Traveling at the Same Time, Creating the Door of Truth

Many of the protagonist's choices or the author's key settings arouse readers' doubts, and then the author acts like he is wrong to the readers. What good content can we expect from this? Let's leave early. Just to talk about a few points in the early chapters, the author used the mouth of the protagonist of a certain world to say that he and other protagonists are similar flowers. This is fundamentally wrong in concept. The relationship between "a homologous person from another world formed by the splitting of souls" is more similar to "others and me", and is quite different from "similar flowers". I can fool you if you say it's him, but it won't work for similar flowers. Otherwise, why is this type called the same-travel flow, instead of the Daluo Convergence Timeline flow or the salvation mainstream? The second point is that even if the space does not share abilities, talents or physiques, it does not share memories. Memory is the key to unifying the entire protagonist group. Otherwise, whenever someone goes dark or harbors evil intentions, the protagonist group will have divergent thoughts. Look at the protagonist of the dragon clan. He has been in bad shape after traveling for more than ten years. He is obviously mentally defective. How can we guarantee that the protagonist in another world will not become ambitious and become a person like Kang? The third point is that the protagonist of the Dragon Clan is an ordinary network administrator, and his first strategy for pursuing the path of alchemy technology is to engage in food delivery. How many years has it been? Can supporting Internet applications support takeout? So where did the hundreds of millions of start-up funds burned by soliciting takeaway customers come from?

Your City of Disaster is also unreasonable. The City of Disaster is still sealed. What is exposed to the outside world is only the leaked pollution and part of the source material, but the main body is still sealed. Really, there are many problems with the mystery. The mystery part is full of poisonous points. The system of mystery is very rigorous. If you want to write a mystery, I suggest you go back and read the original work. Dragon Clan is not finished yet, and there are still many holes that have not been filled in. You just need to write it in a reasonable way, right? But Mystery has strict logic and system. If you write it wrong, it will look awkward, right? So I suggest you go back and read the original work.

Everything in this novel is the author's second creation or made up by himself. It's really messy. It's unreasonable to catch up in many places. I can only say that he wrote it for himself. .

Why does Zhetian have so many holy lands in Beidou? Part of it is due to the settings of the earlier novels, but you said why the emperor doesn't occupy half of the universe. On the one hand, the holy lands were established because of the emperor. The emperor is not a tool of the holy land.

If you ask me, it's just a case of literary youth. You've come out of the mysterious space, and you're still thinking about sharing memories? Is it you? Come on, you are in a different world fantasy, and gods have come out, why are you still considering this? Every now and then, ah, my path to becoming a saint, ah, I have an epiphany. It feels great when you write it yourself. Do you read it yourself after you write it? In real life, you read some books and get addicted to them, but don't you go out and see real life? Go out and see more of life, and let the sun shine in your heart. It feels like your thoughts and personality are a little cold. Get some sunshine!

The part about Dragon Clan feels weird. According to the original text, even a big company can't reach you. Why do you think that as long as you nod your head, someone will know that you are a time traveler or an alien? It's normal to be a genius. As long as you don't exceed this limit, no one will pay attention to you.

It can be seen that the writing is relatively immature, but the later part is not bad. At least the outline is overall better. There is no need to add superfluous explanations in the early stage. Explaining idealistic things😓

I can only say that the style is still the same as it was five or six years ago, especially the titles. It is difficult to rely on titles to distinguish which chapters are worth reading. The overall pace is very big. I feel like I am losing control of my writing.

I don't know what it means. You can't even start a small business. How can you be a low-level person?

In fact, I want to say that it was a bit uncomfortable for your mysterious perspective to appear in Zhetian. When I first chased it, I was so excited that I couldn't catch it later, but you can't write it in a Ke style? ?