Devil's Bible

Xu Ming's new book. Advantages: No heroine, dark style, the protagonist is a devil Disadvantages: Rather than being a demon novel, it is better described as a demon novel. The flavor of order is too strong and it does not reflect the characteristics of demons at all. Many people who read it for demons will probably be disappointed. In addition, the first commandment of the paladin body occupied by the protagonist is forgiveness, which makes the protagonist appear to be a completely good person. This is probably one of the biggest reasons why this book did so poorly. The readers who clicked into this book read it for the dark text about demons. With such a setting, many people may not want to continue reading. Maybe it's because I haven't read much of it yet, but no matter how well it is written later, this is enough to dissuade many people. The three golden chapters are not just talk. Addendum: The pace is too slow. I haven't made a breakthrough after reading almost two hundred chapters. I have no motivation to continue reading. There is no sense of excitement or excitement at all. It makes people feel like they don't want to continue reading the next chapter. It's basically enough to finish reading the table of contents. I would like to add again that the plot in the back looks better again. The forgiveness in the front has been broken. It seems that the author has also realized that this commandment is shit when it comes to writing about demons. Moreover, the plot of about 500 chapters has also sped up a bit. Finally, there is no need to jump to read it. Recently, he finally became a demon lord. Solid food before the 200th chapter, food and grass after the 300th chapter+

Reading progress: Chapter 53, evaluation: food and grass Overall, I prefer to watch it. The world, monsters and power system settings are quite good, the characters are well described, and the plot is attractive. But there is a huge shortcoming, that is, the plug-ins are too flashy. Each feature is prompted by the system to write the text once, the author explains it once in narration, and the protagonist talks to himself again. One chapter is almost passed like this (and it is still unclear), and then after a few chapters, new features are acquired and the story is diluted. It is hard to tell whether you are reading the story or the setting collection! In addition, I feel that the author has not completely come out from science fiction. The characters in the story are all Western fantasy, but the tone of some of the narrations is very science fiction. Especially in one chapter, it is very confusing to see the explanation using black box and white box. If we can make the story more concise later, increase the proportion of story, and reduce the proportion of explanation and soliloquy, then the viewing rate should be higher.

The author of "The Soul of Negri" has a new book. The god of dark literature has returned to his familiar track. It has a pure flavor and a taste of youth. Take advantage of the fact that the word count is low, so hurry up and grab a front row seat~

Ge Ge's new book is in an old style, with no heroine and an evil protagonist who will do whatever it takes to become a god. The protagonist is a strange demon, and the plug-in has obtained the divine status of the God of Commandments. I am a veteran author of the dark style. I have good skills in layout, combat, and description of multiple scenes. It is good.