Konoha's Black Death
by Yang
About This Novel
Byakuya was reborn into the world of Naruto with his Zanpakutō, receiving bonuses from the Shinigami's abilities. Byakuya, who had mastered the alternative power, found that the ninja world seemed to have become different. "Shoot him! Gunslinger!" "Sit in the frosty sky! Hyōrinmaru!" "Break it apart! Kyouka Suigetsu!"... "Run quickly! The Black Death is coming! It says we can abandon the mission and retreat!" (Fan group: 375279554)
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By the way, is the heroine Orochimaru? 😏😏😏
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Does the author consider women's clothing? Ohhh this is a big camp! We have countless talented people! Think about it>_<￤￤￤
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It's better to maximize one or two powers, and don't write too many abilities. For example, if you use the magic gun to its extreme, how many people do you think can stop it? Another example is that there was a previous novel that was also written by a Naruto fan. There was no blood lineage limit in it? Just a Flying Thunder God, of course there are extensions to this, such as printing marks into the air. Appearing wherever you want is an exaggeration. But it feels reasonable and reasonable, the halo of the protagonist. For example, I have seen a piece of One Piece fic before, where a pirate traveled through the world with his corpse veins, and then combined with One Piece's abnormal physical strength and weaponization, he was simply invincible in close combat. Of course, there is also bloodstain disease. The main reason is to prevent the protagonist from being too strong and having no weaknesses. Furthermore, there is also a novel that also takes the world of Zanpakutō Pirates into account, and a sword is unlocked in a dozen chapters. Before the true power of the knife could be exerted, he would use something else. Do you think this novel is good?
The previous writings are all good, but the team formation is a bit uncomfortable to watch. The others are two men and one woman. The protagonist pair of two women and one man is not very good. Even if it is a harem, it should not be written like this. Moreover, the character of Swift is too strong and I don't like it very much. Besides, how can someone like Naruto use Death's move? How could this happen since he was neither reborn nor traveled through time? I don't feel very good. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. After all, everyone is different. It may not look good to me, but it looks good to others. This is human perspective. I said, this is just my personal opinion.
Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you (^_^)a
Hope to add more
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I don't know if it's good or not, so I'll give it a good review first.
I want to read it but I am afraid that the author will suddenly stop writing... I am so afraid of this
Even if the author doesn't write about something, he still wants to tell us, okay?
Are you writing something funny?
Just do the task when you do it, so do you love looking at other people's faces? Are you familiar with it? I have done this task a dozen times. Do you write children's novels? Look at the people who are talking about me below, and see what they are talking about
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Official(34)Scraped 25d ago
Ask a question.
By the way, is the heroine Orochimaru? 😏😏😏
Build your own sign-in building...
It feels so deserted... Friends who have been reading books should come and sign in occasionally... I want to see how many people are reading my book...
bold idea
Does the author consider women's clothing? Ohhh this is a big camp! We have countless talented people! Think about it>_<￤￤￤
personal thoughts
It's better to maximize one or two powers, and don't write too many abilities. For example, if you use the magic gun to its extreme, how many people do you think can stop it? Another example is that there was a previous novel that was also written by a Naruto fan. There was no blood lineage limit in it? Just a Flying Thunder God, of course there are extensions to this, such as printing marks into the air. Appearing wherever you want is an exaggeration. But it feels reasonable and reasonable, the halo of the protagonist. For example, I have seen a piece of One Piece fic before, where a pirate traveled through the world with his corpse veins, and then combined with One Piece's abnormal physical strength and weaponization, he was simply invincible in close combat. Of course, there is also bloodstain disease. The main reason is to prevent the protagonist from being too strong and having no weaknesses. Furthermore, there is also a novel that also takes the world of Zanpakutō Pirates into account, and a sword is unlocked in a dozen chapters. Before the true power of the knife could be exerted, he would use something else. Do you think this novel is good?
The previous writings are all good, but the team formation is a bit uncomfortable to watch. The others are two men and one woman. The protagonist pair of two women and one man is not very good. Even if it is a harem, it should not be written like this. Moreover, the character of Swift is too strong and I don't like it very much. Besides, how can someone like Naruto use Death's move? How could this happen since he was neither reborn nor traveled through time? I don't feel very good. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. After all, everyone is different. It may not look good to me, but it looks good to others. This is human perspective. I said, this is just my personal opinion.
Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you (^_^)a
Hope to add more
. . . . . . . . . . . .
I don't know if it's good or not, so I'll give it a good review first.
I want to read it but I am afraid that the author will suddenly stop writing... I am so afraid of this
Even if the author doesn't write about something, he still wants to tell us, okay?
Are you writing something funny?
Just do the task when you do it, so do you love looking at other people's faces? Are you familiar with it? I have done this task a dozen times. Do you write children's novels? Look at the people who are talking about me below, and see what they are talking about
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