
About This Novel
Lu Wenyao traveled to the Hong Kong comprehensive world that incorporates many movies. Formed a partner with the famous mental patient Leon. "Although I sometimes speak outright and behave differently from ordinary people, I am really not mentally ill." Looking at the staff of Chongguang Mental Hospital in front of him, Lu Wenyao decided to tell them the truth. "Ah Yao, stop talking nonsense, that's what I told them before I went in." "Come in quickly, the food in the mental hospital is still very good." Lu Wenyao: ........ This food of yours is very good. Do you mean shredded bean curd, watermelon, and steamed orange with black bean? This is a story that begins with exorcising evil and finally embarks on the road to immortality.
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Official(5)Scraped 24d ago
Well written
It's well written, but I have a suggestion. It's obvious that conflict only arises when you compete with the bosses for the position of god, and the most powerful bosses don't care at all because they can open up countless worlds. If the world exists, they have countless benefits. Even if the world is gone, they can also open it up again. Moreover, immortals are more powerful than gods. Gods have many restrictions. Except for the innate gods, other gods have many restrictions.
Life and death all depend on the system
The protagonist has no time to develop at all. Life and death are controlled by the system.
Be more rigorous
I hope the author can be more rigorous! ! I just read the beginning and felt that the author's writing was a bit random! Where did the street fighting moves come from? Where does the proficiency come from? No need to grade everything! To put it bluntly, street fighting is to use whatever is nearby, and then hit the opponent in various ways! Take a bench, take a brick, take an iron water pipe, blast you, do you care about this move? You can use these whether you are familiar with them or not! It's better to go off the streets and turn it into a martial art!
It's very average. I was originally looking forward to it, but it was very boring and made me feel sleepy easily! Can such a novel be good?
The book is good
The book is good, but there are too few. Please do your best, author.
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Community(0)
Official(5)Scraped 24d ago
Well written
It's well written, but I have a suggestion. It's obvious that conflict only arises when you compete with the bosses for the position of god, and the most powerful bosses don't care at all because they can open up countless worlds. If the world exists, they have countless benefits. Even if the world is gone, they can also open it up again. Moreover, immortals are more powerful than gods. Gods have many restrictions. Except for the innate gods, other gods have many restrictions.
Life and death all depend on the system
The protagonist has no time to develop at all. Life and death are controlled by the system.
Be more rigorous
I hope the author can be more rigorous! ! I just read the beginning and felt that the author's writing was a bit random! Where did the street fighting moves come from? Where does the proficiency come from? No need to grade everything! To put it bluntly, street fighting is to use whatever is nearby, and then hit the opponent in various ways! Take a bench, take a brick, take an iron water pipe, blast you, do you care about this move? You can use these whether you are familiar with them or not! It's better to go off the streets and turn it into a martial art!
It's very average. I was originally looking forward to it, but it was very boring and made me feel sleepy easily! Can such a novel be good?
The book is good
The book is good, but there are too few. Please do your best, author.
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