
Longevity Begins with Raising an Apprentice
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Chen Ye traveled through time and became a legendary figure in the Dark Fairy Tale game. According to legend, he was a medicine farmer who taught two world-famous fairies. The eldest disciple Lu Zhiwei is the most righteous fairy in the world. The young apprentice Xu Qingjun is a demonic witch who does all kinds of evil. ... Looking at the two shivering little girls curled up in a ball. Chen Ye discovered that he had traveled five hundred years in advance. What does what happens five hundred years later have to do with him? He is just an ordinary old man in the world of cultivation. He just wants to spend the rest of his life peacefully with a proficiency panel... And raise his two disciples by the way.
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Official(78)Scraped 2d ago
Cultivation of immortals was written the same as that of mortals. At first I thought that all the people were cultivating immortals, and they had to spend spiritual gold to buy clothes. Moreover, you don't have to be a bad person, you can also be a good person. But what is it written about? It is written about the upbringing of a Loli uncle, and the story about the world of cultivating immortals is the same as that of urban female videos.
It was my first time to come into contact with online novels, so I didn't have much expectations. As a result, I was immediately attracted, and members recharged just for this reason. The author is really great😯
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I particularly like this kind of writing that mixes daily life with cultivation experience. I don't feel sluggish if I have more daily life. I feel that the current kind of exciting writing that only takes a few days to build a foundation and a few months to form a pill makes me feel a little too happy and not interested. A more detailed daily life can also allow readers to feel the mental journey and emotional development of the protagonist and the group. The plot is quite old. Yue Jinghao is also thrilling. I highly recommend it. Some of the plots may be a bit strange, but the flaws are not hidden. I hope the author can continue to update. I have rarely followed an online article completely word for word. This is my first one. I hope the author will not stop updating QWQ. I really like the characters of Qingjun baby and Zhiwei baby. They are so cute. (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ノ
To be honest, it does have the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality, planting souls, planting alchemy puppets, etc., As well as the proficiency system, and this upgrade is really attractive to me; but the emotional scene is really written in a mess, and the more I watch it, the more annoying it becomes. It is really contrary to Tiangang. In fact, there is no need to write about these two apprentices at all. The protagonist's upgrade has nothing to do with the apprentices and just relies on proficiency. Really, this emotional scene is really a poisonous point. Chen Ye can fly solo.
I watched a golden-haired dumpling pop up, you, you are a bt! Disgusting 🤢
There is a problem with this book. As it is written in the front, I bring up the previous life and talk about it. The original body made a mess and I still have to say that the original body is him. To put it bluntly, the author of the parallel world occupies the author's body. Is the author still the author from the beginning?
The writing style of the novel is too exaggerated. A monk at the fourth level of Qi Refining cannot carry a few things bought in the market. In the novel, the focus is on sensationalism. Are you writing a novel about cultivating immortals or a novel about urban dads? Is this the wrong novel channel? The novel is completely different, making the world of immortals look like the mortal world, with leaky houses, children who don't have enough to eat, and glasses that are broken all over the floor.
Why is the last book missing? Don't want to continue updating?
The author wants more and faster during National Day. 20 Chapters a day is enough.
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Official(78)Scraped 2d ago
Cultivation of immortals was written the same as that of mortals. At first I thought that all the people were cultivating immortals, and they had to spend spiritual gold to buy clothes. Moreover, you don't have to be a bad person, you can also be a good person. But what is it written about? It is written about the upbringing of a Loli uncle, and the story about the world of cultivating immortals is the same as that of urban female videos.
It was my first time to come into contact with online novels, so I didn't have much expectations. As a result, I was immediately attracted, and members recharged just for this reason. The author is really great😯
Good reviews
I particularly like this kind of writing that mixes daily life with cultivation experience. I don't feel sluggish if I have more daily life. I feel that the current kind of exciting writing that only takes a few days to build a foundation and a few months to form a pill makes me feel a little too happy and not interested. A more detailed daily life can also allow readers to feel the mental journey and emotional development of the protagonist and the group. The plot is quite old. Yue Jinghao is also thrilling. I highly recommend it. Some of the plots may be a bit strange, but the flaws are not hidden. I hope the author can continue to update. I have rarely followed an online article completely word for word. This is my first one. I hope the author will not stop updating QWQ. I really like the characters of Qingjun baby and Zhiwei baby. They are so cute. (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ノ
To be honest, it does have the flavor of a mortal cultivating immortality, planting souls, planting alchemy puppets, etc., As well as the proficiency system, and this upgrade is really attractive to me; but the emotional scene is really written in a mess, and the more I watch it, the more annoying it becomes. It is really contrary to Tiangang. In fact, there is no need to write about these two apprentices at all. The protagonist's upgrade has nothing to do with the apprentices and just relies on proficiency. Really, this emotional scene is really a poisonous point. Chen Ye can fly solo.
I watched a golden-haired dumpling pop up, you, you are a bt! Disgusting 🤢
There is a problem with this book. As it is written in the front, I bring up the previous life and talk about it. The original body made a mess and I still have to say that the original body is him. To put it bluntly, the author of the parallel world occupies the author's body. Is the author still the author from the beginning?
The writing style of the novel is too exaggerated. A monk at the fourth level of Qi Refining cannot carry a few things bought in the market. In the novel, the focus is on sensationalism. Are you writing a novel about cultivating immortals or a novel about urban dads? Is this the wrong novel channel? The novel is completely different, making the world of immortals look like the mortal world, with leaky houses, children who don't have enough to eat, and glasses that are broken all over the floor.
Why is the last book missing? Don't want to continue updating?
The author wants more and faster during National Day. 20 Chapters a day is enough.
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In the apprenticeship story, the daily life of the protagonist and several female apprentices is written very delicately and movingly. The contrast between the crisis situation and the warm daily life of the apprentices is strong. It breaks through the limitations of ordinary daily articles that are easy to be boring and can arouse the readers' emotions. The Golden Finger God Rewards Diligence type can break through the upper limit of the skill.



Seedlings, cultivated by apprentices The biggest selling point of this book is the development of two young apprentices after the protagonist travels through time, one white and black, and the other a doormat. Plot summary: As a villain in his previous life, he abused his two apprentices in various ways. After traveling through time, the protagonist gradually reversed this impression and slowly cultivated his two apprentices. The author did a good job in shaping the two female apprentices, but there are many poisonous points in the description of the protagonist himself. The classic head-scratching and ridicule greatly affected the reading experience. Moreover, the proficiency panel was turned on, which suppressed the protagonist's combat power and even abused the master. It didn't get better until the latest chapter. If you like this type of apprentice training, you can take a look at Liang Cao. I've read Chapter 82 so far




The casual cultivation panel is the immortal flow. The beginning is about traveling through the book, becoming the evil master of future fairies and witches, but the world setting and plot direction are based on panel cultivation. It is still a cycle of improving proficiency, practicing, making money, and trapping evil fellow Taoists. However, with the interaction of the two apprentices, the early stage is not so monotonous, and there is also a main line to write in the later stage.














