The Journey That Begins with Orb Circle and Zeta Sublimator

🌚🌚Can you please stop here, oh, I want to hit someone

The author hasn't seen you in a while and you've written almost 800,000 words. I'll give you five stars for this. Come on! But I really have no interest in watching these, I prefer domestic ones (I am born in 2000)😫😫

Are you writing a composition, little one? 👿👿👿👿👿

Why are you so broad in the sea... Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Keep sending that expression, it's like writing an essay, I'm really speechless

It's okay. Readers of this book don't mind the small number of words in each chapter. Each chapter of this book can be read for a long time. The author plans to write a book about his own world. This is also a kind of dream. I hope the author can travel through time and become Ultraman in the future🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃

The writing is okay, but the writing skills still need to be refined. In addition, the world you travel through should be consistent with the protagonist's abilities.

Uh... This segmentation looks a bit confusing. It's best to segment it again, otherwise it will be easy to get dazzled. Then the world view does not need to be introduced all at once, otherwise it will be a bit boring. It can be introduced one by one in the plot. It's best to finish the introduction in the first few chapters or so, otherwise you'll get confused.

Wuyuzi (period, period, period, period, period). . .

写的什么鬼东西,太幼稚,章章都在水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水水Water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, water, early, eunuch, stop being disgusting 🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢🤢