From the Martial Arts Sect to the Immortal Sect of Immortality

1. The content and plot are quite smooth. 2. The protagonist and the protagonist's brothers are decisive in killing. 3. When the protagonist's brothers go down the mountain or go out, they are plotted or seriously injured from time to time. The protagonist's aura saves the day every time, without affecting the potential and foundation at all. 4. After cultivating a little bit, there is no way to restrict the spread of the skills. I also judge that it will be leaked in the future. At present, I only verbally threaten to kill the masters who secretly teach the skills. 5. The sect was short of money, so it gave two-thirds of the large amount of treasure gained by fighting against bandit gangs to the poor fool to gain fame. 6. The protagonist accepts a poor apprentice from the villagers, gives him meat to eat, trains him in martial arts, and can leave at will in the future. Compared with other worlds of martial arts novels about cultivating immortals and cultivating immortals, you have to spend money to practice martial arts and cultivate immortality, and you have to make enough contributions to the sect to obtain the skills. He is so kind, and the protagonist is Wei Guangzheng.

The protagonist is not as strong as his junior brother, so it is useless to succeed. Even if he is stronger than him later, it still feels a bit awkward. Your book is really not as good as the previous books. There are so many little nuggets that I can't even finish it on Tomato, but I feel like this book's ranking on the best-seller list doesn't feel "appropriate."

Brainlessly cheating on the villain, without any logic at all. The protagonist is strong because he has a system and an immortal method. The villain emperor also has an immortal method system?

Slip away, let me laugh. I have written so many Gou Daoliu books, how can I write this? Plus the last bad book, haha. Is it okay for the first batch of junior brothers to teach the exercises after living together for so many years, but the second batch is just teaching them after just a few days? They are still just dolls. I laugh at them, but Gou, who has written so many books, didn't see any of them.

The pretentiousness is okay, but the plot, logic, and details are too long. The ultimate master is like a radish in the ground.

See Chapter 217. Abandoned Force feeding💩. The plot is bland. Small poison, big poison. I can't bear it anymore. The most important thing is the concept of time. Can it develop normally for hundreds of years? Anyway, you are a bit strong. There are enemies within ten miles. You are strong. There are enemies in Fang Yuan thousands of miles away. Anyway, you are the one who is strong. A lot of enemies are waiting for you in the southeast, northwest and northwest. The sect of cultivating immortals. Life depends on God. At most, it will take half a year. This is the most poisonous thing. This is still a cool article. This him. Horse. Of. Force feeding💩. This can be tolerated

I really rarely write reviews! But I really can't help but give a bad review! The creativity is quite interesting, but the logic and force-feeding are really disgusting! ! ! The more I write, the worse it gets! ! ! If there is no 0⭐, just give 0⭐! ! ! Disgusting🤢🤢🤢🤢

Ren Woxiao is one of the masters of writing cool novels, but this novel is no longer a cool novel. It is not satisfying at all and is a bit sadistic. I have also read many novels about power development, but they either have a big golden finger, or it takes more than ten or decades for an enemy to appear. But this novel has almost a million words written, and it is mainly about the sect of cultivating immortals. In just thirty years, I have encountered too many enemies, and the sect has not been given time to develop. I have just dealt with a wave of enemies and haven't taken a breath to develop the sect. Another enemy appears, which is really tiring to watch. I would like to call this novel the ugliest one that makes me laugh. I can tolerate the other poisonous points. However, you have only been developing a sect for more than 20 years and are about to come into contact with a thousand-year-old sect like Ziyang Island. At least it will take you several hundred years to develop! How many enemies did you encounter in just such a short time? I think Qingxiao Gate should be renamed Broom Star Gate.

This book is not good to read, the upgrade is too slow, and the emotional line is awkward. If you are a woman, you will be very loyal and like the protagonist, but the protagonist likes to fish, and it is good to be like Wenzhao Gong, who does not reject anyone who comes, but it is disgusting to like to fish and be an innocent man, and there is no sense of satisfaction, so it is not as good as the previous book.

It's still watchable in the early stages, at least the plot is smooth and doesn't skip scenes. However, there are still too many problems and bugs. One of the most annoying things is the hierarchy of the sect. Even the concept of disciples is not unified. Sometimes people without positions are counted as disciples, and sometimes those who have confiscated disciples are counted as disciples. The biggest rubbish spot, the top ten true kings, were selected six. In the end, among these six, who really needs the resources of the top ten true kings? Jiang Xia Zhao? He is the so-called "deputy sect leader" and the third junior brother of the protagonist Yun Cai, she is the so-called "Mrs. Of the Sect Master", a person whom the protagonist cultivates vigorously These people are fine. Since we count these people as disciples, it's not impossible. The most outrageous thing is, Xue Jin, he is the master of the training hall, should he be counted among the top ten true kings? ? ? The description of the True Lord is that his status is equal to that of the Hall Master. Does he need to be equal? ? ? Also, what I found very strange from the beginning is that the description of the training hall seems to be that only the people in the training hall need to go down the mountain to practice? Other disciples don't need it? There are also restrictions on the number of people in each hall, and the structure of the sect is chaotic, but these do not greatly affect the plot. There are also many, many bugs, such as spiritual roots, qualifications, etc. For example, Suzaku blood can actually improve qualifications. These so-called auspicious signs are almost equivalent to beasts in the Yangyuan realm. Does it really have such a powerful effect? And still in this declining position? If there was such a thing in this place, it would have been turned into a pen for livestock. Are you still waiting for the protagonist to discover it? Pure inconsistency! Unless there are only Kyushu and the North in this world, and there are no outside maps, it is only reasonable to count outside maps as other worlds. In short, the more I read, the worse I feel. There are more and more bugs, and my patience is getting less and less. I am not far away from abandoning the book. I don't know if I can continue to read the 400 chapters.