The Witcher: Beginning to Scam the Demon God

But a sentence that juxtaposes knights and wizards will become a bad book. The reason why western fantasy must be written about wizards is because only wizards have a fantasy system. The knight training system is too weak to use, so as long as knights and wizards are juxtaposed, it will be a bad fantasy book. Sure enough, after about a hundred chapters, it has become a double bad book mode with a stallion surrounded by various witches and a bad book and an invincible cool book!

I don't know if the author did it on purpose or if he just didn't learn from it. As soon as it came up, a bunch of settings were thrown out for me to look at. The story progresses very slowly. There are a lot of flaws and the world view is unclear. Why are there rubber gloves in the magical world? Others can give readers a certain impression of the world in just two or three chapters. Another question is, is the protagonist alone? After seven chapters, the protagonist has not even met the heroine, male protagonist or follower, and there is not even a talking "pet". Will the next chapter be about the male protagonist delving into magic and inner monologue alone? That would be so boring!

The protagonist's legendary witchcraft should not be taken from fairy tales. After all, it is a story from the Middle Ages and Renaissance, which cannot compare with modern imagination. Come up with a few modern stories, such as the protagonist who will travel to a mobile base in the future. Then get Howl's Moving Castle (spaceship version). If you feel that witchcraft is not rich enough, then come to Pawn Shop No. 8. The upper limit of your soldiers is too low. Write a Saint Seiya and become Athena yourself. The story of a supermodel cannot form witchcraft, so focus on the functionality and versatility of the story.

It's time to read the latest chapter. The author's power level, wizard and knight professions are very different from the traditional wizard writing form in the book, so he has some choices for readers, but the content of the book is still very interesting. Let me talk about some complaints about the protagonist. 1. The protagonist can plunder the alien gods unscrupulously. When it comes to upgrading the high-level wizard, the things he has are a bit messy and unorganized, such as a few familiars, glass, mice, the octopus, the dragon man, the butler, the witch, and the mithril construct. Then there are the means, the great sword ghost, the privileged magic, the magic ray, and the legendary wizard story means. There are too many of these things, and the author can't sort them out. Many things are in his hands but he does not use them to his advantage. If it is to be effective, the author might as well stop and sort it out, otherwise it will be uncomfortable to watch. All the above-mentioned potentials are great, but the author did not let them play their role, so it is very shameful to waste them. 2. The protagonist traveled through time and has never met his mother. Where does the emotion come from? He wants revenge and wants to destroy the empire. Is this a normal person? Especially the enemy is very powerful. The unreasonable emotional hatred (emperor) is very dramatic. The protagonist can develop to the point of being invincible, and then turn his palm to kill the enemy. This is only logical. You can't just find troubles and make enemies for yourself when you are still weak. This is not in line with modern people's thinking. Make a play. 3. When writing a novel, don't just frame it. You have to inject flesh and blood, otherwise you won't be able to read it. You don't write what the readers want to read, but you insist on urging them here and there to keep writing. The author is in a terrible situation. Didn't you find that the plot content of trading with the evil god after you become a high wizard is far less attractive to readers than the wizard's apprentice and the trade with the great wizard? Readers are detached. If you don't handle what you have in hand well, you will only know that I want this and I want that. I have a great future in my hands and I just won't do it. If I don't fully understand it, I will still want it. This doesn't work, there is only a framework, no bones and no flesh, how can I write a novel?

Damn it, who deleted the comments? Some of the comments I saw earlier that said the work was poor are gone. I'd like to give you a high score to ensure your comments.

Not all brainless cool articles are, eh🤔, just like the diary of a junior high school classmate. I dare to write, but the logic jumps too much and the thinking is too single. Anyway, everyone else is just thinking about things, and only the protagonist has a brain and is not sound yet😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐

Damn it, the previous 50 or so pictures have been about the explosive soldier style, and suddenly I have to go the single soldier route. There is also the relationship between the protagonist and his family, and the inexplicable handling of this character.

I just found your book today when I was looking for books. I thought you had given up on it a long time ago. You've been off for a long time. I thought it was over. 😘

Wizard novels. I don't read this type of novels anymore. The new wizard novels are not good now. I have deleted them from my bookshelf.

The book is okay, but there are too few. I hope the author can be a tentacle monster like an eagle.