
Become the Dark Night Wind Lord from Devouring
About This Novel
The intersection of fate, Can it create brilliant sparks? A modern man travels to a world that swallows the stars Can he reach the top of the universe with his own efforts? My name is Chen Feng, and here is my story... A pure martial artist would not steal Luo Feng's opportunity. Take Luo Feng to pretend to fight monsters. Created by newcomers, they continue to make progress and present readers with an extraordinary star-devouring sky~
What Readers Think
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Official(36)Scraped 12d ago
What about the system? Does the author not read comments? So many readers ask you? Did the system not finish loading until you stopped updating it? Then what you wrote at the beginning of this article is not about taking off your pants and spanking. I'll give you 4 stars first, and I'll give you one more star after the system is loaded.
Generally speaking, there are some inexplicable plots, and the double quotation marks are seriously wrong.
You know what's the most embarrassing thing?
Tuma sent the revised chapter content to the class group... I was speechless.
The punctuation marks are so messed up that it gives me a headache.
Isn't this a system document? What about the system? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
The update has finally started, will it be completed?
The whole process is unsystematic, each chapter is more toxic than the next.
Punctuation issues
Since I am a newbie, I am not very good at using punctuation marks. Later chapters have been corrected, and earlier chapters will be gradually revised. Thank you for your support, I'm sorry.
It's extremely poisonous. Keep poisoning. Keep poisoning. Either you don't want the heroine, or you get the best one.
How many times have you been fed poison? Shennong died long ago
The opening timeline is completely wrong and a mess.
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Community(0)
Official(36)Scraped 12d ago
What about the system? Does the author not read comments? So many readers ask you? Did the system not finish loading until you stopped updating it? Then what you wrote at the beginning of this article is not about taking off your pants and spanking. I'll give you 4 stars first, and I'll give you one more star after the system is loaded.
Generally speaking, there are some inexplicable plots, and the double quotation marks are seriously wrong.
You know what's the most embarrassing thing?
Tuma sent the revised chapter content to the class group... I was speechless.
The punctuation marks are so messed up that it gives me a headache.
Isn't this a system document? What about the system? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
The update has finally started, will it be completed?
The whole process is unsystematic, each chapter is more toxic than the next.
Punctuation issues
Since I am a newbie, I am not very good at using punctuation marks. Later chapters have been corrected, and earlier chapters will be gradually revised. Thank you for your support, I'm sorry.
It's extremely poisonous. Keep poisoning. Keep poisoning. Either you don't want the heroine, or you get the best one.
How many times have you been fed poison? Shennong died long ago
The opening timeline is completely wrong and a mess.









