Hogwarts Sequence Potions

It was originally a very good subject. You pull it here and there, but it's useless. All in the water. No wonder no one has read more than a hundred photos.

The subject matter is okay, but the writing is useless

Then Ron, I feel so disgusting, kill me.

The subject matter is really good, and the writing is messy. A single mother raises two children, and there is an elf at home. No matter how long this single mother stays, she will exchange gold galleons for money. What the hell is she exchanged for antiques for money? She has been cheated more than once? The protagonist is young and doesn't want to be exposed without warning. Are house elves dead? Since he admits that he is the hostess, he will take care of the protagonist's mother. At worst, he will remind you how to get food and how to exchange money, instead of not caring about anything. The protagonist is even more sb. A time traveler still knows what world he is in. His father is dead, and he is still a child. He doesn't need to care about anything or do anything. Then what is the protagonist still doing after traveling through time? Why is he a time traveler? You can read half a page of the books left by your father in one day. How many can you read in ten years? When I started to go to school, I thought about it. It was not that I thought of how dangerous it was, but that my sister was a squib. Then the question came. Your sister was not old enough yet. How did you know she was a squib? All kinds of bullshit.

Mental pollution, pure mental pollution. Why are there such SB novels?

No matter how good the writing is, at least the low-scoring book reviews were not deleted.

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on!

It's a good subject matter, but you wrote it like this. Your writing style is really unjustifiable, and many settings are very flawed. I can understand that you passed on the formula, but there is no need to deliberately say anything, and there should be no side effects. At least you should explain it clearly. It is very confusing after writing so much nonsense.

Brother, although your writing skills are not good, why didn't you write about the subject matter when it was rare? There are only two books to read on QQ

Don't you need to act the role? ? ? ? ? ?