Hogwarts: I Became the Third Generation Dark Lord

Let me state in advance that I have read Chapter 155, but I can't stand it anymore. First of all, I am interested in relatively new themes, and this book is good in this regard. Most of the characterization is pretty good too... Except for the plot-related "Rock Pie" twist As the main plot force, the Wizard Party is like a group of idiots, including but not limited to teaching black magic to the protagonist when he has no magic foundation, brainstorming on the protagonist and executing the "protagonist's will" without the protagonist knowing. What's even more fatal is that I don't see any reason why they are willing to return the protagonist. I think the name Grindelwald alone may be protected by some people, but coming back is definitely not enough. It should be more about lofty goals and ideals. At least the protagonist I saw did not have the great ideals and goals of becoming their leader. The group of people brought out by Gellert have a clear goal, rather than shouting slogans such as "for the greater good." In my opinion, this sentence is a motto and should not be a goal. The reason for Gellert's establishment of the Wizarding Party was his prophecy. World War II, tanks, airplanes, and nuclear bombs saw ordinary people rise while wizards stagnated. Orianna's death in his youth made him distrust Muggles. For him, Muggles' overtaking development was detrimental to wizards, but it was an opportunity for wizards. Therefore, he wanted to take the lead, break the law of secrecy, establish a regime of wizard supremacy, and then let technology help wizards develop (for the greater good). The protagonist's wizard party... Is very subtle, I don't know how to describe it... A strange organization formed by other people's brainstorming and imagination, a dark wizard organization that relies on coercing others to join. His advantages disappeared, his goals disappeared, and he became an empty shell who could only shout slogans. This is what I felt after reading Chapter 155. I couldn't stand it any longer. I don't know what I was reading or what the protagonist's goal was. The plot was a bit stiff, like I was chewing on Hagrid's rock cake (for the novelty of the subject, I just chewed it) Just wait a few days and continue reading... Sigh~ (Beep a few words quietly, I feel the author can write better, come on) The above are just my personal thoughts and one-sided opinions. I am open to discussion. Please avoid trolls (I have a fragile heart and cannot see it).

The introduction of this book and what the author wanted to express really attracted me, but during the reading process, I could not see the elegance displayed by the protagonist. Instead, he seemed to be claptrap like a clown. And there is a problem in the book that everyone's surnames have disappeared, and others are directly called first name + Mr. Or Ms. If you were Li Hua, I would call you Mr. Li instead of Mr. Hua. In all the conversations, it seemed too awkward. Just write this much. I also hope that the author can write better and better.

I've read a lot of Harry Potter fans, but their common problem is that they know they are weak but don't actively learn magic to strengthen their strength. If you traveled through the past, wouldn't you first learn magic that can protect yourself? After looking at more than thirty pictures, I couldn't get a single protective magic.

Grindelwald's former subordinates were ignorant of the protagonist and kept making their own jokes. There are also some settings. The protagonist just awakens his magic power and wants him to learn the Unforgivable Curse. The magic power is not enough. Those people can't be so stupid. The protagonist seems to have no surname. He doesn't add his surname every time he introduces himself. He still feels that he is elegant. In foreign countries, in terms of address, only when there is a certain foundation of friendship, the first name is used. Otherwise, it is followed by the surname + Mr. Or Miss. Generally speaking, it is just so so.

The setting written by the author is not in line with daily life. If you want to write Harry Potter in a relaxed and everyday way, you should choose a protagonist who is born as a Muggle. Since you want the protagonist to be named Grindelwald (shouldn't such a person be in the Snake Yard), and there are people from the Wiccan Party around him, then shouldn't the protagonist's character be a relatively smart person with a strong pursuit of magical power? The plot should mainly focus on how the protagonist improves his magic level through learning, how he accumulates power step by step through his own strength and wisdom (rather than relying on intelligence, threats and intimidation to grow his power), and finally solves the problem between wizard society and Muggle society, and rescues the first generation of the Dark Lord. (Just to build a career)

The worst Grindelwald

Water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience water experience

Halfway through, does this Hermione want to be given to Malfoy? Even if Hermione is not the heroine, don't write that she is having an affair with Malfoy. They are not an official match.

I just finished reading the new update, and I was notified that it is finished. This book is quite to my liking. It's a pity that it ends like this.

The author uses the popular routines very skillfully. I look forward to the next work.