Weird World

It's not that the novel is bad, it just felt awkward to me, but the fact that the novel itself brings this feeling to readers already speaks for itself. For example, just talking about the character of the protagonist, although he is only 12 years old, as the saying goes, the children of the poor have become masters early. In real life, those in the early years have already gone to junior high school, and some of them are more mature mentally. What's more, in such a weird environment, the atmosphere all year round is... The influence of the people around him should make him have a mature mind that is different from the 12-year-old modern people. However, after experiencing so many tests and cruel realities, he still has no obvious growth. If this is to suppress first and then improve, it still needs to be studied. After all, suppressing is still too deliberate. Overall, this book is uncomfortable to read, not just because some of the actions are too frequent and so deliberately unflattering. Since I want to write a strange novel, I hope the author will give more thought to the character of the characters. Otherwise, it would be like pulling the skin of a tiger. You can learn from the character of the mysteriously resurrected protagonist. After all, you are the author and you write novels so that people will read them. The above are some suggestions for you, but to be fair, essay pens are still fine. I still hope that the author will show you some changes in the following articles, and hope to continue working hard💪

I was wearing the earl's soft armor, but I didn't know how to put it on before practicing. I was very confused. A fierce ghost could enter the inner city twice silently. Is the county really such a weakling? The protagonist goes to the town and the town is destroyed. When he goes to the county and the city is destroyed, is there really nothing left to write? Also, the protagonist has been flirting with women several times, and the sachet on his chest is really blind and unresponsive? The even more ridiculous plot is 183. First, the two of them are naked, and then the protagonist becomes thinner and becomes more handsome, which is ridiculous. Let's look at the plot later on where the protagonist joins the sect. Isn't this just a fantasy routine wrapped in a weird skin?

The subject matter is quite good. I also like to read supernatural stories, but the protagonist is really too poisonous. He has a dark supernatural background and gives people the feeling of an urban young man.

The weird part at the beginning is well written, I hope it won't collapse later. I give you the recommendation vote.

Personally I think the writing is good😘, but I feel that the horror plot is not strong enough and the horror atmosphere is a bit lacking.

The book is quite good, but there are too few updates. I can't get enough of it. Please update it. Finally, I recommend this book. It's really good.

I prefer this kind of subject matter. I thought it was well written at the beginning.

Now we have something to save mankind

When a person dies, he becomes a ghost, good guy

It's a very interesting novel, don't let the bad reviews put you off reading it.