Journey to the West: Building the Foundation of the Road from One Person

Shen Nong died, Taoist friends suddenly came in, this book is extremely poisonous

I subscribed too early and I regret it. Even if there are too many typos, the title can also be wrong. As a Taoist disciple, you can call Kun Dao Taoist nun... If you are not familiar with it, you can call them Taoist master. If you are familiar with it, you can call them Taoist friends. If you are senior, you can call them uncle or something like that. In the end, you just call them Taoist nun...

The writing is okay, but the priorities are unclear, and the protagonist's character is too accommodating. What does the family say? It's just as deliberate as not having to write it. I've already educated my clan brothers and arranged a wedding. Just write it, I haven't thought about it yet. Really, it looks pretty good at first, but the more I read later, the more I write, it's just like there's nothing written at all. I really don't know how the score is so high.

When I write about Mao, I write about Li Muxuan. He is the protagonist but he can't be written well. The plot is too long-winded.

When writing about Hammer, the early stage was all about Li Muxuan. Didn't you have anything else to write about? What a rubbish.

If nothing else is said, is the protagonist worthy of his wife Lin Wanru? Just for the thirty-six thieves, the so-called cultivation world will not decline, and it still can't withstand the nuclear bomb. It's really stupid to practice cultivation! As the saying goes, if you are poor, you can only take care of yourself; if you are prosperous, you can help the world. But helping the world must also be based on protecting yourself and your family! It's really a SB! SB of SB!

Everyone likes to bring Zhetian with them, especially the typical Taoist practice system of Journey to the West. If you follow the classic method of refining Qi and transforming Qi into God, the system of refining Qi and transforming into God is completely in conflict with Zhetian system. Zhetian needs to open up the sea of ​​suffering, and the location of the sea of ​​suffering is not in the lower Dantian, but in the abdominal muscles, it seems. Then there was the topic of eternal life. There are too many systems, and the three cannot complement each other at all. Only the immortality system and Taoist Qi refining can complement each other, because the immortality system of Shenji at that time, the physical body, magical powers, immortality, and immortality, were all based on refining essence to transform qi, and refining qi to transform into spirit. And of these two, one cultivates the upper Dantian and the other cultivates the lower Dantian. Well, it should be the middle Dantian. The Taoist Qi cultivation is Xiantian Yiqi. Then condense the five qi in the chest and open the three flowers on the top. Well, it should be repairing the dantian. According to Taoism, it should be that the lower part stores the essence, the middle part gathers the Qi, and the upper part concentrates the spirit. Therefore, the two can complement each other. The most taboo thing about astronomy is practicing any system. We must always talk about the most basic theoretical logic of spiritual practice, and we can't rely on the author's power to forcefully continue his life?

Uh, when I came last time, there were dozens to hundreds of comments. Why were so many comments deleted?

Is it too much to be apprenticed to one person? Others feel fine, but Taoist Taoist, he was a person from a thousand years ago. The protagonist only saw it in the interior scene. As a result, the protagonist said, "I want to become your disciple, and I am willing to serve you. There is a big problem."

Very good, but there are too many typos