Lord of the Demon Palace
by White Horse Emerges From The Mud
About This Novel
The King of the North Court of the Imperial Court and the Lord of the Demon Palace. The legendary path of a generation of Demon Palace Master. ~~~~~I am currently writing "Wu-Tang Clan", which is also about martial arts. If you are interested, you can search it.
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Official(31)Scraped 11d ago
Can you make the protagonist look a little more mature?
It's not that you act after making a decision or act out of scheming, but don't act like a fool either. Senior sister lost her mind when she was kidnapped. . What can such a person do?
This book is about sleeping and hoping not to be a stallion
Xiaoyao Pai is quite good to watch, but the only thing that makes it hard to watch is the harem, stallion, and too many women. After watching more than half of it, I really can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can see it.
Speechless.
Master of the Demon Returning Sect, are you sure this is a villain? Isn't it a kindergarten? With such an IQ, you are still a villain. I don't know how many times I have died.
realm
Could you please the author to divide the realms? I am completely confused about the strength of the characters. Is this difficult?
The writing is so bad
I think the author can stop being so long-winded, especially during the fights, and be more connotative. He can stop explaining things back and forth all the time.
Be prepared to be poisoned
This book is very poisonous. If you read this book, you can check that there are too many faults. Not only does the villain have no IQ, he also has no decency.
The two children have been missing for so long and there was no response from Huang Xiao? No matter how he is not the main character, he still has the parents' sense of anxiety. He is still not his child. There is no movement at all from Huang Xiao's side, and it does not echo the previous novels at all. There is really nothing interesting about it. I have been following Xiaoyaopa for several years, and the ending is bad. At the beginning of this novel, there is no echo of Xiaoyaopa. It is basically completely abandoned. There is really no highlight.
The subject matter is good, but I feel that there is a lack of a chivalrous character. What to write about the Lord of the Demon Palace? Looking at the title, you can tell that it is not a TV series that will be on TV. When writing a novel, you should consider the kind that the audience can see on TV, like Jianghu Qigonglu. You don't have to make so much money and develop your own snobbery. The most important thing is martial arts and chivalry, which is the true nature of martial arts novels!
Why is Jianghu Qigonglu not updated?
I haven't even finished writing "The Legend of Jianghu", but I have written a new novel.
The writing is pretty good, but it's a pity that it was abandoned halfway!
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Official(31)Scraped 11d ago
Can you make the protagonist look a little more mature?
It's not that you act after making a decision or act out of scheming, but don't act like a fool either. Senior sister lost her mind when she was kidnapped. . What can such a person do?
This book is about sleeping and hoping not to be a stallion
Xiaoyao Pai is quite good to watch, but the only thing that makes it hard to watch is the harem, stallion, and too many women. After watching more than half of it, I really can't stand it anymore. I hope the author can see it.
Speechless.
Master of the Demon Returning Sect, are you sure this is a villain? Isn't it a kindergarten? With such an IQ, you are still a villain. I don't know how many times I have died.
realm
Could you please the author to divide the realms? I am completely confused about the strength of the characters. Is this difficult?
The writing is so bad
I think the author can stop being so long-winded, especially during the fights, and be more connotative. He can stop explaining things back and forth all the time.
Be prepared to be poisoned
This book is very poisonous. If you read this book, you can check that there are too many faults. Not only does the villain have no IQ, he also has no decency.
The two children have been missing for so long and there was no response from Huang Xiao? No matter how he is not the main character, he still has the parents' sense of anxiety. He is still not his child. There is no movement at all from Huang Xiao's side, and it does not echo the previous novels at all. There is really nothing interesting about it. I have been following Xiaoyaopa for several years, and the ending is bad. At the beginning of this novel, there is no echo of Xiaoyaopa. It is basically completely abandoned. There is really no highlight.
The subject matter is good, but I feel that there is a lack of a chivalrous character. What to write about the Lord of the Demon Palace? Looking at the title, you can tell that it is not a TV series that will be on TV. When writing a novel, you should consider the kind that the audience can see on TV, like Jianghu Qigonglu. You don't have to make so much money and develop your own snobbery. The most important thing is martial arts and chivalry, which is the true nature of martial arts novels!
Why is Jianghu Qigonglu not updated?
I haven't even finished writing "The Legend of Jianghu", but I have written a new novel.
The writing is pretty good, but it's a pity that it was abandoned halfway!
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